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Fresh-Ta-Def

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  1. I like it really, I love these emotional tracks. Big up's to eminem on this alot bettet then material on Encore
  2. Ok I did some I Will do more an u can check em out. I'll do more an up em..... only one i really like is the first one.
  3. I like I like homie I'll talk to hope foh u
  4. me too I'mma rap to it an upload the finished
  5. haha word u on it right now man?
  6. OMG haha, man this is sooo okward lol i feel weird listening to this homie
  7. Well chorus's are an essiential part of the song so I try
  8. ok.... Guess whos here, haha!!!!!!! alright Well I'mma be very busy for 2-3 days so if u can wait that long I'll have it "Professionally" done lol! anyways gimmie a bit I'll have a nice cover for you.
  9. props man thanks for the feed Common people hit me up
  10. lol yeh dat was a bad immature mover eh?
  11. I did an audio but I can't find it this is like 1 year old Verse 1: Baby Lemme Be Mario "You Should Let Me Love You"/ I'll Do Everything To, Be In Your Arms/ Spend Some Time An Keep You From Harm/ I'll Make You Feel Special Wit A Lil Bit Of Dat Charm/ I Know I'ma Player Settle Dwon Take The Battrie Outta Ya Alarm/ Cuz I Aint Here Ta Mess Wit Chu/ I Just Hope I Can Bring Out The Best In You/ I Aint Gonna Go Testin You/ Cause Dat Aint What I'm Here Ta Do/ I Hear Ya Boo, I'm Here Fo You/ You Know I Am, I'll Go Through Hell An High Water To Be You Man/ Damn, Hold My Hand, Walk Wit Me/ Aint No Limit To What We Can Be/ We Can See, Nathang You Want To Girl/ I'll Rob A Bank To Supply You Wit Pearls/ Dis World, Aint Big Enough For What We Have/ Here Baby Put This On Let Dis Love Last/ We Gone Past, You Taught Me How To Love, An Add/ I Let YouIn My Life, Its A Form Of Math/ I'll Do Nethang Just To Make You Laugh, Make You Smile/ I Hope You Gon Be Round For A While/ Cause Different Chicken'z, Got Me A Lil Versatal/ Go From One Feeling To Another/ Common I Need A Girl Let Me Love Ya/ We Can Turn Like Lil Jhon Luda An Usha, "Friends An Lovers" Cause.../ Chorus: Baby You Know That I Need A Girl/ In Dis World, You Da Only One That Here For Me/ Let Me Say Clear~Ly, My Perspectives Are Near~Ly/ In The Right Direction, Let Me Love You An Spread Dis Affection/ I'll Keep You Protected, Gimmie A Lil Time, Cause Dis Loves Unexpected An I../ Verse 2: Love You Like I Love My Mother, There Aitn NoOther/ I Love Ya... An You Know It, Its A Fact/ Do You Love Me Back/ Cause I Aint Here To Turn The Cheek An Get Slapped On The Other Side/ I Just Need A Girl To Call Mine, Maby In Time You Can Be My Bride/ I've, Tried, To Keep From Cryin Since The Day My Last Girl Left/ Baby I Swear I'll Love You Till My Last Breath/ Till The Day Of My Death, Approaches Me/ Is This How Love Is Supposed To Be/ I'm Always Gon Keep You Close Ta Me/ Supposally, You Been Trippin For A Long While/ Left Guys In Denile, Buh That How I Want It Baby/ Maby, Some Day We Be Blessed wit Babies/ Lil Men An Ladies, I Gotta Keep My Heart From Goin Shady/ I'm Goin Crazy, Just Thinkin Of Who Fits This Description/ My Minds A Little Hazy, Wonderin If Ya Listenin/ While I Sing This Song... Im Leave For A While Now Will You Tag Along... Cause You Know/ Chorus: Baby You Know That I Need A Girl/ In Dis World, You Da Only One That Here For Me/ Let Me Say Clear~Ly, My Perspectives Are Near~Ly/ In The Right Direction, Let Me Love You An Spread Dis Affection/ I'll Keep You Protected, Gimmie A Lil Time, Cause Dis Loves Unexpected An I../
  12. if you wanan do the 2nd verse lemme know Chorus: i promise you i will not let you go i promise it will not turn out like befo i promise ill love you till the day that i die i promise that when i look up i see yoh face in the sky Verse 1: i see yoh face in the sky, i see mine in yoh eyes/ smile so wide, when you tell me your mine/ you so fine, im glad loving you is not a crime/ if so i'd be doing time, insted of wrighting you this rhyme/ you'se a dime, your my reason, my, thoughts, an my inspration/ i do this for you boo, the thought of you do, make me lose my concentration/ the temptation, of me an you on vacation/ beautiful conversations, so long ive been waitin/ other girls hatin, i hate being in that situation/ buh i swear to god if you asked id give you the right explination/ where i went what i did excatly what you want to know/ the love between family can't add up baby i love you mo'/ i love you till death do us part ill stand by your side/ me and you baby yoh Bonnie an Clyde/ the new year i promise two thousand five/ Chorus: i promise you i will not let you go i promise it will not turn out like befo i promise ill love you till the day that i die i promise that when i look up i see yoh face in the sky
