J-o-e

thanks fuq n prince, its coz of the beat and the way imma flow it, it will look funny reading it, but i rapped it the way i wanted to flow it, seems perfect really, i gotta get an audio up, i jus gotta get paid first Cheers J-o-e

Please Give Me Feedback ------------------------------------------------- Jealousy Starts Written By J-o-e me and you were the best who knew our love would be put to the test i loved you and all i wanted was you you came into my vowes for you just to say i do my teenage sweetheart gone in a blink of an eye from then on i swore than i just wanted to die i loved you but never got you the way i wanted and those who did, almost seemed that they flaunted my dream made me think me and you could be true who knew that would be smashed into just a few peices, leaving my heart in broken bits on the floor all you had to say is i wanted to leave, not pack up and leave the door leavin me on my own and i was scared i admit it i was afraid of me being cared you had this guy and i was to afraid i wasnt thinkin in my mind just to get laid i wanted you for your sense of humour who knew that i would say i would stay side by side if she had a tumour her guy wanted to kill me at first for whatever it was worth to kill be at my birth this is the story of broken hearts nah **** that, its the story of jealously starts Who Knew That Jealousy Would Affect Us All What Would You Do If Your Girl Would Just Fall For Another Guy Who's Paper Is Half Than Yours When Your The One Who's Selling Sold Out Tours (x2) 2002, my life ended you said please dont be offened im getting over my ex but he was treatin you like all he wanted was sex i hate guys like that, i hate lies like that i wanted you cause of your intellegence would conflict with mine when you broke my heart you was kind i hated that but i loved you for it i needed to feel fed up and just want to quit every girl i ever went out was never compared to you who knew that my love wouldnt be true you didnt and neither did i, so forget me and go for that other guy what was i supposed to say break my heart if you was mine we would never be apart that drunken night when we had the overnight discussion but i acted a fool, i woke up with a killer concussion and you hating me forever and never being the same but i was young and i didnt know how to play the game no haters in the world just love for my peoples wanna catch my next stage girl? its in naoples we can go for a drink and go for a chat ill be back the next day looking at the place you sat just an free chair, emptyiness just like my heart this is where jeaoulsy starts Who Knew That Jealousy Would Affect Us All What Would You Do If Your Girl Would Just Fall For Another Guy Who's Paper Is Half Than Yours When Your The One Who's Selling Sold Out Tours (x2) we go and get drunk and high together im your brother, me n you girl can be forever i know you feel me so why dont you show? true feelings to me, how could i ever stoop that low i was turning into an alcholic with broken dreams waking up to realisng everything isnt what it seems look high and look low, wherever i go you go wherever i see is you, please come back to me ill say i do ill commit, so girl just sit back in the days where you loved my jokes and little phrases but would leave me if i went through court cases hip hops in my blood and you cant see me for it i wana just call it quits, but will end up in crying fits quiet streets are near me now in the middle of the night just wonderin if you are alright all i meant was to be the best friend a girl could ever have in her life but dreams werent meant to come true cause your not my wife if i aint all that like your friends know just come to me and call me by joe young girls running in the street just ponderin the day will we ever meet again, my good friend, keep me happy by wiping and putting on our sons nappy think im moving to fast, im serouis think somethings wrong with me?, i aint delrouis so the days we our apart just remember that this song is when jealousy starts Who Knew That Jealousy Would Affect Us All What Would You Do If Your Girl Would Just Fall For Another Guy Who's Paper Is Half Than Yours When Your The One Who's Selling Sold Out Tours (x2) ----------------------------------------------- Thanks 4 Reading This

im savin up 2 get them, but i gotta order them on da net coz i aint got a music store in my town nemore, apart from woolworthes, but that aint gonna sell albums like Jazzy Jeff N The Fresh Prince's old school stuff

Thanks 4 dat Tim

was it the movie or soundtrack for shark tale out on the 21st or both, and for uk isit the same, not gd with no movie buissness lol switch shud be airing soon, it better be, i gotta hear a new song from will

