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What's up y'all I know it's been awhile since I shared some of the rhymes I've been writing but I wanted to let y'all know that I'm still doin' it well, enjoy:

March 17, 2009 Verse:

I realise how life could go change in an instance

I don't walk around giving up in this buisiness

Many thought I'd die off but they're the ones jumpin' off cliffs

When they're lying soft from their ignorance

No thought you could provide that'll make me give up my gift

Throughout the moments of time I've learned my purpose

Of living on this earth, going full circle to get back where I belong again

My mind has remained elevated off of penetrating

Losin' shine doesn't relate to the equation

Many want to drop off in the middle of a relationship

I understand the ways that this is

I ain't making anyone my wife that tries to stab me with a knife

The analogys you try to provide are nothing but blinded eyesight

Whenever I rhyme it's more like having the guided light

This is not the point of me wanting to pick up a fight

I'm just trying to lead as many as possible down a path leading right

That's the reason I'll continally write

I'm now 24, can't be a child no more

I've been noticing peers throwing their lives away

A lot of y'all think it's ok to settle for second place

But that's not in my thinking with thoughts higher than any ceiling

Can't leave me strapped in for being misleading

Any goal I set I won't rest until it's done

I'm not saying it ain't all right to have fun

But times are too critical to act all dumb

And I feel sorry for anyone that chumps

Themselves to lower level funds

That's right some are getting buried in the dust

By their actions and having less passion

Get slept on like a mattress

Without having a proper reaction

Violations and lots of infractions

Watch yourself before you start laughing

'Cause you'll be the one feeling the most damage

You pay the price if you ain't nice

Debt will get to your head if you tryin' to mess with someone's grind

April 3, 2009 Verse:

Getting these musicals copywritten

Since many of these mcs have bitten

Catching what you're chasing like a ball mitten

Like a manuscript it's broken down into small sections

It's important to shop around before you make selections

Breaking down the law like various sheriffs

Cooking up a storm like curious chefs

A multimedia machine for them all like Will Smith records and flicks

You're in the presence of a true legend in the building

Any overhyped vision gets corrected with the righteous intention

Many of them cowards that were disrespecting have been put to detention

We see how they were conquered when the truth is mentioned

Watch how I'm spazzing out on any verse, it's known as a given

The facts come around to occur on the ways that I'm living

This comes natural as breathing, mc'ing words in an instance

I don't have to swear to come with a flair, this is a breath of fresh air

You fall flat to disappear if you don't rap clear

Getting emotional like an outpouring of tears

Expresses that there's something meant into what we hear

I'm being a true artist reppin' the garden state like my man Redman

I know that there's no merit into what you're saying if you're a rapping dead man

Making sure there's heart into everything is the correct plan

That I continually follow, rather than being hollow

When you're living foul that's a tough pill to swallow

April 7, 2009 Verse:

My name ain't James but I feel worthy enough

Online with my game is the way I'm continually in touch

I maintain on the claim to release so much

Can't run out of things to say since I'm grown up

It ain't always easy to meet up with someone to trust

That's why I felt I had to keep certain things to myself

And the main man up above, it's all about that spiritual love

Having all the material in the world isn't gonna be enough

To say that you have a stake of spiritual wealth

Which is the most priceless thing in itself

So many peeps are hard to please

That's why I spend time alone on my knees

To find some hope and righteous peace

Never know when these days are gonna end

It's hard to know who's really a friend

When some just want to see you dead

But I know in my heart that my soul will never end

My spirit could never feel that debt

It's a bigger high than being a crackhead

Not knocking those that choose that route

But I gotta let you know that's not what I'm about

I used to feel low when the negative heads would doubt

My character since I don't choose to live in a blur

Not running around for no reason like they were

I gotta plan things out before things start to occur

See I refuse to be painted into a corner

If you don't feel me don't waste time dialing my number

Or sending out an email or mentioning me on twitter

Or the other social networks, this is not about name dropping

Or coming up with the highest stock tips

Just to get on the supply of a profit

I'm not trying to be known as a prophet

I just say what's real to my heart

I'm ok to dealing on a new start

If the old ways were stalled, I'm not about to freefall

I stand tall to walk, you won't see me crawl

I don't really know what's real to y'all

If you just want to hog the ball

Getting away from a team concept

Isn't the way you're gonna release stress

Now I display a raw concept to see success

April 30, 2009 Verse:

Every second is meant to be known as a purpose

That's why I stay on to live as I'm still searchin'

No matter how many of y'all been hurting

Each other I stay in as a peaceful brother

I love to eat seafood like my mother

Which I call mama who gave birth to the second version of Gracia

The first is known as my papa, I give 'em the props they deserve

I've been blessed with the intelligence like a surgeon as a master hip hoppa

Never take it for granted when I'm jamming

Bring the total package to those who're understanding

The goal is to be going on as if I'm the last man standing

It's like being a candidate that's running for office

Except none of this is propaganda, I could kick it here at the East coast scene of 'Jersey

Or take it down to the dirty south streets of Alabama, it's all about living in peace and serenity

Bringing the outstanding gramma, with a sense of purity like having virginity

See I ain't gonna stick with her if it just wasn't meant to be

It takes something a bit more proper to be a member of my family tree

You have to weather the storm, but a lot of times when it drizzles suckas wanna leave

See you have to be above the norm to stand up to impress me

Can't just bounce spot to spot acting brainless like a robot

Referred to in the song by KRS ONE and Buckshot

You have to possess something a bit more special

To match the intellect of the NJRebel

I'm not the one that'll just go to settle

Down with any pretty eye chick if she ain't that righteous

In the way she comes up to bring substance

Don't roll with the average sucka if you wanna be known as “Mrs. International”

It's worth more than something to be in the high presence caliber

May 11, 2009 Verse:

I'm about to put a dent into your deceiving plans

Why do you doubt the merit in which I stand?

