Don Jiggy

aight :afro:

i probably get struck by lightning from tha stuff that i say im like jay-z what more can i say i just want respect and some tips to get better but yall find ways to put me under the weather i battle for fun it can get offensive at times but what else can i say when you dissin my rhymes yeah im an amatuer writer but at times i get tighter at least i have courage to say it like a suicide fighter i give props to everybody in this message board do i not respond when you post somethin on the board :blabla: thats what my rhymes sound like to me im not on the level to think about it positively i dont even wanna be a rapper its just fun i like the idea of rhymes swirlin in yo head like a cinnimon bun i figured i'd kick a freestyle to show you i can and then think for a minute, yeah don jiggy tha man

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willisill yo rhymes are cool, i aint gon front wit cha/ but it's only my duty to get on point wit cha/ in case you havent fully read and understood my last post/ you know tha one when i roasted bagotrasho into toast/ i said say what you got to say in a short verse/ i see you got board and had nothin to do but count tha lines in my verse/ and thats tha worst/ you say i dont play defense, why should i/ i play offense so well it doesnt matter if you got the ball i/ rhyme so dangerous you might need to wear a vest/ cuz i shoot off rhymes that can penetrate yo chest/ and that goes out anyone else that wanna test/ In case you havent noticed this rap page has been put to rest/ :switch: :ali:

the freestyle was booty i know but i was feelin the hype :ali:

i like it :blabla: .............IT WAS FYE!!!! i wanna hear it

hell yeah boy!! thats what im talkin about, spoken like a real mc, it makes me wanna get on the subject if its alright wit you im about to freestyle on it should i wear g-units because 50 got hit 9 times well i sure wouldnt because of his rhymes i aint gone lie, i want sidekick cause snoop had one other than that nobody in the world would have one i guess 50 cant make a whole dollar cause he need the whole g-unit to make a girl holla now lets talk about the boost phone they got luda,kanye, and game freestylin on cell phone if that aint exploitation i dont know what it is lame companies usin rappers to boost up they biz

you know what was missin....me on tha track lol :hilarious: it was good tho other than that

i must say this, the ppl on this forum are not rappers..... you're artist, you guys actually talk about something. everytime i read one of you guys raps i smile from enjoyment. we need more ppl in the game with a message like you guys, me, i havent reached my peak yet, but one day im a join yall :werd: :chuks:

good message, thumbs :thumb:

i likes, good side-bad side :werd:

woooo! :bounce: i liked it alot

yeah i do force it sometimes, but most times it come natural :afro:

i give it a 1/10, i hate the song i made, for some reason i never like what i do :afro:

i decided to just write the song instead of a verse, so yall can tell me whats wrong with it :afro:

verse: guns and ammunition/ get ready for competition/ Hemi spit hotter rocks the heavyhitters stay missin/ the mic glissens cuz its my weopon of choice/ the ammunition is the wisdom in mind using my voice/ how many people you gon kill in yo verse/ i can do this rhyme without a curse/ or stickin anyone in a hearse/ my rhymes worsem they wont leave me alone/ so i see it as a destiny to get on the microphone/ and express what im feelin at that time in a rhyme/ like Bonnie and Clyde, natural born killers when we ride/ me and my mic 2005/ chorus: i cant see nobody/ but you and me/ on stage tag-teamin/ the crowd still screamin/ so lets go wit tha flow/ i gotta a whole lot mo/ lets flow til they scream for an encore/ me and my mic/ verse2: you gonna feel my reign/ I bring the pain/ I start a whole new era in this hip hop game/ I got tha courage of a suicide bomber/ and make my enemies hide in caves for years like Osama/ I been spitten for years im gettin harder/ i found joy now i shed no more tears like 2paca/ i keep the party jumpin from the front to tha rear/ rockin military gear i shake yo mind wit fear/ aint no better tag-team Kobe and Shaq, Jordan and Pippen/ me and my mic stay rippin/ im a keep dippin in my lac/ leaned over like my hat/ millionare like Bruce Wayne but i dont mess wit bats/ you got a question homie check tha stats/ my pockets stay plump like Monique and theyll never go flat/ (Chorus) :afro:

yeah, i did quit once, and came back to my pad and pen with a whole new style. But i just dont know, i love to write, i have a passion for it, i just think i dont have the right potential or somethin :afro:

look, i write alot of stuff, i been doin it for like 2 years. nothing i write is just to my approval, but my friends say its straight. i mostly just write verses not songs, and i cant help thinkin i should just quit. i need guidence :afro:

i dig it, but stop bitin my rhymes.lol

yeah fye mean hot, sizzlin, you raw

get what im sayin, i hate to see a creative person get bit and a sucker is on tv wit yo stuff :afro:

damn you, you bit my song!!!! lol just kidding it was fye :afro:

posting your songs like that, someone could bite your creative style :afro:

"wade in the water" he performed "boom shake the room" on a special episode :afro:

how much homie, im interested