Mike Posted February 17, 2006 Report Share Posted February 17, 2006 (edited) i think it still needs some finishing touches otherwise i think its good, tell me what you guys think! Wordplay Written by Mike (Concept) Wondrous wordplay discompose my foes Without woven words, it worsens their flows Pens and paper persistently pause Like no poetry power pumpin, possessing no cause Ecstatic with energy exercising my mind Like the only soul left within all mankind Making minds move memories made Motivation created but mans magic fades Friendships fall, fierce fires fought Fires inside, money conquers thought Armor equipped brain, always alert Excessively active only amongst the assert Destined datelines die, promises decrease Desire for the dollar, dares to dream decease The liars lunge at leftover lyrics Like the lions leap with all of their spirit Don’t rap about death cause people end up dead All lyrics are literal once they’ve been said I rap about truth hoping peace comes through And wish that people listenin adopt my views Instead people are getting hypnotized with lies Pimpin and sex is what all their flows advise All I hear lyrical is about bitches and hate Influence the kids and it switches their fate Bloody battles blastin within their brain Power, lust and reign which they can’t maintain I’m a lyricist reborn came outta the **** Now I don’t front hardcore whenever I spit Ya’ll should really try the Concept effect A.k.a. spawn an idea that can get respect ‘Cause then you get better’n and better’n Then you spit like a veteran Start to make the cheddar’n Got everything you need: values and money Respect in this game is sweeter than honey I’ll tell ya, the taste of praise Can get me going for days And when im done, my lyrics always amaze Edited February 17, 2006 by WILL IS ILL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted February 17, 2006 Report Share Posted February 17, 2006 it's really good...an awesome chorus n its all perfect! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted February 18, 2006 Report Share Posted February 18, 2006 :word: I like it a lot, nice job man! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted February 19, 2006 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2006 (edited) im thinking ofr a hook it will be "lies advise hate brains cant main sh!t i spit the concept effect can get respect what" im thinking to be spit like the hook on ''it just dont stop'' by the roots but a little fast. same breaks in lines --and thinking i should write another verse and why doesnt anyone reply? i see like 30 views on the topic Edited February 19, 2006 by WILL IS ILL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Tiger Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 It's good, I like the first verse more, but they're both good. Nice job. God Blessa! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted February 24, 2006 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2006 (edited) new verse in it! bullets blast now become a blessin violence repeats but we still ignore the lesson the lyrics off, bad message grows music forver ruined like new stained clothes Hidden hip hop halos bust, retract the reason Ridden with ridicules rust, lay low its rap season id rather reach out refreshin radio stations and repair rare respect for hip hop in the nations number one steriotyped songs that sell people favor old school, cause reall hip hop fell now im lookin to bring love back to rap get lost in the message throw away the map find your own way there, through any artist or song as long as it has sense, no chouce is wrong when your locked in, never turn back if you got a clear mind, why waste money on crack next level up, hear intelligent spit next level up, write your own smart **** now at the top of the class, you now know all But with that attitude, your bound to fall Jacobs ladder, foever you'll climb Neglect concept effect,you dont deserve to rhyme (Chorus) so all together thats 59 bars now i just have to make the damn song!! Edited February 24, 2006 by WILL IS ILL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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