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Dis aint Brotha Luigie, neither Da Homeboyz// Just the citizen Luis, writin for all his girls n boyz// When im bad, they help me stand up// When im alright, they celebrate wit a "Word Up"// Can't find da rhymes in dis lines

Really like it, props to you. Rhyme sheme is weird like you said, but it all rite cos' the verses are good.

I think trey has to work harder. I really like pak's verse

What I can'T stand about reggeatonis, that the drumset is always the same. But I have to say it's realy danceable.

I think Lloyd Banks is a very talented artist and I really liked his 1st album. So LL & Lloyd Banks sounds good in my ear. The only problem is 50.

you defenetly do

very good

Yeah, but i don't do nuttin if I can't give 100%

but if you can't record as loud as you want, why you record it?

thx the audio will come

:2thumbs:

don't realy like it but it's just an opinion.

The chorus is from Dax. He's a multitalent, a great singer and rapper.

Thanx

I listened to ya beats on your space and I love em. So here's my ICQ 306-852-851. Add me and we can talk about the collabo.

Well, maybe I'll be on the Emzee stage, just kickin' it wit' Casper.

Good lyrics :2thumbs: , but try to use more doublerhymes.

What do you think about the 2nd part my potna Crusoe is spittin'? The most of y'all can't understand it, but how it sounds to you?

It's about the life situation of a good friend. _______________________________________________ I take a look in the future, what i see is crossroads, dark room, I'm broke, like i've got no doe, me on a platforn, left stairs up, right stairs down, I wanna fly touch clouds, but the light get out, I think I've made it, this is fame, well I think so, is this fame, like they say it is, or I'm still broke, I feel hope, this can't be the bottom, I must be above, I feel nearness, I'm fearless, trust me it's love, All my life I've been nuttin', I just never made it, my life was unicolored, time to renovate it, it took so much time, so so hard work, I wanna be in the middle, no more suburb, I finaly did it, I think so and light get vivid, dark room, It's just me, well I'm still livin', me on a platform, left stairs up, right is nuttin', Only one question left, can I be sumthin?

It was just a joke :-)

@Luigie: I don't know what it means :kekeke: .

Thx

From the states are Papoose, Keith Murray, Jadakiss and ?Nas? comin. You'l have to be there

For Sho! Ya lines are killin' everything and ya rhymes like woah! Props Dude

@ Da Brakes: The 1st One