mfuqua23 Posted May 12, 2006 Report Share Posted May 12, 2006 FuQ - Waitin (produced by MC2B) Hey guys. I need serious opinions. I got another track produced by MC2B. The flavor is almost neo-Hip Hop like. ----------- I remember back in the days, how our togetherness was made Now we're two lost loves nobody can save I lay across my bed, on my chest, tryna ease out my breaths thinkin' what's next, is the soft touch of ya hands caress My love is callin' for U, only for U, makin me stall in things to do like performin' rhymes at a spot or gettin back to my crew My cell stays lit, but it's the wrong numbers that flicker keeps disappointing me, I get more bitter It's a pain I don't wanna feel The 1st instance I'd see U, I wouldn't conceal Out my window, the rain water tilts down slowly Looks like I'm not the only one hurt, nature knows we need to be Despite what U may think, these are my honest feelins I been down too long, tryna get up wit this stamina building It's killin' me to wait, and nobody's in line I'm prepared to plead my case why U should be mine On the other end, a lady within a tee and jeans Fearin' to sleep, like I'm a nightmare cuz I be in her dreams She put me off too many times with that "I'm busy" line but I know the truth is she's just afraid inside I'm usually not take charge, but I told her what she had to do I thought it thru, U should too, couldn't have made it any smoother Time: Now, setting: late, every second is chased with memories of us, helping her with the decision to make And sure I had my faults too, with females before U but the only one I desire to have, will always be U My last words echo, while her curves tantalizin vibes Pacin back and forth, tryna search answers within her mind She's tryna call me back, as she look in the mirror Takin note of her face, when it's my voice she hear But I don't pick up, cuz I'm out back shootin' hoops Tryna take my mind off things and tryna get loose She starts rethinkin' how to go about it What our love means to one another, can we do without it Gonna go drive to my house, and wait at the door See how long it be before she won't wait anymore While she was headin' my way, I was headin hers Communication in a relationship is important to learn Got to her house, knocked on the door for about 10 minutes then sent her a message in hopes that she get it We was thinkin alike, on the same night Thinkin we didn't want each other, and that'd be the end of our love life No mic could hold the words that I had for her I felt relieved when she was at my door and ran across the curb Instantly romantic, as I whispered in her ear and she smiled, when she realized I was sincere To end it all, we laid in each others arms, on the patio as the breezes roll by in a nice easy flow Good things can in fact come to those who wait But this is better than good, matter a fact, it's great Let me run thru the chorus one more time to understand and appreciate the whole story line Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted May 12, 2006 Admin Report Share Posted May 12, 2006 very nice flow.. a couple of lines i enjoyed... Instantly romantic, as I whispered in her ear and she smiled, when she realized I was sincereOut my window, the rain water tilts down slowly Looks like I'm not the only one hurt, nature knows we need to be My last words echo, while her curves tantalizin vibes Pacin back and forth, tryna search answers within her mind :wickedwisdom: :wickedwisdom: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted May 12, 2006 Report Share Posted May 12, 2006 Good job dude! I like the vibe of this song. My only criticism is that it sounds like your playing catch up a bit with the beat. Other than that its a great track! :thumbsup: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted May 12, 2006 Report Share Posted May 12, 2006 Sounds cool, the beat is awesome, chilled. :kool: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 Hey FuQ i was listenin ya song today an di wonder who the guy singin the chorus? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted May 25, 2006 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2006 I don't know, I'll have to ask the guy who produced it. I sure as heck know it wasn't me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny 5 Posted May 25, 2006 Report Share Posted May 25, 2006 Sounds good man, although your voice wasn't clear enough for me to understand the track without readin the lyrics, maybe you need to rap more clearly or get another mic or have your voice turned up louder. One of my main criteria for choosing or listening to rap is that I can hear it clearly and understand what they're talking about straight away... for example, Will, early Eminem, LL, Fort Minor, Brakes.... keep up the good work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted May 25, 2006 Report Share Posted May 25, 2006 I don't know, I'll have to ask the guy who produced it. I sure as heck know it wasn't me. definetly aint ya voice, you aint exactly the best singer :lolsign: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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