Well imma say happy birthday 2 will coz i mite not b here 25, cud be newhere, i move alot so, ill say it now just incase

misunderstanding words is what i write u aint gonna beat me without havin a fite :touche: first i gave you props, then u pull out some tension whats wrong dawg? cant u get a pension get a life, get a wife, settle down you dont wana play wit me underground ill diss your whole family with no remorse say i quit otherwise ill be resortin to last resort, force tim how big are your lenses in your glasses on the internet all the time, watchin his life as it passes im smashin enemies quicker than mike tyson your momma sucked me off, i call her dyson tim your crazy, you cant have no baby you dont know how to do it, even if you did you would have to go on ebay just to get a bid some say ive improved others say im whack well tell me which 1 it is before you hit me back i never even dissed you in my rhymes dont call me out, get with the times yes there was a day i was once whack but that was ages ago yes there was a time i was called joe and i was known to flow but them days are gone and im straight rippin it tim vs joe, tim winnin but wait, im just flippin it theres nothing death in your trap but tell ya girl, she should stay off my lap i stick my middle finger up at you, i dont care bigted and hero1, what a pair to beat in one battle, that must count for sumden but as usual ya'll take it as nuttin, i wasnt frontin you a soft cake, you will crumble under trouble but when your being cooked, you can double so after readin the rhymes you say suck well im here in my rhymes sayin i dont give a ****

University alien, in others in american its more like a college, but college to people in the UK is different to the College in USA College in USA = University In UK College In UK = High School In USA haha

Welcome, whatsup

I duno wot it means either, its probably to be anounced, he shud kno wot his albums called, damn

Thanks 4 dis

looky looky looky, his hands are shooky when he lost all his money at the booky save your money bigted you might need responding back with your whack greed im rapping for respect and decenty coz u pissed me off, im takin ur diginity and your watch and wallet see what you got you never know whos hot and whos not but know your block otherwise you'll get shot now listen, bigted you cant have a bighead your not good enough, im rippin u into a small shread u wana **** with me, let me do it properly first thing ill be stealin ya girl, next ill be stealin ya property like cube said it "Was a good day" cause its my pay day, now u, go away your broke, im gettin the money, its so funny ok imma stop beatin around the bush and take ya honey im way ahead of my game, and pleanty to lose my pride n diginity which one shall i let go? how can i choose bigted stay off the booze, u a chump if a dog ****ed your leg, you'll probably let it hump look it you p u s s y, you dont you die why you always lie, about u being fly take a hint mother****er ive beaten u destroyed you, totally eleminated u u jus started to kiss, thank **** for that i gotta rip all these cats, i watch my back i c u suckin up to FuQ, **** u mother****er u aint scored well your rhymes hit me with somethin, im bored your rhymes dont make sense as much as mine i see a girl, i look and say **** shes fine whats so hard in doin that, sayin ratatat with a baseball bat take that mother****er u plain whack i rap about needin money, being broke and reality i got plently off time, unless he losing his insanity this fool think he can beat me, beat j-o-e and who you talkin about being discriminated ever been hated, you never been underrated i got alot of issues about you but i choose to close but i go back to where i belong and go 2 my hoes they comfort me with the comfortin i need they dont care about my money, nor they have greed soon you will be on your knees suckin my dick sayin please i dont care ya'll ill say nefin to anyone ill dis u and your friends just for fun the battles gettin tense and so are your nerves thats why your losin words, mispoken verbs a night you right this you will have to cram this is an exam, and your gonna lose coz its my scam you not gonna get a pass, even if im last imma rule you out of this league and call it a thing of the pass now bigted dont get shy, dont go red dont get embarresed you notice that i notice that my rhymes are gettin deeper your a victim of a murder, and im the griem reaper im throwing all cats out into the ocean but dont shed a tear, you cant coast an emotion your loosin and im boozin, livin my life high watch the world just fly by, but i see a drive by listen for the meanin for the words i speak look at the way a women smiles as she freaks bigted what position was you in when you was sixteen its not your fault, your mum is jus plainly a crack fiend has this battle finish, or as it just begins imma beat you anyway, im **** your realitve twins you cant beat me your in a drout you cant see me cause your out get the **** away from here you've lost the girl u wanted to get away, i tossed they call me a player and thats what i am call me infinite, call me uncle sam bitch

thats right, i dont mean to boast its j-o-e, get ready for a glass of champange to toast

lol that is funny, i duno who the judge is apart from phillip avery

i aint scared, ban em as soon as they register, wot they gonna do then, i say we get them first, do unto others as they want to do to you! lol

Likin it, the beat, what 2pac beat isit? i cant think of the song. ahhh

:ditto: tell me how it turns out, im dying dope rhyme man well done!

