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jeez dude it took like 3 years 2 respond

your rhymes are far far away from bein bombs

they're soft and harmless more like drops of rain

your hardest rhyme couldnt bring any pain

no need 2 respond 2 u cuz i didnt consider that a diss

my rhymes are clean, no guns, drugs or piss

how u gonna bruise my lungs? i think you're just sore

cuz all that huffin and puffin could certainly injure yours

if you're a modern day DeVinci was that your Mona Lisa?

porque si fuera usted, yo tendría prisa

because that would fail on comparison, not a work of art at all

i don't try to be hard, no need to grab my balls

my rhymes hit u like a bird crap on your head

it's stunning, surprising and scars u 4 life

like Pep and Tajai said "what u are is what u do"

Right now u ain't doin nothin so what does that say about u?

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jeez dude it took like 3 years 2 respond

your rhymes are far far away from bein bombs

they're soft and harmless more like drops of rain

your hardest rhyme couldnt bring any pain

no need 2 respond 2 u cuz i didnt consider that a diss

my rhymes are clean, no guns, drugs or piss

how u gonna bruise my lungs? i think you're just sore

cuz all that huffin and puffin could certainly injure yours

if you're a modern day DeVinci was that your Mona Lisa?

porque si fuera usted, yo tendría prisa

because that would fail on comparison, not a work of art at all

i don't try to be hard, no need to grab my balls

my rhymes hit u like a bird crap on your head

it's stunning, surprising and scars u 4 life

like Pep and Tajai said "what u are is what u do"

Right now u ain't doin nothin so what does that say about u?

:thumb: progress is for cool people

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theres really not much u can say

coz every single rhyme, wont go away

rhymes bad and good, there always racing

u never kno u can beat me, look who im facin

its ridicilous how sh!t came to this

ive never responded violently, without a fist

always talk first then see if u can walk

if u can, then ur the type of sicko who will stalk

im sorry to interupt ur little B!tchin session

but look at the master, just take a lesson

its all ya need, to get the flow and the content

explicit or not it dont matter cause im doing this constent

i hope in a few years ill be rich and laugh at ya'll

heavy day workin, just wana chill out and play basketball

its a shame that the game aint the same its all strange

rappin isnt rappin anymore, its completlely changed

if u dont completely rip ur oppenet, u get ripped

imma get pushed over the edge, i might of flipped

but thats a matter that i have to take in my own hands

im a man and the plan aint the same, i dont understand

whats the difference between 2 lines and 20 lines?

like the difference between 20 songs and 1 good rhyme

its a mistake, i dont mean to break, your concentration

might get too excited, kicks in the penetration

call me whatever you like, coz honestly i dont care

i cant bare that all the money i earn, i have to share

its none of your problems, so why take it out on ya?

if i flow for ya? maybe do a little show for ya?

would u like it if i rap quick, rhymes so sick

times running out, and all i can hear is that tock click....

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now isten to this rhyme i bring,

all you that are just in it for the bling,

you all need to envisage,

it takes more to rap then a silly image,

will smith know's what i mean,

and even pac dident just wanna be seen,

they had meaning in every verse,

wanna make you immerse,

can 50 do that, emnem, the Game?

man if u listen to them no way your gunna stay sane,

now listen, get this down,

thebest rap is never just bout a sound

inever just image, never about howmuch you can curse,

never about how much your worth, .....

bla, bla, ...this was jsut a quick freestyle of mine( this was the first time ;)

cheers,im a new member,

great freestyles u guys have,

Rawad

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some more freestyle:

u all tryin to out rap each other,

go runnin home to ya mothers,

how long did it take you to rhyme,

man how did ya pass the time,

can nobody rap as quick as this,

eloquent, intelligent, never a miss,

will smith'd approve,

man did your rap ever make people move,

get them down,

and with a pumping bass,

nobody even cares about Nas,

cause the joints got a spark,

im about to make me mark,

the rap world aint ever gonna be the same ,

when once and 4 all I get rid of Em and the game,

just get ready, cause my ****'s about to blow,

duck, or i'll make you reep what i sow,

the commercial crap is dead,

and thank God the mak's returning cred,

back to the old school days,

when rap was not about what ya'd get paid,

how much you'd get laid

y'all lyin you probanly need to pay to get laid,

cause fifty, your as ugly as God's ever made,

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some more freestyle:

u all tryin to out rap each other,

go runnin home to ya mothers,

how long did it take you to rhyme,

man how did ya pass the time,

can nobody rap as quick as this,

eloquent, intelligent, never a miss,

will smith'd approve,

man did your rap ever make people move,

get them down,

and with a pumping bass,

nobody even cares about Nas,

cause the joints got a spark,

im about to make me mark,

the rap world aint ever gonna be the same ,

when once and 4 all I get rid of Em and the game,

just get ready, cause my ****'s about to blow,

duck, or i'll make you reep what i sow,

the commercial crap is dead,

and thank God the mak's returning cred,

back to the old school days,

when rap was not about what ya'd get paid,

how much you'd get laid

y'all lyin you probanly need to pay to get laid,

cause fifty, your as ugly as God's ever made,

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look at this, your stalling

u cant help it, but your fallin

u may not kno it, must trust me

i curse coz who hasnt cursed at me?