Times go smooth before the end of a combined command

The evil deeds I impeach while I reach

I make it worth while more than the admission of a seat

And those suckas wonder why they go to sit in defeat

A part of the reason they're out of line is 'cause they're lazy

The other part is they don't use any originality

They don't put they're heart into the various things they scheme

They must think that I should write 'em up a scene

For them to convey as if this was some sort of a play

No mercy on those viacom punks that let these lames in the game

The mag covers are drippin' wack juice from these lagging rap crews

MTV don't even play videos anymore, you gotta watch everything on youtube

All the times they tried to blackball real artists is now they're downfall

'Cause the public has spoken y'all, we can't stand the watered down, needin' something uncut & raw

Nas warned us all that "it's a new world", we're traveling the digital road

All those wack flows ain't even worth a damn download

It's now time for you to contemplate the way I've been commanding to go

There's a legit reason I'm still mc'ing even though I choose to live on the down low

Music is my autobiography and my main boo since it expresses many things I know

I keep these intelligent thoughts flowing freely on the microphone

I remain searching for the truth so the righteous could take the throne

We need to have top notch leadership as we move towards our goals

Many been struggling to keep up, we've all been dreaming about so much

While most don't follow the path to achieve their tasks

Then they go back to wonder why they've been surpassed, that's why I roll unlimited in the way I rap

May 15, 2009 Verse:

This is the clutch time to bring out the magic like Dwight Howard

When you see what's on my mind you can't outlast my power

Since the essence of the grind stands to combine in to devour

I don't let bitterness set in, since I command to avoid finding sour

Thoughts that you could find depressing, it's not the time for being a lying coward

The stakes are too high, I use the de la soul mentality against casulaties

Everyday many die so I know that being in peace has to be a reality

I'm living to provide the soundtrack of mc'ing the mood of actualties

The style is key to track the groove if you wanna hang with me

When you release the right mood the conscience persists freely

Whatever I type out is the igniting sound since these words are key

It's a legit to write down the emotion in the state of being

There's a reason for our existance as human beings

Things could change in an instance through the things we're seeing

But I know that there's a will to go on since I ain't a zombie

When I hold on to somethin' so strong it ignites a flame in my memory

The pain of the game through the veins letting the emotions bleed

Pouring out all the stamina in slaying the amateurs

Providing the hyped gramma to jam some more

Keepin' the crowds packed there's more sound stacked

I take a lot of pride in being black so there's no need to slide back

Into a state of feeling slacked or rollin' sidetracked

Moving forward away from the out of line and wack

These thoughts are towards the ways that're designed exact

Movin' to the hoop wit a powerful slam since I'm that overpowering man

I'm able to stand on to compete, I'm capable as a man to complete

The foundation like concrete since I'm commanding to boost heat

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  • 3 weeks later...

"I'm now 24, can't be a child no more" - I like how you said that.

"You pay the price if you ain't nice

Debt will get to your head if you tryin' to mess with someone's grind" - Total truth right there.

You're in the presence of a true legend in the building

Any overhyped vision gets corrected with the righteous intention

Many of them cowards that were disrespecting have been put to detention

We see how they were conquered when the truth is mentioned - Really awesome set of lines.

I don't really know what's real to y'all

If you just want to hog the ball

Getting away from a team concept

Isn't the way you're gonna release stress

Now I display a raw concept to see success - Like the end of this rhyme a lot. Feeding off of stuff you enjoy is great.

Bringing the outstanding gramma, with a sense of purity like having virginity - Very smart

"You have to possess something a bit more special

To match the intellect of the NJRebel

I'm not the one that'll just go to settle

Down with any pretty eye chick if she ain't that righteous

In the way she comes up to bring substance

Don't roll with the average sucka if you wanna be known as “Mrs. International”

It's worth more than something to be in the high presence caliber" - Killer dope closer set of lines. That's earning respect right there. Good way to speak on it.

"I make it worth while more than the admission of a seat

And those suckas wonder why they go to sit in defeat

A part of the reason they're out of line is 'cause they're lazy

The other part is they don't use any originality" - Nice way to slip creativeness in there and tell the truth.

Nas warned us all that "it's a new world", we're traveling the digital road

All those wack flows ain't even worth a damn download - Kinda made me laugh. At them I mean.

"...It's now time for you to contemplate the way I've been commanding to go

There's a legit reason I'm still mc'ing even though I choose to live on the down low

Music is my autobiography and my main boo since it expresses many things I know" - Nice why to graps what writing meaans to you. Much respect for that.

I take a lot of pride in being black so there's no need to slide back

Into a state of feeling slacked or rollin' sidetracked - Is that that Public Enemy coming outta you? Yeah boy!

Dang Ted, you still got it man. You definitely put use to a lot of your vocab and inspirations of stuff going on around you.

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Thanks for the feedback y'all, it's much appreciated

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