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UNTIL THE END OF TIME


Snouf

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I wrote this poem 1 year ago so it's really old but I think it's still good! Was my first poem in english so you might find some mistakes. Please tell me what you think!

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Dedicated to... my best friend? - written on July, 28th 2004

UNTIL THE END OF TIME

Take some time and listen to my words

I love you baby, but you don't, that hurts

Remember the good times we shared?

Now it's all over, that's not fair

You will always be in my heart

Because you showed me how to love

The truest love I have ever seen

Unconditional love, that's what it has been

I keep your secrets like you do with mine

I will always love you

UNTIL THE END OF TIME!

Even are you still down, remember me

'Cause I will make you smile and feel free

But if I die, will you be there to mourn me?

All I can do is to be there for you

Also when the day is dark and sad

I will be around that's not bad

It's all about passion you're my best friend

Hopefully this relationship will never end

'Cause I can't breath without you, understand?

Everything is fine, I love you baby

UNTIL THE END OF TIME!

Sometimes I have treated you bad

But please forgive me, it was all so sad

Suicidal thoughts, I didn't know what to do

There was one thing which kept me going, it was you

Hopefully you will understand me one day

That's important for me because I want to stay

Stay with you every dark night

If I have to, believe me, I will fight

Don't worry girl I'm a soldier, right?

We could never be enemies

Because you have been such a good friend to me

And I want to let you know with this rhyme

That I will always be there for you

UNTIL THE END OF TIME!

"If I could turn back the hands of time, you still would be mine!" - Snouf

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HEy Snouf...thats a really sweet poem you wrote. I love hearing the sensitive side of a man's heart like that. Nice job...

I like that pic in ur sig. Kinda blurry but thats my fault... lmbo

peace,

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Thank you! But it's hard to write something in another language and put real emotions in it, my english is not that good but I think it's ok.

@the pic: yes I checked your site because the url got the word "design" in it hehe, I'm interested in design and I like your artwork, you got some huge talent! I saw the picture of Jeff and I had to put it in my signature :2thumbs:

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