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Really? I never noticed that. I think I'll have 2 pay better attention next time.

Thanks W3. I've been told flow is one of my strong points.

Thanks Joe, glad u gave feedback 2 my flow.

This is verse wrote 4 my nephews & nieces. But U can read as a song 2 all youth. It'z just the 1st verse, and I wasn't sure if it would sound right; but so far I think it does. [i]Aug. 18, 2004 (3:48 - 4:27 p.m.)[/i] I never had younger siblings I could pass the knowledge onto But I know there's a youth that needs truth bout what they gonna do I need it too, and it'z kinda hard 2 manage me But I can learn from my mistakes and show right by my young family of few nephews and plenty of nieces Enlighten them of the world'z puzzles, put 2gether the pieces Believe it'z natural 4 U 2 be strugglin' Have a greater heart if U restart, and willin' 2 try again It'z information spoken wit theory Tired of all things wrong wit the world, it'z makin' us weary Nearly everyone has gone thru the pain, not feelin the same It'z like a wild animal runnin' loose, never be tamed U get demand 2 have a plan, without thinking of preparation Questioned when U become the future of our nation Take action when U keep ya goals on sight Then basically, boys and girls, U'll be aight ___________ I am gonna try 2 make some of my own beats, but I was gonna use Nas "If I Ruled The World" 4 this. This song won't cuss at all. And I want it 2 be advanced in a way, but not so advanced, that they can't understand it.

Actually Jim, he is right. I did diss him. Once there's a _, it stops and I go in general. That'z why it'z just a verse. A simple 8. Nothing really all that.

[quote=Daedalus Mortality,Aug 18 2004, 02:32 PM]FOR YOU HUNNY, I CAN BE! :kiss:[/quote] Uhh, that smilie is not correct. I would not be smiling if a guy kissed me. :cya:

Not really all that much. Make love. Ok, but not wit U. I much rather prefer a girl. No offense.

Looked pretty cool. Only thing is, 1. U don't have how old U currently R 2. the forum is all about U (put more 2 it) Other than that, it'z cool. Better than I probably could've done. lol

Ya life is a joke, and that'z funny 2 me Like Dave Chappelle tryna be, a no-talent M.C. Don't battle me, becuz ya just a beginner U envy me cuz my lyrics dope, not cuz I'm a sinner Don't argue in the topics, drop it like hot potatoes Claim 2 be Mr. Knowledgeable but have no say so So don't say nothin', whether it'z right or nice Let that echo like Will on a mountain sayin' Heidi Fleiss Rightful so, I can flow wit out gettin dough But it'z not about me, it'z about U, so let me diss some mo... __ I know there's competition all over the board If U don't make ya-self known, then U will get ignored Some got a good production, but can't rap like P.Diddy Let it be known if that'z ya game, don't bother messin wit me IT'z just a lil something, lettin U know I'm Fresh 2 da mic Be prepared in the future, gotta be ready 4 my hype _______________ I kinda lost stucture, so don't take this too serious. Just read and enjoy.

Label U as a coward now, so I won't have 2 remind U And even tho an enemy is gone, I still gotta cope wit da stress sorry, posted twice. :dunno:

Label U as a coward now, so I won't have 2 remind U And even tho an enemy is gone, I still gotta cope wit da stress

So this is where U got 2 lately. It seemed like U haven't been around 4 a while. Or maybe it'z just me. I'm gettin ready 2 check ya site out.

U can dream when U rhyme, but don't post those thoughts Get caught in the fame and 4get ya name of recognition

U know, this made me think of something. How many FPs do u guys give Brakes (those of u who have watched him)?

Let that be a lesson 2 u AJ. lol.

True AJ. FP is focused. Let'z just hope this album holds true 2 that statement.

Those were from the Cosby throw out, wasn't it? I think it was. At least we know he doesn't really get hurt.

Remember when Will got thrown out a couple times? The one out the club is so funny, and fake. Will mostly got punched tho. But no one beats Jazz's throw outs.

I can't remember which episode it was, but it was one of the loudest, funniest thuds I ever heard. It cracks me up every time. Darn. i can't remember it. Wit my luck, I'll probably see that episode 2morrow. lol

lol at ted. I never rapped out loud in the shower. I don't think I'm that good 2 freestyle in the shower. Maybe I'll rap my lyrics one day, but my parents hear me in the house all the time. So I won't mind. They've even heard some of my songs. Well, my early material. They haven't heard me lately.

Yo Hero1, who put u up 2 this?? hmm? Nice rap. well, diss, I guess.

Music is one of the greatest things in the world. Nice post bigted. Very well put. :thumb:

Since we're on the subject of ghostwriting, did u know that Jay-Z ghost written 4 Bugs Bunny? lol. Will doesn't. End of story. And Arguement.

[quote=Daedalus Mortality,Aug 17 2004, 06:18 PM]I dont think he had ghostwriters during his FP period[/quote] How can u say that, after u just said he doesn't. And I thought I told u "Don't say nothin'..." (echos)

[quote=Daedalus Mortality,Aug 17 2004, 06:00 PM]I never said Will didnt write ANYTHING himself did you see me write thaT? NO becouse I didn't and I am a WIllsmith fan but sometimes he just dissapoints me.[/quote] DUDE, do u even know what a ghost writer is? It'z (quote dictionary so "U" know) "one who writes for and gives credit of authorship to another". Someone WRITES 4 someone else. Lets say Will did have ghost writers and still wrote 4 himself. Fans would still be hurt by it, cuz then the hits like "Summertime", "Girls Ain't Nothin But Trouble", etc.; would have the possiblity of him being made great by someone else's creativity. Plus your going by what SOMEONE else said. I guess that makes that person your "ghost-thinker". lol or "ghost speaker". And if ya a Will Smith fan, take note of this song quote... "If U can't say nothing nice, don't say nuthin'." :hsnono: (and if u wanna argue that, it'z like this..., Just Don't Say Nothin') BIG WILLIE STYLE HOLDIN IT DOWN BABY!!!! :switch: get jiggy wit it :switch: (hey, this smilie sayz switch, that's so cool)