Silver Tiger

Guess what I'm gonna say... Hey, happy birthday! God Blessa!

So Tim, do I just have to be on Skype at the correct time and you'll invite me to a room or something? God Blessa!

Wow, I'm glad this track has gotten a thread. I listened to the track everyday before school for two years (during my junior and senior years). For a track with a theme, it is absolutely perfect. I LOVE this song. God Blessa!

Let's get this back on topic. I don't think I need to restate that if you're a fan of quality hip hop you need to get this album. I don't think I need to tell you again how dope it is. I don't think I need to remind you that this dude works with Will, one of our favorite rappers. I don't think it needs to be brought back to your attention that the support of this music is progress for the industry. Nah, you already knew all that. :1-cool: God Blessa!

I think I'm gonna join in on this one. I'm downloading Skype right now. I've got some things to say about Will's juggle of careers and I'd love to discuss Jeff's next album. Edit: I got Skype going. My username is IsntChrisL. Add me if you want, it might make things go easier. God Blessa!

Yeah, real smooth. And despite being so far away, you managed to make it sound like you were right next to eachother. Nice job! God Blessa!

Yeah, it's real nice. I like the "Oh Yeah" and "Problem Child" a lot too, but Love and War is a real hot song for me right now. God Blessa!

This is nothing new for Will but it is real dissapointing all the same. He gets mad when people stop recognizing him as a rapper but he doesn't keep his name out with a total focus on music long enough when he drops an album. God Blessa!

Yeah, I think it was wrong that none of his tracks were included in the final cut. That soundtrack got a decent amount of singles, Will's songs should have been among them. God Blessa!

18 last time I checked. God Blessa!

It's good, I like the first verse more, but they're both good. Nice job. God Blessa!

Had to give it to Silver Tiger. Hot verse. God Blessa!

Crank your headphones up, put on the blindfold and cock the gun This gon' be blind swinging, lyrical murder, and I'll call it all fun Close your eyes, don't read on, it'll only hurt worse "He said that, this, and that," clutch tight to your purse Like I'm robbin ya in an alley, you dart straight for the mace Don't worry, I'll march back at the sight of your face Tears streamin, day dreamin, hand the trophy over here I'm spittin' coast to coast to coast, you ain't even peer-to-peer You can boast the most, but I host the roast The salt in your wounds, "Joe" is what we put on toast Hit you with the truth, you the clown in the dunk-booth This is a curveball to your mouth, knocking out tooth by tooth My words create serenity, your sound brings out a sneer Open your mouth, people saying "I got a buzzing in my ear" I don't like eggs but I can fry em up right I left the chicken that had you afraid to sleep at night I'm playing harmonious rhythms, you're a basketball to the head Hint for the future: Don't eat the paint with all the lead Slap by smack, but don't fall asleep yet "Joe is full of flea's ma, we better call the vet" Like I said, keep your eyes closed, I got your rhyme hosed Stand in my way and you're likely to get bulldozed You are rubber, I am glue Whatever you say bounces off, I make it stick to you Writing skills are not your friend You the only cat that couldn't make an "S" bend I'm the freeway, I'm dashing past Even with your nosebleed, you don't flow fast Here's a nickel, buy a clue "Joe don't flow, the sky is blue" Now check the poll and use your heart "Second advantage is nothing, he got a head start!"

Good job. I liked the lyrics and the beat transitions. God Blessa!

The new songs are great. EZ Back is on the mixtape but it's only a snippet, I'm glad I can finally get the whole thing. If you haven't got the mixtape yet, get it! Well worth the ten bucks. God Blessa!

Thanks a lot everyone. I also really appreciate the call to action by Brakes and cookies lol. God Blessa!

Very nice job Jonny. I'd like to see this getting attention around other boards and sites. God Blessa!

Well, I've always loved hip hop and rapping since I first heard it in songs. I rapped to songs when I was a little kid. I started writing in elementary. I got better in high school. Right now though I'm writing in a whole new way. A better way. I'm writing so that it all comes together and flows. I'm recording songs now and I want them heard. Got no reason to stop, I love it. God Blessa!

