fan 4ever Posted July 11, 2005 Report Share Posted July 11, 2005 Sup y'all, I've uploaded two new songs on my soundclick! I was wondering if y'all could check it out and tell me what you think! One song is the megamix I did a couple months back! I just putted it up online! Check that out! The other one is a song I did for my girl! It's just one verse! Over the Bonny & Clyde beat! Let me know what y'all think! here's the link! My soundclick Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted July 11, 2005 Report Share Posted July 11, 2005 I was just at your page yesterday checkin out some of ya old stuff. Guess I shoulda waited. But anyway, I heard that megamix already. Matter fact I have it. My favorite part was when the Luniz came in. "Adore You" - It's nice joint. The lyrics is real cool. I think U could deliver better tho, like make certain words or lines stick out. Maybe even double vocal. I honestly didn't really like the overall flow of the song. There were spots that fit and then some that didn't. Probably cuz of the length each line had. I always have trouble with this when rappin' a new song that goes perfect wit a beat, but I'll have a line or two that just isn't rhythmically correct and I have to adjust how and when I say it. Even if a lyric seems to perfectly fit, try to vary a lil bit just for the fun of it. U might come out with better results that U like. (and I mean doing this before U record. maybe just havin fun practicin' rhymes to beats) I must say, 'The First Coming' is coming together nicely. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fan 4ever Posted July 11, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2005 Thanx 4 the feedback man! I need to record more tho! I need to get that feeling of recording! I geuss now would be a great time to record some more songs! I need to get a hang of that double vocals tho...could somebody teach me how to do it? If other peeps check it out, feedback is always welcome! :wiggle: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted July 11, 2005 Report Share Posted July 11, 2005 Double vocal could just be u rappin it again wit a slight difference in tone. Will does it. 2pac for sure also. Party Starter is the quickest song I can think of that has bit of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fan 4ever Posted July 11, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2005 Double vocal could just be u rappin it again wit a slight difference in tone. Will does it. 2pac for sure also. Party Starter is the quickest song I can think of that has bit of it. ← I think I get what you mean! I need to work on that! thanx man! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fan 4ever Posted July 14, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2005 How about some more feedback? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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