Its JP

Im gonna have to second that one

Man that was great, the flow was amazing, lyrics were dope, great work man

I dont know, this verse just kind of flowed out of me and i wrote it down, just wrote it a couple minutes ago, let me know what you all think, sorry about the swearing "Just One Verse" I'm tired of all these girls bitchin and naggin About seein my boxers cuz my pants is saggin All of these ****in hoes thinkin im a wigger Well bitch guess what, youre a gold digger You can't stop it cuz my rhymes are so vigorus Everybody says I need to get rigorous Well I'm havin trouble tryin to figure this Out, What is my life all about But I can't really get an answer that looks clear Can't figure out why I was put here When I rap I see the looks of fear Because I'm rappin things a 14 year old shouldnt even hear Like rapin sluts, takin drugs, wakin up With a hangover thats so severe And no I'm not liein im bein sincere I wish that I could just disappear And escape the conflict, It's all nonsense Gettin yelled at because of my lyrics contents Its not just rap its my life I'm writin Sittin in my basement hearin my parents fightin So now I'm hidin like Bin Ladden Cuz I'm wanted By my dad, cuz his day was bad So now he has to make sure I feel sad So he calls me upstairs And my mother doesnt even care Yells at me for everything that ive done The verse isnt over its just begun Because now I see him takin off his belt I can't even describe the pain I've felt As he pulls back his arm, and I shield my face I see his veins pop out, face filled with rage And then his arm flies forward I'm struck with horror Belt slappin against my knuckle And my dad just wants to chuckle So he hits me in the head with the ****in buckle I swear to god someday I'll succeed I said I'll get repayment for all the blood that I've ever bled Keep on fightin until I'm dead I can say the words again and again And I can express myself with a pen As the ink hits the paper I start to feel safer Cuz my rhymes are like a barrier They make things seem much less scarier Now everything seems ****ed up My ****in lucks up Thoughts swirlin through my head about slittin my throat But then I realize, what will happen with the rhymes I wrote I just wish that I could ****in leave What goes through my heads you wouldnt beleive But I'm startin a new world up, like Adam and Eve A world of people who think like me Who dont give a **** and they just smoke weed But I know none of that is ever gonna happen Whatever, **** it, I'm done rappin

Happy Birthday :drunk:

it just says loading for me and wont let me see the video

Johnny that was amazing, it was soooooo good, you should make a video fer lost and found, great work johnny

i write if thats what it means

johnny ur my hero man

i picked dont even try it all the way

yeah.....10 times better than anything you could come up with Timmy

Bull, you did EVERYTHING

Well Renegay Tim has been sturrin up a bunch of trouble lately and no one really has officaly came out and dissed him yet in a song, so i was bored, figured id do it to waste some time "ReneGay Tim" Verse 1 I've been quiet about it all along Everytime this little punk posts a new song I sit there and read, on my hair i pull because his raps are so unbearable Some beginner claimin to be an MC Thinks rap is his expertise But really he's just some disease And everyone on this damn forum agrees That he needs to be takin out of the picture Hey Lerkot, I think Tim wants to get with ya Cuz Renegade is Renegay No one cares what this faggot has to say I cant wait to see his 400 Bar rap essay 400 Bars Tim? What is somethin wrong? Just because Lerkot made fun of your song? Come on Renegay why you need to act so ghetto? You could get more fans by singin falsetto The more **** you talk, the harder you fall No use written a diss, you can't rap at all Come on Renegay don't even act tough You say youre a better rapper, well I'm callin your bluff Chorus Come on Renegay just knock the crap off Stop startin fights and just back off Just so you know don't waste your time Cuz we could all bring you down with just one rhyme Verse 2 Hes 14 and from virginia, hes been quoted If theres no rhymescheme or flow, you know Renegay wrote it So now here I am writin a story About this punk little kid whos startin to bore me He keeps talkin crap and writin these raps But can't get it through his head no one likes that He needs to stop runnin his mouth About the hoods of the south Because it makes me wanna shout JUST CUT THIS CRAP OUT Nobody's buyin your poser act And your rhymes abstract You go up on stage thinkin ur rappin But you're just talkin and nobodys clappin And you're gums youre just flappin But someday your mouths gonna get you killed I'm not makin a threat, I'm just tellin the truth So you can stutter a diss, no one cares dude Chorus

Alright, settle down Tim, just so you know you have no flow, you don't have skill, and its not our fault if u run for four hours and then record, heres an idea, WAIT TILL LATER, and a crappy mic is so excuse if u stutter and cant flow, You are the poser, talking about southern hoods and crap, JUST SHUT UP, youre not gonna kill anyone, every rapper on this forum could dismantle you without breaking a sweat, and as for maddblock, youre the maddblock of the forum now Tim, and as for your 10 gigs, your relatives birthday parties dont count.

:lolsign: I love the part where it says dont mess with the best and it shows a picture of lerkot, sooooooo funny lerkot great job :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:

Still awaiting the diss

Yo Joe, happy birhtday man! :jazzy:

haha Lerkot nice, seriously funny, bout time that someone started somethin with this 'gangsta' from virgina ha, so uh Renegade if ur handin out disses, throw one my way, i wanna get in on this too :kekeke:

so whats goin on with this thing?

that drawing is great man

it would be my initals

Hmmmmmm I wonder why :nhawong: I'm with Lerkot on this one, it was just plain ignorant and stupid and Renegade i know its not the time to say this, and its not polite, but hey, i think you deserve to be insulted, to me u sound like some little kid whos just says ignorant crap and writes these raps that are uhm................. :interesting: i'd have to say when you're rapping about the hood and i believe ur 14? I don't think you should be sayin stuff about Lerkot, he would beat u in a battle ANY DAY but..... :topic:

i'd like to also see Im Bad from LL

:word: Same here! yeah me too

I guess Im in

This dude is my hero