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Letterz From The Past


J-o-e

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Wasup ya'll, thought I'd drop this to see what ya'll think....

There is a spot open for another verse if anyone wants to feature on it

Letters From The Past.

I’m Counting These Letters From The Past

Visions Of Being In Gym Class, Picked Last

I’m Steadily Reading Letters From The Past

Haters Telling Me I Should Spit More Fast

U want it done I’ll do it for fun murder one got that son?

Leave the gun throw it in the river no more time to run

I’ve already accepted that I always get rejected, infected

Intercepted reasons for the reasons I’m ill from shítI’ve injected

Think I’m kidding man I’ll telling u I’m tired of bidding

Tired of sinning when I’m not winning, but it’s forbidding

Contradicted while these haters think I’m inflicted

Rap’s my art so I’m addicted, it’s exactly what I predicted

We all die someday so why can’t we make the pain go away

Youths go astray while they parents stump butts on an astray

Letters from the past, from the west, some from the east

Steadily trying to make peace on the streets where there’s beef

MC’s debate whether there hot, but there not, missed they shot

No album dropped, my album didn’t flop, new bens I’ll cop

Hitting the haters regardless, heartless when I’ll just address it

This rap sh*t I finesse it, these fool’s I’ll just impress them..

I’m Counting These Letters From The Past

Visions Of Being In Gym Class, Picked Last

I’m Steadily Reading Letters From The Past

Haters Telling Me I Should Spit More Fast

Back when I was young and I started to, be in the dope game

Dealing cocaine, not profane don’t complicate your brain

People settle for some wood, I’d just have some chronic

Asking Joe you said it would be too good, getting girls hypnotic

I just live on the edge and try to miss it, MC’s I’ll just diss it

I can’t address it because that means I’ll get there wife n kiss it

Miss me too late I’m gone, your all alone what u going to do?

Can’t get the phone, it was disconnected I’ll come and get you

Don’t call me crazy you’ll just set me off before the bet be off

Don’t you dare let me off, just cough and then sweat a lot

I’ll drop the scenario when I went to flow, can’t hack no more

Don’t fúck no hoe, I’ll be chilling smoking cheek chang and cho.

But no! think straight before we start all of the accusations

Infatuations because nations can’t hack the nerve for some rations

Can’t ya’ll think straight for the fate of this earth for what it’s worth

Since big went in a hearse I’ll spit a verse to stop this before it gets worse

I don’t want to see anybody killed, I’m serious for I’ll tell u right now

Mic down put your fists man I’m ready to fight now

I’m Counting These Letters From The Past

Visions Of Being In Gym Class, Picked Last

I’m Steadily Reading Letters From The Past

Haters Telling Me I Should Spit More Fast

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Your wordplay and rhyme scheme was really good in this one! I think you've come such a long way since you first started out. i like a lot of the imagery in this as well. Have you recorded any stuff yet? It'd be interesting to see how your lyrics transcends onto the mc.

My only qualm with this is you rapping about things you might not necessarily live. Sooner or later people will start calling you out for that!

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Thanks Brakes, Nah I havent started recording yet, I should be getting a mic soon lol...and I was only blagging...it's nothing serouis plus this is on the 4th album I've wrote...so by then I will live it haha....

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good one, i liked it i would bust one but im in da library and this sorta aint where my mode reacts, oh yeah joe u done got fye since the last time we used to battle. i might bust a lil freestyle

do wut u feel if its real

whether its skateboardin or blastin da steel

i can feel da hostility when they witness me

out and about skatin,not a z-boy but a beginner is wut im ratin

da impression of my expression is free

so its only common i skateboard,freestyle, and BE

damn i wish i had a home computer,holla

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