Luigie Posted March 30, 2006 Report Share Posted March 30, 2006 Dreamin wit my 1st hit - Brotha Luigie [Chrous x2] Im dreamin wit my 1st hit// Awesome flow, aweome beats// Im dreamin wit my 1st hit// Wanna leave forever the back seat// Everyday I wake up wishin my next song will blow// So I run to my desk and write listenin my music very low// I want to deserve respect & love, its essential in my life// My 1st hit for me is like when u want make a girl ur wife// Im still young tryin to grow up and got big dreams// One day my name will sound in the mouth of all human beins// I spent hours here thinkin n lookin for the perfect rhyme// sumtimes I spit good lines, other times: nothing in mind// I remember once I decided to give up and leave the songs// But then a person came and made me understand I was wrong// Since dat moment I decided to never stop workin// Never say im weak cuz one song failed (Hey! keep flowin)// Now I put the rap game first in my list// Im still dreamin wit my 1st hit, dats why I persist// [Chorus x2] I've heard ppl comments sayin I gotta improve// Maybe they'r right, so "perseverance" is my move// Im creatin the formula: dedication plus a bit of inspiration// Then multiply dat wit "motivation"// I got dat clear but still need sumthin// Oh yeah, I forgot luck witout it the rest is nuthin// Now the formula, recipe watever u call it its done// Put it in practice n u'll see how rings ya phone// New opportunities, the chance u waited so long// Im still waitin for my chance to show my songs// I still need the goddamn luck// No first hit, im disappointed, dis sucks// Why other weak rappers got first hits // They only got luck, don understand, gotta persist// [Chrous x2] Hope y'all will like it, comments will be apreciated :1-smile: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted March 30, 2006 Report Share Posted March 30, 2006 My 1st hit for me is like when u want make a girl ur wife// ha. That must be a great feeling! :kekeke: so keep 'dreamin' for your 1st hit... Will Smith even said that dreams do come true... peace, cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted March 30, 2006 Report Share Posted March 30, 2006 Great song, Luigie. Didn't you say that was going to be a "Da Homeboyz" song? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted March 30, 2006 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2006 (edited) Great song, Luigie. Didn't you say that was going to be a "Da Homeboyz" song? yeah but i couldnt wait till mac daddy is well...anyway da homeboyz could remix it!, we can discuss it by PM's thnks for the comment, thnks to u too cookies Edited March 30, 2006 by Luigie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andreik Posted March 31, 2006 Report Share Posted March 31, 2006 :2thumbs: great song luigie!! cant wait to listen the audio Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel Amor Posted March 31, 2006 Report Share Posted March 31, 2006 Great song there man :2thumbs: cant wait 4 the audio :yeah: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ash trey Posted April 1, 2006 Report Share Posted April 1, 2006 Great! In my opinion better than da Homeboyz song- no offence to the rest of da Homeboyz. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted April 1, 2006 Report Share Posted April 1, 2006 It's cool, ash trey. Us "Homeboyz" are re-doing it so it will be a lot better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted April 1, 2006 Report Share Posted April 1, 2006 "Im still young tryin to grow up and got big dreams// One day my name will sound in the mouth of all human beins//" - I like the envisioning of that "Now I put the rap game first in my list// Im still dreamin wit my 1st hit, dats why I persist//" - nice eye openin' ending This would be nice as an underground hit to bring you on the rise. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted April 1, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2006 thnks a lot! :1-smile: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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