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Is this good begining of battle rhyme?


Damian

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I think it may be a little too abstract to stand on it's own, if you had something before it to explain a bit better, then maybe...

yea

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He was asking your opinions of what he wrote, it didn't look to me like he wanted to battle.

That's right.

Ok I'll try to explain it a little:

"Imaginate not boombastic babykeeper of Fantastic 4.

I'm Mr. F, you're my babysitter, even not 4".

Mr. F is short version of Mr. Fantastic, this guy is plasticman & he is a boss of them. I mean that someone is only a babysitter of me, not a member of group. hehe, I made it some time ago when I read the latest battle competition on this board. I thought it's funny, but it could be a little less abstract.

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