Turntable Posted September 7, 2005 Report Share Posted September 7, 2005 (edited) We went true so much together And now you got that stupid loveletter You fell in love with that guy I just can`t understand why You don`t know what he is about He`s gonna do the same things to you like he did to the others He just gonna use you for his pleasures Maybe he said to you he changed But that isn`t`the truth Becaus he told me about you And the things he wants to do with you He said to me he`s just wants you to screw That he doesn`t actualy gives a **** about you I try`d to tell you But you just won`t believe me Girl i know this sounds hard But it`s just the truth I don`t wanna break you I`m just trying to save you Remeber how we talked about our first Pokemon cards Remeber how we laughed together when we went to the gym class and had 10 minutres for 2 yards Remember how we practized kissing together in that sleeples Video-Games nights Remeber how we talked about everything since we where childs And now you forgot it all just becaus of his fake smiles Baby you know i allways got ya back And now you`r telling me that i`m just wack I`m just jalous you`r teling me I can`t understand it why you are doing this to me I`m just trying to warn you Please understand that I just don`t want you to get hurt and you`r telling me I`m wack Baby i can`t do anything more But i also can`t ignore The fakt that he`s gonna hurt you You know when he doe`s I`m gonna hurt him to Baby please think about my words.. --------------------------- I would like to get feedback and i would like you to tell me about the foults in my english :lolsign: Edited September 7, 2005 by Turntable Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted September 7, 2005 Report Share Posted September 7, 2005 That's real deep turntable, a few spelling mistakes but thats all good i understood what you was trying 2 say! keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bea321 Posted September 7, 2005 Report Share Posted September 7, 2005 It's good but just a question:why not writing that in Dutch? It would be more simple! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted September 7, 2005 Report Share Posted September 7, 2005 (edited) Yeah that's very good, I know how that feels to go through that, keep ya head up homie, you just gotta work on the spelling a lil' more like Joe said. Edited September 7, 2005 by bigted Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted September 8, 2005 Report Share Posted September 8, 2005 Wow, that was really deep Turntable! Just some spelling errors like everyone else said. Great job on this! :thumbsup: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted September 8, 2005 Admin Report Share Posted September 8, 2005 i'd print that out and give it to her dude Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted September 8, 2005 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2005 Thanks to all!I realy apreachiate that..And i`m gonna work on my spelling! @ Beah:I`m not that good in dutch..My first language is german..But i can`t write in anything but english..Don`t know why. @ Hero:Yeah i think i`m gonna do that.I hope she will understand than! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted September 8, 2005 Report Share Posted September 8, 2005 Well your english is pretty good for German being your first language. English is hard to learn for foreign people. We can still understand what you're saying, so you are doing well! Keep it up! :thumbsup: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted September 8, 2005 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2005 (edited) Well your english is pretty good for German being your first language. English is hard to learn for foreign people. We can still understand what you're saying, so you are doing well! Keep it up! ← Thanks Girl..Since I`m on the board my english got better and it keeps coming! Edited September 8, 2005 by Turntable Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted September 8, 2005 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2005 Yo i have a question..Are they`r also Grammar Mistrakes or only Spelling? I they`r grammar mistakes please tell me which one.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cristigolo Posted September 23, 2005 Report Share Posted September 23, 2005 it is really deep. i had somethin like dis with a friend of mine (a boy) nothing sexy. we were just good friends but he fell in love with a girl and after that girl became his girlfriend (which was only for his money cuz he is a lot richer than me) he totally forgot our friendship. but now he has come to his senses but he moved back to germany where he is from. and now we keep in touch thru text msg. he will come here soon so we talk bout things and bring me magazines like mad which you can't find here. i only knew him for a year but we became very good friends Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted September 23, 2005 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2005 it is really deep. i had somethin like dis with a friend of mine (a boy) nothing sexy. we were just good friends but he fell in love with a girl and after that girl became his girlfriend (which was only for his money cuz he is a lot richer than me) he totally forgot our friendship. but now he has come to his senses but he moved back to germany where he is from. and now we keep in touch thru text msg. he will come here soon so we talk bout things and bring me magazines like mad which you can't find here. i only knew him for a year but we became very good friends I know al lil what you mean..I went years ago from Switserland to the Netherlands.. Oh and for anyone who wonderd how it went with the girl..She thought about it to long and he got borred so now he`s using another Girl! It endet all good!And she believes me now.. :davidblaine: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted September 23, 2005 Report Share Posted September 23, 2005 it is really deep. i had somethin like dis with a friend of mine (a boy) nothing sexy. we were just good friends but he fell in love with a girl and after that girl became his girlfriend (which was only for his money cuz he is a lot richer than me) he totally forgot our friendship. but now he has come to his senses but he moved back to germany where he is from. and now we keep in touch thru text msg. he will come here soon so we talk bout things and bring me magazines like mad which you can't find here. i only knew him for a year but we became very good friends I know al lil what you mean..I went years ago from Switserland to the Netherlands.. Oh and for anyone who wonderd how it went with the girl..She thought about it to long and he got borred so now he`s using another Girl! It endet all good!And she believes me now.. :davidblaine: That's good, glad things worked out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted September 23, 2005 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2005 yeah me to.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cristigolo Posted September 24, 2005 Report Share Posted September 24, 2005 its good she came to herr senses and listened to you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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