Loco

Dis aint Brotha Luigie, neither Da Homeboyz// Just the citizen Luis, writin for all his girls n boyz// When im bad, they help me stand up// When im alright, they celebrate wit a "Word Up"// Can't find da rhymes in dis lines

Really like it, props to you. Rhyme sheme is weird like you said, but it all rite cos' the verses are good.

I think trey has to work harder. I really like pak's verse

What I can'T stand about reggeatonis, that the drumset is always the same. But I have to say it's realy danceable.

I think Lloyd Banks is a very talented artist and I really liked his 1st album. So LL & Lloyd Banks sounds good in my ear. The only problem is 50.

you defenetly do

very good

Yeah, but i don't do nuttin if I can't give 100%

but if you can't record as loud as you want, why you record it?

thx the audio will come

:2thumbs:

don't realy like it but it's just an opinion.

The chorus is from Dax. He's a multitalent, a great singer and rapper.

Thanx

I listened to ya beats on your space and I love em. So here's my ICQ 306-852-851. Add me and we can talk about the collabo.