Members Snouf Posted July 27, 2005 Members Report Share Posted July 27, 2005 I wrote this poem 1 year ago so it's really old but I think it's still good! Was my first poem in english so you might find some mistakes. Please tell me what you think! ------------------------ Dedicated to... my best friend? - written on July, 28th 2004 UNTIL THE END OF TIME Take some time and listen to my words I love you baby, but you don't, that hurts Remember the good times we shared? Now it's all over, that's not fair You will always be in my heart Because you showed me how to love The truest love I have ever seen Unconditional love, that's what it has been I keep your secrets like you do with mine I will always love you UNTIL THE END OF TIME! Even are you still down, remember me 'Cause I will make you smile and feel free But if I die, will you be there to mourn me? All I can do is to be there for you Also when the day is dark and sad I will be around that's not bad It's all about passion you're my best friend Hopefully this relationship will never end 'Cause I can't breath without you, understand? Everything is fine, I love you baby UNTIL THE END OF TIME! Sometimes I have treated you bad But please forgive me, it was all so sad Suicidal thoughts, I didn't know what to do There was one thing which kept me going, it was you Hopefully you will understand me one day That's important for me because I want to stay Stay with you every dark night If I have to, believe me, I will fight Don't worry girl I'm a soldier, right? We could never be enemies Because you have been such a good friend to me And I want to let you know with this rhyme That I will always be there for you UNTIL THE END OF TIME! "If I could turn back the hands of time, you still would be mine!" - Snouf Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted July 27, 2005 Report Share Posted July 27, 2005 very good i loved it! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresh-Ta-Def Posted July 27, 2005 Report Share Posted July 27, 2005 ncie one there man good job on that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Snouf Posted July 28, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted July 28, 2005 Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted July 28, 2005 Report Share Posted July 28, 2005 HEy Snouf...thats a really sweet poem you wrote. I love hearing the sensitive side of a man's heart like that. Nice job... I like that pic in ur sig. Kinda blurry but thats my fault... lmbo peace, cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Snouf Posted July 28, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted July 28, 2005 Thank you! But it's hard to write something in another language and put real emotions in it, my english is not that good but I think it's ok. @the pic: yes I checked your site because the url got the word "design" in it hehe, I'm interested in design and I like your artwork, you got some huge talent! I saw the picture of Jeff and I had to put it in my signature :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted July 28, 2005 Report Share Posted July 28, 2005 That was a great poem! Great job on that! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members Snouf Posted July 28, 2005 Author Members Report Share Posted July 28, 2005 Cool, thank you very much! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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