bigted

Hey I think LL's album is gonna be club oriented too, they really should collaborate then! When is LL's album droppin' anyway? Does anyone here know about that?

[quote=Prince,Aug 12 2004, 03:10 PM]Also, try not to use swear words to rhyme with...[/quote] Hey I only cursed 2 times in that long song, most rappers curse 20-30 times in one verse and it ruins the flow. On Nas' album God's Son he has a song on there called "Last Real N Alive" which would have been a great single to release but he cursed too much in the 1st verse and said lines like "I borrowed from both them n----'s/ Jigga started to flow like us but hit wit "ain't no n---" where he rhymed wit the same word twice and it sounded like he forced some of them curses on that song that didn't need to be done, I only curse when I make a specific point 'cause I make all my songs like this one point I made about how rappers have been acting like prostitutes: "Who says it's just Dope for you to get ****ed The wrong way in front Of the whole country Just for some more money?" All my songs I write could be singles 'cause I try not to curse too much in my rhymes, I don't make no edited version. Hey I feel the point u made about posters replying to certain topics more than others, this shouldn't be a popularity contest. I've wrote more than 200 songs but I'm not gonna post them all here 'cause this is a JJFP fan website and when I record songs I'm gonna get them published and put them on my own website.

Hey I live in NJ, in my opinion this guy embarassed our state 'cause he's supposed to be representin' for us in the government and he didn't handle the situation the right way, there was no need for him to come out and say "hey i'm gay!" :bang:

Hey I didn't know u rapped! I like it, you should post more often man!

Hey thanks Prince for the feedback, I appreciate your advice and I'll take it under consideration when I write a song, of course when I record it I might shorten it down a lil' bit, but I'll see what I'll do. Hey that was a typo error wit workin' it, I originally wrote: "Was payin' this money worth it?/But they say hey that tight butt seems to be workin' it". Yeah I notice since I started posting more of my songs, y'all other cats are starting to post like crazy too, I guess I must inspire y'all then!

[quote=Hero1,Aug 12 2004, 07:14 PM]presenting? JJFP should be performing! [/quote] Yeah, they should perform "Switch"!

[quote=bigted,Apr 12 2004, 08:36 AM]I'm gonna give y'all a list of my all-time Top 20 Rappers It goes a little somethin' like dis: 1-2Pac 2-KRS-ONE(Boggie Down Productions) 3-JJFP 4-Run-Dmc 5-LL Cool J 6-Eric B. and Rakim 7-Public Enemy 8-Slick Rick 9-Salt-N-Pepa 10-Nas 11-Sugar Hill Gang 12-Big Daddy Kane 13-Grandmaster Flash and The Furious Five 14-Snoop Dogg 15-Ice Cube 16-Queen Latifah 17-A Tribe Called Quest 18-Busta Rhymes 19-Fugees 20-DMX Honorable Mention:Kurtis Blow and Naughty By Nature MTV Wouldn't Make A List Like That![/quote] For my 500th post I'm gonna bring back one of my favorite posts, since we're talking about our favorite rappers anyway!

Will Smith should still be known as the Fresh Prince, a lot of ol' school m.c.'s kept their rap names so he should keep his as well, since people know Will Smith as an actor, it'll be easier for people to refer to Fresh Prince as a rapper. As long as he starts droppping more albums, I don't care what he calls himself though.

Kanye is a very talented artist no question about it, but I don't list him as one of my favorites of all-time yet, it's still too early for that. But when it comes down to longevity and consistancy, these are the 5 MC's that are never gonna be questionable for. I'd put 2Pac on this list but he ain't alive anymore, but there's no doubt that he's a hip-hop immortal. Anyway here it is: 1.Big Ted(Ready to save hip-hop and take over for a new era) 2. KRS-ONE(Even if he never goes platinum again, he'll still be making albums 'till he drops) 3.Will Smith(once he quits acting, he'll prove that rapping is his #1 priority) 4.LL Cool J(he'll still take out any mc that tries to battle him, he could rip any rapper on Def Jam right now) 5.Nas(he's a hip-hop legend that has respect for the game so he won't stop)

Hey AJ, How could u put Nas in the same category as Jay-Z, Nelly, 50 Cent, and Eminem when he's miles ahead of them? :dunno: He's a legend and has put out solid LP's, a lot of people say that "Illmatic" was his only great album but I disagree with that, his new single ain't the greatest thing he ever did but it's still solid compared to what else is out right now, his new album is getting solid reviews already, he's gonna be around way longer than those other m.c.'s u mentioned.

Hey Hero1 I'm feeling that beat, it has an ol' school feel to it! :thumb:

[quote=Da Brakes,Aug 10 2004, 05:36 AM]I just used my rap name as my sign in name!! Its also my nickname as well![/quote] Me too.

Thanks for the heads up, I'll check it out!

