Mike

to me, that is THE BEST burger place just cuz of those fries plus you can get hot dogs there but my fav all time fast food place is TACO BELL! I LOVE IT!! uh man i completely forgot about taco bell!! :slap:

What is your favorite fast food place? If i left out any, forgive me. Checkers all the way! Nobody can beat those fries.

not too shabby

thats what i was thinking

i think that would be up to drakes to deal out the lyrics, i dont think anyone else would have them.

wait what? haha

im gonna have to go with carlton on this one, but wills dumb dancin is hilarious

i just thought it was gonna be another will song that everybody would forget about. remeber when 1000 kisses video premeried on mtv? i never saw that ever again.

im not, i never really liked that show, everyones voice is too annoying

its amazing what people can do with photoshop

i dont think it needs the hook though, if anything that would be in the background. like childrens story didnt have a hook and thats one of the best rap stories ever. Your story was really good.

the best rhymes are the ones that are straight from the heart or based on a true story. my two that i posted were true and easy to write because of that. im working on a third one now.

:thumb: i liked it

Do you guys think that this movie was good or bad? I thought it was pretty good. Did will regret doing this movie? Cause he like refers to it negativly in reviews and in swagga he said "i recovered from the wild wild west." just some thoughts

i liked the beat but im pretty sure the guy who made it was not a will smith fan.

The last verse has me rhymeing grade with day, its all a matter of how you say grade, almost without the "de" at the end. Just so you can read it how its supposed to be said

This is just a rhyme about the pressures of getting good grades and a little bit about america. "Future" Written by WILL IS ILL (Mike) It all started in about sixth grade When C's and B's were the grades i made Thats good to some and bad to others Good enough for me but not for my mother My mom was the good cop and told me to try When iy was my dad that got pissed and made me cry Every new marking period, I'd love but it was bad Another one down, but anothre report for my dad I did all i could to avoid him Hid and made the lights real dim Just to get away so i wouldnt get yelled at But he always lectured while i just sat And thought how i can make this go faster next time Why does he care so much? Its not his life its mine (Chorus) Better Start learning and tryin Insted of sayin i did it when i was just liein This is what matters the most in my life Good thing im strong and impenetrable to the knife I know God helped me through Casue without him i wouldnt know what to do All through my middle school career A talk from my dad was all i would hear Same exact talk i'd hear over and over I wanna get away and find a four leaf clover Cause i need some luck in my life with my grades Im playin life in poker, all i got is a jack, four, eight and a three of spades Which means i lose and life wins I wish i could do it all over and not commit those sins Id be a straight A loser like i was in MD Before i gained some popularity Its funny how desisions can change who you'll be Cause i got to get my life in order and i got to get some money If my futures the sky its not lookin too sunny Chorus Doin all i can to get a good grade Im goin to extra help like every day Casue high school is tuff, thats no lie Sometimes i wonder how i get by In the future causse you cant live off mediocre What would i do if my dad had a stroker'er, Got cancer? Cause i live in the United States of Money Our ways to the world look pretty damn funny Cause its so ridiculas, only savin lives for cash Costs me 60 bucks to have the doc check out a rash Now thats crazy, we gotta get our priorites straight Looks like livin a life of poverty will be my fate The best job ill get will be to clean a pool I better get good at beggin cause im not gonna make it outta high school Chorus (x2)

i thought it would have been alot more close from what the people were posting

I was checking out the wwe site to find this new music from john cena. Because of that other thread i was curious, anyway. I came across this section where you can submit your own freestyles to john cena, this was very tempting but i didnt do it.

Yeah good job guys there was a lot of clever rhymes that were original. by original i mean doesnt sound like avril lavigne song (not a rap artist but they lyrics are so predictable)

pretty much sums it up for me

you forgot lost and found man

:werd: anybody notice how depressed this guy looks?

maybe 3$, im pretty convident with myself

yeah me too