Mike

it feels like someones shaking matches around me , i looked behind me and said "stop" :lolsign: its not scary at all...just weird

the lyrics are so changed now, as it the song title its now called "Where i Stand" pena brought up the point that having the first song called introduction isnt that original, and on top of that, this new name basically says the same thing as introduction, but the song name ties in with the last line which regards to the album heres the update “Where I Stand” Written by Mike Petrow (Concept) Introduction to the album how I start off my game I’ll distinguish good lyrics from the ones that are lame Listen to your gangster rap **** and your crunk Good rappers have a message, don’t write about junk You might be a little confused like a strange dream Or love me like I’m mainstream Think like the same team But it flows and it goes And my work all shows And there’s a message inside that most people don’t know I can’t be taken seriously Cause I didn’t grow in an urban location Matters who keeps it real, that’s how you tell who’s fakin Even my friends doubt me man, I’ve had enough At least I don’t rap pissed and front like im tuff Why should I promote cold hate, sex and fear? Each rot the earth, God sheds a tear Teen girls need cash and whore for a buck To guys with wives, I say what the ****? Adults of the world sit back gaspin He’s only sixteen, yet he is rappin He curse in his rhymes too, how can this happen? Weird, he spoke the truth how can he know? Easy, im blind with the cane, but I see all I understand the world, and its downfall When I spit it spray, if you get what I say No stutter or pause I don’t need the delay I got no gimmicks other than my rhythm and skill And just tryin to spit **** that all y’all can feel If you like my rhymes, then go out and buy it I offer my rhymes like a drug, tell your friends to try it One time won’t kill you, inject it right in your vein And the feeling you get is damn insane Lyrics go to your brain, you’ll understand if you’re smart And on the way up their they’ll hit your heart I take no shots, you won’t hear the sound That’s why I stand upon neutral ground its amazing comparing the two and how ive grown as a lyracist

honestly it sounds like its gonna sound like another faluire like alexander and troy....and halle berry did catwoman also

ll cool j doesnt really curse anymore if your looking for good messages but curses, i know that talib kweli has good messages on some of his songs, as well as the roots...if im not mistaken

quoting "the emcce" are you pena? haha well i guess i would like to say im an mc, but hey, ive never moved a crowd, but i stand for hip hop culture

ive always written and i consider myself a rapper, yes im trying but i feel like im not some kid trying to do it, but rather some kid doing it

i knew that he was gonna realease that track as a single as soon as i heard it and the video looks sooo good, not just like the funny part of it, but the cinematogrophy was really good in the beginning, i dont know if it will stay good throughout the video. and i like how hes evil kenivel

i cant wait to see it man...take your time and i know the feeling about beign excited over a track...ive just posted a title before

as did i, i was gonna reply to it, but i didnt for some reason

:lolsign: i dun no, is me?

"You wanna be something you know your not Not yourself like damn you forgot Cop my style and cop my clothes I call you a poser for the way you chose All these middle school kids who think their bad asses act all tough and skip some of their classes fitteds and chains oversized for their neck Actin like a punk will get ya no respect i tell you to watch out and you look at me like im crazy, on crack or LSD too drugged to see, their new lifestyle now The way you live your life has got me askin "how?”" 'Poser' - Concept

we're trying to help you.....

i know this is lame....but can i just send the file to somebody cause im so lost

:2thumbs: i just finished mine up! it takes alot of time but i know you can handle it if your writing a book

dont just put stuff in so that it rhymes think each line through

wow i didnt think you were white......until i saw this video/heard the songs the ultimate hustttlllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeee good job lerkot, in the first one i liked the God part when you showed the old guy. and the part with steel you showed Chuck Norris :lolsign:

heres one i took this morning on the car ride to school. it was a foggy morning and i knew i had to take a picture. (its really small due to the fact i have no more global space left...i wish i could get moreee)

its about time, ive been waiting for this movie ever since chris tucker said "damn he wont be in rush hour 3" in the outtakes on rush hour 2 they are such great movies!!

i cant wait till it comes out! it sounds like it will be really good cause its well thought out and not the ordanary kind of movie for rappers to do.

nas- everybody's crazy

well i finished it and its 70pgs. i guess its a little shorter than i wanted it to be. but i got tired of writing it so i guess that me writiting 6 more pages today was the best that i was gonna do.

happy birthday man!

i laughed out loud and that was the first thing i noticed nas looks high or something

gscotty is producing my album, we worked on the track and got that.

!! im SO hype right now i even listened to too damn hype but thats besides the point i got my instrumental from Gscotty(Its been about time) and its soo good, and my flow goes perfect with, i just have to change my lyrics a bit cause their weak (very old lyrics) so im really excitied about this, and trust me....its better than my 'poser' i put up