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FuQ - Young Family


mfuqua23

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This is verse wrote 4 my nephews & nieces. But U can read as a song 2 all youth. It'z just the 1st verse, and I wasn't sure if it would sound right; but so far I think it does.

[i]Aug. 18, 2004 (3:48 - 4:27 p.m.)[/i]

I never had younger siblings I could pass the knowledge onto
But I know there's a youth that needs truth bout what they gonna do
I need it too, and it'z kinda hard 2 manage me
But I can learn from my mistakes and show right by my young family
of few nephews and plenty of nieces
Enlighten them of the world'z puzzles, put 2gether the pieces
Believe it'z natural 4 U 2 be strugglin'
Have a greater heart if U restart, and willin' 2 try again
It'z information spoken wit theory
Tired of all things wrong wit the world, it'z makin' us weary
Nearly everyone has gone thru the pain, not feelin the same
It'z like a wild animal runnin' loose, never be tamed
U get demand 2 have a plan, without thinking of preparation
Questioned when U become the future of our nation
Take action when U keep ya goals on sight
Then basically, boys and girls, U'll be aight
___________

I am gonna try 2 make some of my own beats, but I was gonna use Nas "If I Ruled The World" 4 this. This song won't cuss at all. And I want it 2 be advanced in a way, but not so advanced, that they can't understand it. Edited by mfuqua23
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Here is the 2nd verse.

Feel barely uplifted, so explainations get descriptive
Have a sense 2 know the answer, but it'z not perfectly predicted
Your eyez see the world with simplicity
Life's real, so U get told about earth's explicit themes
Got bigger dreams than any fantasy land
Your population united as one, instead of divided by clans
U can play among each other cordially
but there's things U gotta watch 4, unfortuneately
Tricky advantage takers, heartless spirit breakers
and parents who R always senseless debaters
Later, emotions become colder than temperatures
As U get older, U'll think about the way we were
Girls become ladies in search of respect
Boys become men getting breath'd down their neck
Both will wait 4 their hard earned checks
Worser than taxes, U gotta update on tech-
-nology, cause their stopping the old-fashioned way of things
Feel trapped on this ground, like a bird with no wings
Listen close, as I say what they gotta know
Y'all my Young Family, and I'm ya bigger bro
_________

Questions or comments? Let me know. Peace! Edited by mfuqua23
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I think that the song is more similiar to Nas' "I Can", very strong points, the youth needs more positive messages out there! Keep it up! :rock:
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The flow seems to be knocked out slightly on the "explicit themes" part. Apart from that, its great man! This is really something I could listen to, and would love to hear you do it on track!
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