Luigie vs vstherealest: Round 1

[Hero1]

32 Lines each

Luigie First

24 hours to post your rhyme

voting opens once both verses are posted

voting closed 24 hours later

[Luigie]

Ayo!, this Luigie rhymin in ya face my dear realest,

i dont know u but im definetly sure u aint the best,

Wit my simples lines i'll achive my raise,

defeatin ya i'll begin to win this "rappin race",

let me show u how Brotha Luigie do this,

write on ya notebook, hey! plz! bust this!,

I wish i could do my rhymin really fast,

Dem! 32 lines r more than enough to blast,

Yeah!, my 1st language aint english, neither Im american,

So u can say "I was beaten by a Southamerican",

This is an experience u wont forget,

trust me, this 1st round is the closest to victory u'll get,

I can manage any rhyme, at any time,

this is wat makes me special, my ability is almost divine,

Im not possin, im just tellin the pure true,

My lyrics will make urs run away wit a simple "boo",

So i came here lookin for a victory,

pay attention this will be repeated as the same story,

Verse by verse u'll see i'm gonna win every match,

For u this probaly looks hard, i can see u r an easy catch,

yeah! an easy opponent, an easy foe, watever,

the thing here is between me n u, im better,

U probably could say Im young n inmature,

But u see i got the skill in my genes, enough to beat a mature,

Im didnt come here to start cursin somebody,

Dont provoke me i can be rude too buddie,

So after this "rappin class" i hope now u know,

That me, Brotha Luigie, is the toughest foe,

Also u must get noticed that i dont use "muthaf*ka" or "sh*t",

why? u say, because i dont need that crap u can bet,

Ok? thats clear?, my lines r clean but can give sum pounds,

Enough said pay attention to me the next round.

[Luigie]

woohoo??? Realest r ya there??? *eco eco*...

[the_bigmac]

can you hear me scout..................

[Hero1]

luigie advances