Kimmie's Poems

[KevTastic]

Kimmie you shud be proud cos i don't think i have ever left a post in this forum before. Your poem is ace. Bigted is right about it coming right from the heart.

They are very sweet

[Kimmie]

[color=purple]aw thanx very much!

that made me smile :thumb: :clap: [/color]

[Kimmie]

[color=purple][B]Hate makes the world go round
(June 21st 2004)

Hate makes the world go round,
There’s no more time for love.
Focus has fallen upon disagreement;
Who rules the heaven above?

Religion’s caused a deadly divide,
Throughout a dying world.
No more time for fun and games,
A gun for boys and girls.

Suffer at the hand of “justice,”
No more time for peace.
“Follow our way, or you die,”
No chance for release.

Mutilation, pain and death,
Both in body and in mind.
Is there hope for a hating world?
Is there hope for mankind?

Government invest in nuclear arms,
“Lets blast them ‘till they’re dead.”
No more money for the NHS,
Innocents die instead.

“No more war” the protesters shout,
but it falls upon deaf ears.
The power that the government wants,
Costs us all our tears.

Bush and Blair lead us to war,
Justice or revenge?
Will their greed ever stop?
Or are we fighting till the end?

Do we wait till the buttons pressed?
Do we continue to be violent?
If we don’t stop now the consequence;

Our earth ends. Eternally silent.[/B[/color]]

[Hero1]

yo kimmie i really liked that first poem the simple poems are often the best :rock:

okay heres sum freestyle poems ive done in the past...

FRAKCHID

its gettin a lot harder
to be a little bit better
its a little easy
to fall into the same old traps
same bad habits
you really gotta work at it
gotta keep talking to myself
to encourage myself
its a balance of mental health
battling yo self
its that pull and tug
under the rug
with the push and pull
even still
lack the motivation
slackin consternation
facing wrongs around you
backing into corners that have found you
fraid to make a move
means your gonna lose
trapped inside ya blues
gotta get outta of yaself
look inside ya self
never that suprised
when ya look inside ya eyes
deep into the soul
fractured and not whole
nurturing through the tough times
hurting with the rough times
then throw those memories back deep
pile on the scrap heap
of lost moments
lost opportunities
so many fears got there own communities
roaming inside of me
denying me
alleviation
of relieving actions
fighting the frightenings
psyching
the sitings
of enlightning
the mind thing
with these writings


FRUSTRATED

I just don’t get it man
Why do we gotta go through this man
It’s the same ol **** again
And that is when
We’ve been through this before
Its like that movie where you go through a door
And you go through a door
And you go through a door
And it’s the same door!
Do I look like I’m asking for more
I just don’t get it
In fact id rather forget it
And you don’t seem to regret it
Its like im up against a wall
And you’re waiting for me to fall
Sure I should take a stand
My mind does demand
But I just aint strong or tough
To say enough is enough
But what is unfair
Is you seem blissfully unaware
Which makes me more angry
Hatred as you thank me
Grittin the teeth
As I speek
Holdin the tongue
In front of your son
But are you really that dense
To me it makes no sense
Look ive tried every angle
Worked every lead
But I guess what you need
Is something
That is nothing
For most but for me its impossible
4 me its horrible
not even tolerable
so im left hopin time will
free me from this cycle
of madness and frustration
that leaves me wastin
thoughts and energy
looking 4 sum synergy
not sure its in in me

fortunate telling

You wanted innocent that doesn’t play me
Guilt ridden emotions wash over
Mind games of the highest order
Scare tactics couldn’t penetrate your fortress
Moat of emotional blackmail
Riding on a magic wave of emotions
But can’t disappear the simplest sphere of your negative inflections
Twisting words and then reverse the intent to suit your tactics
Break down to mere instances of hurt
That pierce through the very core
But you rotate it with your many illusions
Cant hold on in the darkness
Blinded by the initial directions of anger then turned inward
Enemies devour racing thoughts of trepidation
Question what led to persuasion intrusive invasions
Lead rings around this state of discontent
Circling sharks of hate imbed themselves
Restless minds lead to tempest times
Suffering becomes my bedfellow

mindgames

i feel like my mind is connected to somewhere else
someplace else
a place of wealth
a place of stealth
a place to dwell
in a race to hell
a rhyme fulfilled
in a time to kill
to free my mind
from this cold cell
block the body and ring the bell
i want out to escape the jail that is this shell
thoughts enclosed no release
i dare not speak
for those divorced
of this common bind
which matters most over the mind
controlling force directs this course
familiar lines with no remorse
somethings wrong
this does not belong
from whence it came
back to birth
back to mother earth
its natures way
but we cant rewrite in this rewind
left unable to find
the origins of my mind

take away

take me away
infinity and a day
to a higher place
rise above the world
look at my surroundings
see earth in its entirety
look down from above study humanity
because from my current vantage point
i cant see much
but myself

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okay everyone post more poetry now kimmie and i have posted ours :ali:

[mfuqua23]

I got some poems in my repatoire. :thumb:

[Kimmie]

[color=purple]my lord hero! :thumb: nice work!
go ahead mfuqua, post post post![/color]

[bigted]

Hey Tim I like those poems! I just got a chance to check 'em today. There's so many posts, not enough time to check 'em all. :werd:And Kimmie, I like "Hate makes the world go 'round" where u talk about the war, deep stuff, sounds like something that Chuck D would say. :clap: Edited September 27, 2004 by bigted

[Kimmie]

[color=purple]thanx alot :) i just wish some people would realise it![/color]

[Perry]

Hey Kimmie, just read those poems and damn I loved em. Especially that first one I can relate and it's got somethin about it. I'm sure ya don't mind if I save em right ?

Keep it up :clap:

[Kimmie]

[color=purple]no sure! if ya really want the first one, u can buy the book hahahahaha [/color]

[Perry]

[quote=Kimmie,Sep 28 2004, 05:22 PM][color=purple]no sure! if ya really want the first one, u can buy the book hahahahaha [/color][/quote]
I'm always up for supporting up and coming talent. Make sure you let me know when it's out.

[Kimmie]

[color=purple]it should be out really soon. i got my pre release copies a few days ago. "the hearts content" merseyside and wirral edition i think :) so u'll recognise areas! i suggest just reading it on the shelf and then putting it down again hahaha [/color]

[Kimmie]

woooooooo gettin another poem published :D

[Da Brakes]

Well done!! which 1? :thumb:

[Kimmie]

You'll never be mine

Get out of my heart,

Get out of my head,

You brought joy and then pain,

I was alive, now I’m dead.

You maintain a hold,

Even when I think it’s through,

I start a new life,

And then you make me love you.

Coldness and silence,

And then the reverse,

This love I was feeling,

Is my wretched curse.

The friendship has died,

It’s not what I wanted,

I know I must face it,

But forever I’ll be haunted.

I’ll get out of your life,

I’ll look back on this blur,

I will always remember,

You only loved her.