Mike Posted June 20, 2006 Report Share Posted June 20, 2006 (edited) this is a poem i wrote, not a rap, its not about me but actually inspiried by someone on this board. the poem exaggerates the story of the guy a little bit. and the person is no longer posting- if your trying to figure out who it was The Failure Written by Concept The least talented wants to [Fit in] His days and time Are devoted to improving His lack of skill The hours Like points Build up inside And add up to surpass his fellow peers Once a failure Now overqualified Veterans look up to him Now he’s risen To that very spot that No one has reached before Rivals engulfed in jealousy And leave him behind All alone What purpose is it now? Another young amateur wants to [Fit in] And it will spawn another failures drive POST what you think it means, im interested to see what you think it means and if i get my message across. Edited June 20, 2006 by Concept Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted June 20, 2006 Report Share Posted June 20, 2006 I think I know exactly who you're talking about. Maybe. Anyway, is it how no matter how much they put in "work", it's not going to measure up to the standard for praise to be given. And I'm scratchin' my head on the line "Peers engulfed in jealousy". :hmm: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted June 20, 2006 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2006 i doubt you have it right lol like i said- its an exaggeration of the story, so nobody here was engulfed in jeaoulsy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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