MissAshley Posted May 29, 2005 Report Share Posted May 29, 2005 (edited) i finally got past my block, be TOTALLY honest, don't bite ur tongue, remember that it's the first thing i've written and completed in months lol Shed A Tear when bad things happen is it okay to cry? when a life is sacrificed and innocent people die would it be a waste of time to get angry over war? simply because i've lost sight of what it is we're fighting for would it really matter if another mother killed her baby? is it really just post-partum or is she really crazy? how many more people have to die before there's a cure for cancer? when can i pose this question and finally get a positive answer? do you really care that AIDS is eating people alive? grown men raping babies, but we turn our heads and close our eyes Amber Alert, another little girl found dead, she'd been abused she was just out with her friend, her daddy killed them, i'm confused is it unfair to cry because my tears won't bring them back home? this happens everyday, does that make it ok, do i just move on? will any of this stick with you, did it make you more aware? if it were you or someone you knew, would that make you care? if tomorrow never comes, is it enough to have today? if you don't believe in God, does it still count when you pray? are you a victim of yourself, do you believe everything you hear? this poem was written to make you think...not to make you shed a tear Ashley *also i may expand it but i'm not sure, it's kinda Tell Me Why inspired but i feel like it's incomplete Edited May 29, 2005 by willjadafan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted May 29, 2005 Report Share Posted May 29, 2005 You put a lot of heart into that, very thought provoking, nice job! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted May 29, 2005 Report Share Posted May 29, 2005 Thats great willjadafan!!!! im glad to see another writer get past a block, i hate them Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissAshley Posted May 31, 2005 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2005 (edited) thnx, i'm still brainstorming cuz i feel like i didn't put enough into it, there's just so much more i want to say, and yeah J-O-E it can be really frustrating, esp. for mths on end, glad to see someone can relate cuz you guys all write great stuff Edited May 31, 2005 by willjadafan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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