Members willsmithfan1 Posted July 26, 2005 Members Report Share Posted July 26, 2005 Hey, I wrote my first poem a week ago. Let me know what you think. Advice always appreciated. The First Day It all starts from the day of your birth That's when you were introduced to Earth day by day you started to grow week by week more and more starts to show as you get older things start to change everything happens in its own range as you get older your life will get colder and there's nobody for you to tell people all the hard times you been through all you see now is people with crews and you have many different views as it gets harder, you start to crack mad as you are, you get your own back you tried to kill yourself all you did was hurt someone else now you're dead everything has shred as we get on with life with our own way always look back to your first day Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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