bagotrasho

come on please tell me your opinion about my rhyme

im all up with philly my second friend city and team for football/bbal but GO BULLS CAPTAIN KIRK BIG BEN GORDAN

i voted 47 times

hey im gonna put some rhymes down and please be honest and tell me wut you think Now i never rapped before i just listenind to the hardcore so now im stickin my head in the game hopin wen i come out rap wont be the same if you listen to my rhymes youll have a revelation as my rhymes are sweepin the nation no it aint a hallucination im white and im kinda young but my rhymes have sprung..themselves into your brain now you cant get them out you have to listen to me spout everyday i make you wanna shout so i used to listen to rappers dissin each other and talkin **** and i said man thats it i wanna get in there and revolutionize this ghetto rap has everyobdy hypnotized they are mezmorized so im gonna play it like big will i aint goin hardcore but STILL people will listen and buy my CD im hopin the nation will fall in love with me i just wanna get a peice of the fame and theres alotta people doin the same but i aint the same im different but still im magnificent my rhyme is great isnt it so for the youth's sake give me a break ill show them that rap doesnt have to be hardcore my rap will entertain more just cuz im white doesnt mean i cant rhyme some people say me doin this is a waste of time they say ill never be big its just some crazy dream of mine well i say forget you im sweet like a crispy creme you see wut i mean i dont mean to be gloatin but my rhymes are floatin through your mind like a boat through the ocean so thats how i roll no swearin nor jewels my raps will rule no fancy cars or women for me no spinner hubcabs or rings that gleam u may say i dont have good taste just cuz i dont got a chain hangin from my neck to waist so to the whole human race i made look like a fool but i just wanna get the kids back in school get them off the street sellin drugs i aint tryin to talk bad bout ghetto rappers but my rhymes aint turnin kids into thugs i may not no nuttin bout the ghetto cuz i never lived there so your right I DONT NO WUT U WENT THROUGH ill give you respect cuz u survived the test the test of life you had a harder test than me cuz frankly i always had it easy but just cuz you had a hard life and survived you aint to brag about it you aint got to shout it and you definatly dont got to tell us kids about it so heres the rhyme i wrote you may wanna take note cuz you could use the quote CALM IT DOWN take it nice and easy i love all the gangtsa rap but i think its gettin outta hand y cant there be more people like will and jazz they showed us rap didnt always have to be a menace to society gangtsa rap had people rioting all JJFP was doing was quieting ALL those people who were tryin to be thugs wen they should just spend some time with their family mabye watch some tv while sittin on a rug instead of watchin their dad sip from a coffe mug he wasnt around no more cuz he was killed in the street sellin dope and crack to kids who were tryin to be cool and stay with the beat now this is my rap feat i aint tryin to make your kids rebel im tryin to be their friend thanks for listenin now this is the END

guess ill be the only guy to take him on then you say youll lyrically lose me' you got it backwards cuz ur the one thats lost i crumbled your rhyme up and in the trash it got tossed you aint ever met the likes of a guy like me im white full of talent and im only 13 just like the prince i keep it clean you say youll beat me man your rhymes i disect i cut your rhymes up like jazzy cuts up the record and now your wrecked im no where near the level of anybody i can barely spit a rhyme but still i hhave you sittin there mezmorized my rap puts you in a trance and i hit you from behind now people will say my rhyme are meedyocer well those people are a buncha jokers my rhymes may be average but if you battle me youll go home in tears cuz you just got embarresed in front of your girl and all your friends when i start rhymin its the start of your end on the rap scene im kinda new but i can still see DR SUESS hhas better rhymes that you one fish two fish red fish blue fish you say youll beat me man you wish like i said i cant rap well but i figure o wut the hell ill keep rhymin no ghetto or hardcore keep that stuff for the record store cuz ill get on the M-I-C then youll see you cant battle me cuz youll surley lose it aint breakin news you knew you didnt stand a chance wen i grabbed the mic your music career flashed before your eyes because it started to die now dont you cry just cuz im fly i ask why? did you even bother to rap your rhymes are so boring i almost took a nap but back on the subject your career is wrecked cuz you wanted to know just how good i could put on a show that wasnt your plan now im passin the mic on to the next man

Now I may be 13 and i wasnt alive back then so i never really got to experience the prince but i believe he was a great freestylist and the tim westwood thing shows that he is now i think will could take on eminem and jay z and stand a pretty good chance but someone in a higher level mabye like snoop dogg, the game, 50 cent id have to say no he couldnt

its very hard to pick only 3 but if i had to i guess MY favorite are 1 hes the DJ im the rapper 2 the magnificent jazzy jeff 3 summertime

forget u USA USA USA USA

The freestyle was awsome first of all. Anybody know where i can get lyrics to it?

dde youi guys are just to obbsessed shark and i robot both suckwed will hasnt had a good movier since bad boys 2

none of wills recent stuff has been that good

i liked guys aint nuttin but trouble

I always wondered this so tell me what you think.....Why do you think Girls Aint Nuttin But Trouble becamse so famous and Guys Aint Nuttin But Trouble didn't?

But The Beastie Boys did a song called "College Girls Are Easy" Too so itr all depends which one you're listening to!

and its called "College Girls Are Easy"

and just for the record "college girls" is by N.W.A.(Niggers With Attitude) the group consisted of Eazy E, Ice Cube, Mc Ren, Dr Dre, and the less known DJ Yella(of course he had nothin on Jazzy Jeff) but anyways just to tell you.

DUDE EAZY E IS AWSOME

On the site it says Knaye has been in the studios with Will. Is Knaye going to be featured in the album and RAP or is he just producing the cd?

What do you think is Will's best movie? I would say either Bad Boys pr 6 degrees but LOBV was good too. All of his movies are great but what you think? :bowdown:

o wow great saying you come up with that yourself or you got a team of experts abck there workin on it?

yea just cruisin aint a JJFP song i got it confused with JUST ROCKIN

When do u have to present it?

HEY today's rap may have made ppl unaware of JJFP but dont call it JUNK TODAY'S RAP IS GOOD AND A LOT OF RAP TODAY IS BETTER THAN JJFP

and i aint sayin nuttin bout will Will my idol man

sry i ment 36