We'll be leavin' them wit scars So they'll remember that we ain't the ones to mess wit

I enjoy it, u did very well wit your flow in this one, and it was dope that u added Ashanti on the hook, ur doing ur thing! :thumb:

It's dope! :rock:

I like that it sends a good message, when i was in high school some kids tried to get me to get high wit them since I'm a rapper they figure that's what I do, but that ain't me, the problem is too many mcs talk about getting high in their songs so that brings a bad influence to the youth, it's nice to see that you're a leader not a follower, do ya thing! :thumb:

What's up y'all I posted this verse a while ago but now I'm gonna post the full length song with that verse, the name of the song is "Dark Ages"(Of Hip-Hop) 'cause that's what it seems like right now when the game's at a stand still. [u]Verse One:[/u] Uh,Uh,hip-hop lost its head Too much pop **** That's what we gotta stop again Few wanna stop it Many performers are knocked with the gimmick Taken over from them industry heads Who just wanna bust elementary lyrics With more imagery pics Taken the place along wit filthy graphics What kind of great generation are we livin' in? When controversy outsells talent Y'all check the Billboards And where is the ill tour That happened before m.c.'s decided to kill more On record, no one's clever New generation of hip-hop is one dead blur And it's for sure That it's on the pop scene But it's not the dream The pioneers like Scott La Roc, Eaz-e, 2Pac, and Biggie would have like to see If they were still breathin' There are no ill LP's Five mics are all killed or deceased Not like when Jeff and Will were on the scene Now they're a bunch of lies fill C.D's That real cats won't buy Until you go to the camera guy With ya ass showin' for one million C.d's people'll buy Just to look at the picture on the cover But when they pop the disc In their stereos they'll wonder Was payin' this money worth it But they say hey that tight butt seems to be worth it Music is just hideously worthless Where is the reality of the sense When... Chorus: We're in the dark age Sure there's a spotlight But we're still in a dark age Where no performer can rock the mic Until the skills are displayed Nobody will pay attention what you got to rhyme 'Cause in this dark age We get blinded by the spotlight Talentless and by far a shame For me I gotta fight 'Cause I'm not tryin' to be a member of the dark age Verse Two: I can't believe how many peopele have been affected by this wreckless emotion But I got a restless devotion When I rep to mention a token Of grattitude that I have for the ol' school Sure u might say they've slipped up In your eyes they're not livin' up When comparin' them to this generation Sure they're not all flashy, but there wasn't a limitation For comin' up and creatin' These moves blueprinted for the new school But then we go abuse And use them in the wrong use For our own selfish means Not for a benefit of the team They talk about dynasty But it's just foul hype to see For them to collect what you've been workin' for And actually the fans are workin' more To get stuck on the short end To go forfeit It's just unfortunate These pros aren't idols to worship When they have no morals in them Losin' respect for themselves By selling-out is like prostitution when you're selling yourself To what everyone says and does Who says it's just Dope for you to get ****ed The wrong way in front Of the whole country Just for some more money? Where is your mind The government is also full of it Because all scandelistic Views come from there So they better not just dare Say that it's only entertainers That are out without a care None of that's true There's a limitation for what you can or can't do And sure we all go there sometimes Watchin' where you're at before you lose your mind Will show your character And I don't go to bother rappers That are tryin' hard to come with their own style I'm just bustin' at y'all that act so highly profiled That they forget that they represent The success that Grand Master Flash, LL, and Russell Simmons Started for you to get that ice on your neck 'Cause without them You wouldn't have bling-bling And if Run-Dmc wasn't hittin' “Down Wit The King” Or “Sucka M.C.'s” There wouldn't be platinum C.D's So it's better to remember where you are before you proceed 'Cause being a performer, the downfall comes with the territory And you'll get yours if you're just schemin' for fame off of controversy That's not what keepin' it real should mean [Repeat Chorus 'Til End]

Hey you made some good points in that verse, it could have been lyrically better but it was still a solid verse! :thumb: P.S.-Check out the verse that I posted a lil' while ago here on the board about the state of hip-hop, I'm gonna bring it back to the top so y'all newer members could read it.

Great job Jim, I wouldn't think that it was your 1st song you wrote if you didn't mention that! It's off the hook to see another cat represent for 'Jersey here, you're doing your thing! :thumb: :rock:

What does everyone else think of it? Keep the feedbacks comin', this song stands out as one of the more unique songs I ever wrote, so I'd really like to know what people think about it.

It's a great song, I like it when people tell a story about their lives in their songs, it just makes it have more feeling to it! :thumb:

[quote=mfuqua23,Aug 8 2004, 03:55 PM]At this site, I think they consider me the best from the states rite now[/quote] How about me? I'm doing my thing too on this board holdin' it down 4 the U.S.! You got a lot of skills too though, if there were more rappers like us here, hip-hop would be so much better. Welcome Loco, I'm feeling that song, you got a lot of talent too. Damn we got a lot of talent on this board, we really are forming a dream team here! :thumb:

What is the pace of this song gonna be?

[quote=JumpinJack AJ,Aug 6 2004, 01:50 PM]THANX!! ...but why in the world dose Will have a bra in his hand? :eek4: 1 things 4 sure...that ain't Jada's! :speechless:[/quote] Probably some horny chick threw it at him! :roll: