Admin Hero1 Posted February 19, 2006 Admin Report Share Posted February 19, 2006 you know the deal.. joe is first 32 lines from joe then schnazz joe again then schnazz again let the battle commence!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted February 20, 2006 Report Share Posted February 20, 2006 So Schnazz we meet in the final confrontation Lay out my frustration, when I win in celebration Ur disses make me sleep, mine make u weep Regard u as cheap while I ride in a new jeep And if u do steal this competition, it will be luck I can piss u off, make u look like a real schmuck I geuss Ur Jack Nickleson in the Cuckoo's Nest A pest problem, not hard for me to get rid of the rest U claim to be smart, but U've got no heart Homie I knew I beat u since the very start My ambition is just to get u to sit and listen A Rap Expedition destroying my oppisition I can curse but that would make things worse Knowing only one of us are leaving in a hearse But I can't complain, I caused all the pain All ur init for is fame, I'm init for the rap game So slow down because u may never know But ur too weak b!tch, weak flow, never blow Not in a million years, I'd shed blood tears Before i'd let this dude destroy all my peers What else can I say to ya? I'm too off the wall Might aswell have a sick call because u gonna fall Without me being here, congrats u would win But unlucky man, time to ring ur next of kin Shouldn't of been born drink a bit of whiskey U can never diss me, If I leave u would miss me How can I come this far, without killing this Every bar I spit everyone knows i'm thrilling this So before U even spit ur verse, ur dying With any cuss u bring at me, he's just lying Become a priest, go and talk on the podium Just know all of these haters, I be holding em... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schnazz Posted February 21, 2006 Report Share Posted February 21, 2006 Naw, no podium for me, that's too small scale The mountain top is where I blaze the trail I issue my decrees from under palm trees And watch as I'm surrounded by devotees I'm a hip-hop prophet, you'll never stop it You thinken you can beat me? You best drop it I need no assistance, I always go the distance I bring it so strong, I spit worlds into existence A wave of wisdom rips from my lips My quips eclipse the best manuscripts I can see you glower, you know Knowledge Is Power And I'm the Hercules, causing all kids to cower I crumble the pillars of you wanna-be killers With your wack rhymes made with nothen but filler You're a twinkie to the mind of all of mankind Your words leave fundamental truths maligned When I arrive all hope has revived In that faith that hip-hop will always survive When I shine I don't turn water to wine My Lyrical Miracle is how I'm divine I always meditate on how to win each debate That's why I leave you irate at the fact that I'm great Are you having a flash back cuz of this brash flack? Is your sky falling cus of this killer bash track? Is your ambition flat, your heart on the mat? Let me explain to you why I'm All That I'll never sever my faith in hip-hop Ever clever, my mind goes non-stop I'm bringing ringing to every party I rock Winging singing I tear up the block Folks're quitin sittin soon as my rhymes drop Gettin smitten with my love for the top Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted February 21, 2006 Report Share Posted February 21, 2006 That was terrible, I'll put u down to shame Then sit back and laugh at what u became U really think this rap game is that damn easy Can't please me because I know ur sleazy And if ur so great, Can I please just debate That u rhyme the same line, so don't hate I'm better than u, let's leave it at that And why is the hip hop u speak of so whack U really need to think, I'm not a JP And I'll slap u if u think I'm Cozmo D I'll destroy u in a matter of a few verbs U must smoke the herbs mixing up ur words And that lyrical miracle got u so cynical My rhymes to urs are easily subliminal Maybe I'm the rap criminal, what u lookin 4 Spitting to the core, let me give u a rap tour It started it the eighties, I think u knew that But the difference is, I know that u blew that U see it doesn't take time to make a rhyme Must be thinking ur sinking onto cloud nine So I apologyze for ur lies u effected on us But u must see that I was expected to bust It's a shame that u came so far to just fall If I was u i'd be beating my head aganist a wall U live in the states, u know all about independance Stand in line for war, fighting for attendance What I don't get is that u supposed to be a master But homie I can diss u slow, and do it a bit faster So before u give all the talk, please just show me Homie u don't know me so please just blow me I'll move in silence, until the cover is blown Make ya girl moan like giving a dog a bone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schnazz Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 Why oh why do your rhymes go awry? You try and try, but it just makes you cry I have an idea, but I don't think you'll like this Though if I didn't inform you, I'd be remiss Pull out a pen and pad so you can take notes on this Study hard so you can learn what I wrote on this You don't have what it takes to create hot rap You could rhyme for twenty years and still be wack You lack vocabulary to spit diversely You have no skill to spit smack tersely Time after time you avoid the analogy And your lack of metaphors is quite a tragedy Perhaps if you didn't lack any imagination You'd have some salvation for rhythmatic creation But your frustration shows your lack of education It's not a lack of preparation or determination That caused the formation of your verbal constipation The revelation is that you're a rap abomination And your presentation reveals this situation Take my recommendation and find another vocation You flow like Stephen Hawking and you don't look much betta' You're as bright as Georgie Bush with the life of a Loretta You're as cool as Vanilla Ice and as tough as Wacko Warner And your hair looks about as good as Barts dad Homer You're as stable as Eminem as mature as Curley Sue And even Elton John gets more girls than you You're just a simple laugh, much like comic strips And your skills are as evident as a chickens lips You have as much soul as a zombie in a coma And the stench of failure is your charming aroma You make music that's as bad as Air Supply And Hero's mom says you’re hung like a fly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted February 22, 2006 Author Admin Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 vote vote vote! i thought schnazz killed joe in the first verse..but then joe was better in the second verses.. overall still give it to schnazz.. i was surprised no1 mentioned the battle mod in this tho hahaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schnazz Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 Good luck Joe, you had some good rhymes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrshPrnceCharmng Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 I'm giving this one to Joe. I thought that Joe didn't start off as well as Schnazz, but came back with his second verse. Schanzz's second verse was good, but I really couldn't get behind the last third of it. Kind'of seemed like he got off his own track. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Its JP Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 i had to go with joe, i just thought his lyrical wordplay was better, schnazz did a great job on the first verse though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted February 22, 2006 Author Admin Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 i thought this was sum sick flow from schnazz... I'll never sever my faith in hip-hop Ever clever, my mind goes non-stop I'm bringing ringing to every party I rock Winging singing I tear up the block Folks're quitin sittin soon as my rhymes drop Gettin smitten with my love for the top Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 My vote goes for Schnazz. i think his rhymes were better than Joes consistently. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 Good luck Schnazz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andreik Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 really cool schnazz!! :1-smile: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 I went with Schnazz, both did a great job, though! :1-smile: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WesSyde Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 schnazz gets my vote, his wordplay was insane. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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