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bigted

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  1. nice rhymes brothers, here we go again....

    now is the time to reach climax
    with more premieres than cinemax
    this individual won't slack
    feeding off of physical contact
    it's all on momentum like a contract
    but it's a bigger dividend than supplied cash
    your stock in the draft
    is faltering to crash
    i have all the upper hand
    like having a nutricious supper in advance
    a craft of victorious vision in circumstance
    a message to those who aren't believing
    in the flow to pursue rather than getting even
    won't be begging at more people
    at 33 my eyes are set on jesus
    my hobbies won't leave me deceiving
    penetrate my way towards eternity
    every set of concern rolls deep
    no,mention of any hurt on me
    the best is ahead on each breath i breathe
  2. well since nobody contined it yet,i'll add myself some more with a march madness rap....

    let me add this march madness rap

    as the spring training also gets at bats

    there won't be any slack

    bringing commentary like sir charles, kenny, and shaq

    this feeling will continually last

    as the buzzer sounds
    the love comes around
    through the sluggish rounds
    comes a more divine route
    with ways of claim to be found
    enough passion that won't drown
    there's not a need to front
    i was born during this month
    on the matter to discuss
    hot streaks come after slumps
    the range of accuracy behind the arc
    the inventive rhymer born in march
    the visions of a creative spark
    more innovative than those on the charts
    the pace of the game lives large
    no matter what you ain't tearing me apart
    hating opposition wants the break up  to start
    i'm not about to break off and slip
    when i roll strong and come to grip
    no matter what happens i just won't trip
    taking control from the opening tip

     

  3. let me get this straight the classic mc who wrote lyrical classics like summertime and brand new funk had a simple edm dance song written by XO Man (no disrespect but who is he?), simply embarassing, maybe will should just hang up the mic, he's looking like a lost rapper...

  4. I just came up with a bright idea to gets ome life back in this forum, I remember back in the days of the JJFP forum of the Numero Uno forum where there was a lot of creativity and that did a lot to motivate me,  I wanna bring that feeling back so without further ado here's a rhyme that i made recently, feel free to add on peeps, let's kick it off!!

    as the clocks continue to turn
    i'm putting stock into a concern
    there'll be major props in the world
    end of the days of hurting
    the strain of the daily burdens
    putting into care like nursing
    there's destiny for so much more
    time to release and live for what's in store
    releasing the hammer on the dance floor
    striving for peaceful ways instead of war
    more time to open up the heart
    instead of living torn apart
    there's more of an added charged
    manage the advantage large
    2018 brings on a brand new start
    this feeling rolls true to last
    learning from what went wrong in the past
    to bring on recording of more tracks
    all the importance of a trained staff
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