First off, i like the way that you made the song into a diary, personally i have never seen that done, your writing a rhyme taken from feelings from different days and i respect the way you make the flow work also, the point is taken directly because the topic i can relate to cause im 16, i liked the words you used and the lines you rhymed, one word to describe it, dope, i like reading your stuff,

Thanks

"Hey Lover" is a track, but born to reign which song or the actual song born 2 reign? i think Maybe would be a good song for Boys II Men could do for will, that would be dope

i agree wit AJ, none of em look like will

Thanks 4 dis, its dope Jazzy Jeff N Fresh Prince Old Skool Comin Bk!

u gotta understand that rap is a beauty and for me to beat you, its just my duty pac dissed biggie completely, and your biggie so who am i? im j-o-e the one whos just far to fly so why the **** do you always repeat my disses isit cause you cant think for yourself, ya girl wont give ya no kisses "Great respect for women" thats bull**** im rippin you bit by bit, flippin the script what you got to try n beat me, so GIVE UP your rhymes stick more than a ****in urine CUP your eventually gonna hit it to yourself that your loosin jus boozin, while im plain cruisin imma hit u up mother****er give me your best ill write you a little test, let your soul rest i got hero1 out of the battle and its your turn next see your rhymes are easy to understand, mine are complex yo, if ted has 5 crack rocks got robbed how many he got? now tell me how am i a hypocrite i kno im hot my main piroitie in life is to kick anybodys ass who starts but the only way ill stop is if bigteds mum farts :scared2: ill run out the house, just like a little mouse runnin from a cat, and ill admit that so stop trying to win cause you makin me laugh i said it a few times already, YOU STINK TAKE A BATH your not dissin me and ill screwin with your head so bigted from this moment on is now officaily dead dont be sad, dont be mad, just be glad that j-o-e's sayin you actually own a pad wait nah ya parents do who gonna kick you out soon get home and realise your ****s out and say be out by noon thats what love is the world of hip hop but you singin along with britney, your ****in pop you got good respect, you let your girlfriend take you shop your a pussy, a wimp a geek a computer freak, try and get what you seek it takes you 2 days to respond to one of my battles its over in a few years, buy a rolling stone magazine and geuss whos on the cover your girl says your a **** lover now please dont take me the wrong way, dont say im stupid cause im not, the number 1 romantic talker, a plain cupid its 1 on 1 now bigted, rippin you to peices get kicked outta ya house cause u cant find ya lease your deceased now, take it as a compliment take this as a small sample, a supplement,

yo your misunderstanding this battle bigted first off im not dead but im rippin you to shreds who the **** are you sayin im not going to the studio when you know you cant diss my superb flow ive beefed wit fan4 eva and now your complaining how many times can i beat you before it starts rainding bigted listen, aight your rhyming skills could be more procise as i put your head, bigted your trapped in my lyrical vice hardly any of your rhyme actually rhymed your time of a rapper is now being timed imma ruin your career jus cause your names ted imma hit you up jus like pac n leave u for dead this battle can go on for ages, i might just decompose hittin eachother wit blows, on going beef wit dope flows tell me why, bigted n hero1 are you so damn stressed with this talent i am blessed, dont say that your impressed cause i kno you are, look at my dope car pimp my ride dawgs, you know who you are your the type of dude that will sneak in the back door of a club and then as soon as someone notices, you'll be on da floor music changes lifes and lifes changes music you just gotta decide which 1 to use incase you lose it dont get so mad jus cause im better than you, dont think i cant freestyle cause i can and i do hero1 thinks hes a genoius just for runnin this site well i dare you to do 1 thing, come out for 1 night wit me you computer geek freak, look for somethin u mite seek im runnin this battle thread, go upstairs n take a leak imma **** on bigted n hero1 jus 4 dissin me when it finished your crazy, after im done your gonna feel dimished, so small in every thing, including your mind your rap vocabs suck, cause you rap so ****in kind have you ever had sex? have you ever done x you dont even know who i am, so dont disrespect when im a multi plantuim artist imma show you all that fan4eva is right, the bigger you are, the harder you fall mother****ers,

can you diss me without using mine? i dont think you can, so make your own lines bigted who are you and what are you doing cause in a few years my show will be the 1 that your viewing forget me now as the 16 yr old mc, cause im goin studio my rap skills are more eqvilent than yours although the power of my mind can capture any sense of a knowlagble sentence by your bonnie n clyde adventure, reminds me of my repentance why do i have to battle a 6ft fag with pop star labled on his forehead i break bread, i aint gonna shoot u wit lead, jus WISH u was dead so tell me one why u hatin the reason im debatin that im waitin im updatin my rap vocab while im creatin and then awaitin for your reply knowin why your gonna cry and eventually die so what if im 16 cause age aint nuttin but a number when you lose 2 me you just gonna say its a bumber i dont understand why you dont give up like a man its my plan to kick your ass just cause i can if you beat me its only gonna be by a fraction but you might quit cause u can have a allergic reation what nationality are you, are you a ****in russion cause at the end of this songs all the disses are gonna give you a concussion your mind state you cant figure out, its a state of confusion but your messin around with an illusion, so heres my conclusion bigted and hero1 the biggest queers in the universe did this **** and i dont give a **** about no curse