its simply ur raps are all the same

mine i keep sane, with an aim to shame

your an early cat, i can handle that

he dont kno bout rap, ill pin him to the mat

make him tap, why u rappin bout rappers who never heard of u

they dont even wana word out of u, ill put word on u

ok, we in a will smith forum, thats all cool

but i aint gonna tell kids, drop outta school be a fool

dont want them to have the same mistakes i did

battlin off so many haters, no money makers when i was a kid

i do agree with ur issues, but ur needed tissues

how could u misuse? for that i must abuse....

its not my fault, i start beef, break teeth

brush em off my shoulder just like a leaf....

ur rhymes are new school which mine are old

i dont care coz imma be writing the game thats told...

give me one day, imma grow the top

cant stop till i drop it like its hot,

i'd like to be known as a songwriter,

not a lyrical fighter, making my game even more tighter

understand every line, every rhyme, and every dime

go into be progressin, but its a blessin, i took it as a sign

now take yours and see who's is flawless,

every night savin up just to get that cordless

infra red micrphone...without any wires

now i feel like Prince and Bago who gets fired...

from this board of ours, no flashy cars,

just ordinary people, cant take that

then step back, j-o-e with the hat tilted back....

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Let's just begin with the obvious, Rawad,

Posting rhymes twice can't get you an award,

Disillusioned with fact that you're in the big time,

Just another passer by without any creative rhyme,

Listening to the Game is the reason why I am sane,

You can never beat Em 'cause you're walking down the wrong lane,

The future of yours will turn out just like any other,

A broken marriage without your child or its filthy mother,

No hope of a record contract is destined to be your harsh reality,

Keep whining all your life, cause Will ain't gonna show you pity.

Commercialism is much needed, you may hate it or like,

Fifty saves the rap game now, so you better take a hike,

Spare us with this nonsense about sleeping with a hooker,

I ain't gonna pay a ho 'cause my soulmate is my lover,

Resistance to temptations always keeps me going,

Let's see you make me reap 'cause I know what I'm sowing,

Just a first time poster yet you started dissing every member,

You just might slip with your ego trip, you better remember,

Make peace with you inner self and come out of this illusion,

It's about time someone realised and sent you to an institution.

Byes. :grin:

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Let's just begin with the obvious, Rawad,

Posting rhymes twice can't get you an award,

Disillusioned with fact that you're in the big time,

Just another passer by without any creative rhyme,

Listening to the Game is the reason why I am sane,

You can never beat Em 'cause you're walking down the wrong lane,

The future of yours will turn out just like any other,

A broken marriage without your child or its filthy mother,

No hope of a record contract is destined to be your harsh reality,

Keep whining all your life, cause Will ain't gonna show you pity.

Commercialism is much needed, you may hate it or like,

Fifty saves the rap game now, so you better take a hike,

Spare us with this nonsense about sleeping with a hooker,

I ain't gonna pay a ho 'cause my soulmate is my lover,

Resistance to temptations always keeps me going,

Let's see you make me reap 'cause I know what I'm sowing,

Just a first time poster yet you started dissing every member,

You just might slip with your ego trip, you better remember,

Make peace with you inner self and come out of this illusion,

It's about time someone realised and sent you to an institution.

Byes. :grin:

You guys absolutely killed me , your pretty good ,

sorry i dident introduce myself( i dident know this forum was that accessed, most forums you dont hear from people in ages).

Anyway, my names rawad and im from melbourne australia, im a huge dj jazzy jeff/will smith fan. Anyway, the reason i posted was that i really admire people who can freestyle, and I just wanted to see if i could do it, usually I suck at rhyming, (maybe it showed), i think you guys who can do it are pretty mad.

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Anyway, my names rawad and im from melbourne australia, im a huge dj jazzy jeff/will smith fan.

dude where in melbourne are you from.. I'm the creator of this site and live in melbourne..

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Hi Rawad. You were damn good for your first time freestyle, man. :2thumbs: And yeah, guys pretty much post many battle raps time to time here. :haha:

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My reply to joe and Braces up:

Please please joe and braces up,

just cause I’m a first timer dont mean i cant light it up,

im a rookie at the game,

but that dont mean I’m the same,

my rhymes have meaning,

do your rhymes get a crowd feeling,

you say im a passerby,

just another fake rapper living a lie,

but can a fake drop rhymes as quick as this,

make ya never miss,

every word, every line, every diss,

and make ya like who was this,

im sick of all the wannabes,

I wanna restore rap to what it used to be,

These are my first ever rhymes,

Ill get finer with time,

But for the moment, the present,

the benchmark, i think ive set it

P.s: i woulden't call this a freestyle case i went over it and fixed it up a bit,

and hero1 you live in Greensborough?, i lived there pretty much all my life till i was 14,

cheers

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P.s:

and hero1 you live in Greensborough?, i lived there pretty much all my life till i was 14,

cheers

well Monty actually.. but yeah..small world..its about time more australians rolled through this site..switch getting to #1 an all

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