Yeah, I really like this song too. It can get stuck in your head easy. I just hope it doesn't get played out. God Blessa!

Thanks for the positive feedback. I appreciate it. I'm working on my next song again. And once again, I'm saying it will be "What if Snails Could Blink?" I've already got the first verse on lock and this will be my first song with a hook. I'm looking forward to it. God Blessa!

how bout sumbody puttin up sum FYNNNNNe brotha's pic 4 da ladies 4 a change... how bout it guyZZZZ! LOL :lolsign: peace, cookie Yeah, I'm sure someone will get right on that. We can call the same people who got Party Starter out. :2thumbs: God Blessa!

Thanks, I said after my last song that the next one would be a funny one, I lied. I'm saying it again though, the next song will be something to smile to. God Blessa!

I finally had time to record my song. There's a story on the page. The song is something different for me, but I like it. And finally, the vocals are clear, no feedback. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=186572 There's no hook, it's just me rapping the whole way through. I don't really expect anyone other than me and the girl who fueled this song to know exactly what I'm talking about, but it helps to know that she just turned her back on me without reason. Music became my lady. Here's the lyrics: -I remember when my phone would shake 45 times in a day That’s 15 smiles to my face -Looking to the future, it would only get brighter Nowadays I’m the dude tryin’a bum ya candle-lighter -I was runnin’ till the earth shook You want my raw story? Here’s the first look -On top of the world, every day brought the love All because of this girl, now it’s gone, that’s rough, life’s tough -Had enough, brought an audience out their seats Friends gone wrong running like a track meet -Emotion as you smack me, took Hip Hop to bring back me The late-night owl, prey on the lookout for the prowl -A hunter, to those he loved, he was a gunner A runner, was crushed the feelings of the summer -A trip he had, but now he’s mad Confused and sad, to lost, a dad -Everything’s gone wrong, everything’s been changing Alone cause of some people’s rearranging -Explosions brought erosions to the life he knew Sinned before, time to pay his due -Secluded, social silence had intruded Tried to shrug it off, but the problem’s deep rooted -A little time off became a permanent thing Clenched his fist around invisible rings -A survivor, he couldn’t deny her His mind would try to fight her -The four walls held him back He couldn’t understand, his mind would rack -Self-attack, crazy thoughts sprung forth Nothing left to do but question his own worth -A drifter, desire turned to anger Through it all, became a stranger -His own best friend, in the end, was he Ready, he’d be at work on the steady -A Yeti, a legend of his own Had some demons to dethrone -Not dead yet, not exposing the red yet The Drive, just needed places to direct it -Found inside, rhythmic thoughts Music brought him back by the grace of God -Something to love, something to give him love back A painkiller for all the feelings that stacked -Perception of deception was a monster inside All for one, could uncover the secrets that they hide -The reasons that they lied, the choosing of the sides He tried, had to blow this up wide -He opened up his mind to the people he knew, the things we do Why we do them, it just threw him -Greed, deception, all a recollection, still didn’t answer his question Giving up never was suggested, mind feeling tested -Hate arrested, thoughts were vested Put a smile on but his feelings were gone -Journey’s been long, but he knows it’s a beginning Second winning, another chapter for the spinning -Pages torn, writes a song Writes till dawn, he records in the morn -Process, so enveloped he could never stop this Makes the most, of free days to boast -A Hip Hop host, forsaken by most The star of the toast, the star of the roast -He asks what’s left, commits the theft He steals the hearts, it’s just the start -Destroys the charts, creates the bonds He makes the songs, he makes the songs Please tell me what you think, I appreciate all the feedback I can get! God Blessa!

Nice job Vipa! I like it. God Blessa!

Cool idea. But the link to mine isn't right. Here's the right link: http://www.jazzyjefffreshprince.com/forum/...ic=1154&hl=Life God Blessa!