  13. i really gotta thank you for the things you did, im a teen now ma you raised from a kid, adolescent, i been at it for a secoand, i had to make this record, ma you know that i respected, you from day one, nomatter what im still your son, the oldest one, outta two, no telling what i'd do for you, you love me well i love you too sometime i stop an think of you when im on the move. i swore that i knew everything through my view but i was still behind you sometimes things blind you an i was to blind to see that where ever i was you were right beside me standing there watching me blocking me, guiding me who woulda know there was this side-in-me who im tryna-be, but lifes bliding me. my souls fly-ing free, as im tryna-see you though the fog, i still can see so im movin on standin strong, whats taking so long ma let me take you back,in this track, rewind that, you praised me, raised me since i was a baby,an now im going crazy realizing it hard for you to raise a man now im tryna play my plan, take my hand when i started rappin you were my first fan i can't repay that but my plan... is to show you that i understand....(and) Chrous: Laaady,don't cha know we luv ya Sweeeeeet Laaady,place no one about ya Sweeeeeet Laaady,don't cha know we luv ya Verse2: now aint nobody tell us it was fair everytime i needed you, you was always there everytime i bleeded you would always seem ta care late night you held me when you knew that i was scared when my emotions were tared, you helped me with my fears an now im tryna pay you back for all thoes years that i tore your heart appart, even if you knew what was in my heart, you though that i should start, going to bed early an surly, you ended up being right you held me through the night when dad wasn't home you told my friend when i dint wanna talk on the phone with you there i was never alone i sorry if i raised my tone, of voice you directed my own, choice told me what was best, for the coughs and my chest when i was sick at rest in my bed you told me put a wet cloth on my head everthing you said, i remember to this day somtimes i even sit and pray that i see you when im older cuase this world just keeps getting colder mommys little soldier,i swear i always treat you right even if we fight somtimes, i say it in my rhymes i love you nothing gonna change my mind this plan takes time, like you molding me into a man but my plan is to show you that i understand Chrous: Laaady,don't cha know we luv ya Sweeeeeet Laaady,place no one about ya Sweeeeeet Laaady,don't cha know we luv ya Verse 3: now i remeber when we went throguth all that damn drama when things got rough i could always cout on momma even if my mind was out of focus an i was down in the dumps an feeling hopeless you were always there help me out there no way that i can tell you now that some how, you taught me how to be proud you stood an cleared the black clouds, from my sky, i still sit an wonder why you had that look in your eyes an you were depressed, you got the biggest heart with-in ya chest momma you is the best, i sure have been blessed things i usta say i now regret, i hope you forget, an move on, togather as a family we soo strong they say theres gotta be a reason to a begging you and dad gave me a reason to keep living an sins are forgivin, (dear god) now i lay me down to sleep an i pray for the lord my soul to keep but if i should die befor i wake i pray for the lord my soul to take(ahmen) now momma i've now become a man an my plan is to show you that i usderstand you are appricated
  14. I'm Still up I can't sleep man, dont feel like i can eat-an my head hurts, all the way to my feet can you please call the doctor an tell-em somethings wrong I listen to hiphop aint no emotions in the songs so this game is depressing I give up i quit i can't take it its getting boring an the peaces still stick i can't move-em along as i wish I could about 100 mc's an about 5 are good, the rest should ... just get the hell out the game I got my head on straight i call-em kanye not kayne pain is love and love is a vertue its funny how you tough thinking nothin gon hurt chu but then they murk-you, an you really get hurt-do you need some help naw people got it worse look at new orleans an tell me that aint worse? it hurts, i see it on the news, crying, pain, and sufferen hazards, bombs, nukes, and lame destruction befor you get behind the wheel you read instructions cause you go to fast you might crash an go "through the wire" I come with a message I'm the rap church's choir, i'm on fire! Radio on 3am I'm still up go back to the fridge new cup an i fill up iced tea drink drink drink it all up down my throat to my stomach an i get another cup my mom says i should stop because i drink so much might have dibetes or such, clutch forward gear one I run the game even when the years done cause i aint hearing nothin worth while to listen to its usher an alyshia keys boo i'm miss you.. do you even try to talk or look at me cause i need your support baby don't you see i give you ice big enough to go skatin on tag along, most rappers just doctor suse sing alongs an its really geting childish, i can't wait to blow up an destroy this ish hiphop's in a new state, new time new place an ya'll wonder why
  15. yeh i did most of it off top, its for a mixtape so I do it Jay-z Style. if it wuz album material I would work work work like 1-2 weeks to get it right. Thanks for the Feed Back
  16. yeh i did most of it off top, its for a mixtape so I do it Jay-z Style. if it wuz album material I would work work work like 1-2 weeks to get it right. Thanks for the Feed Back
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