Luigie Posted July 2, 2005 Report Share Posted July 2, 2005 i made a small rhyme, what do u think, if u find errors (what is very probable) let me know, i want to improve my rhymes :5-scared: It is time to groove wit this so take the dance floor plz, all the chicks move ya hips and enjoy this real cool hit. In da club u say "oh!" like my brother called jhon, he's a real cool boy and he also gots flow. hey!, back off here comes Luigie to destroy u shout "Oh my lord" and i keep my unique flow. Eminem is whack and Will always stays high i also keep high everybody here is hot. if u ladies want to dance, dont give to Em a chance he even got style i got Big Willie style. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted July 3, 2005 Report Share Posted July 3, 2005 It's quite short. Try to make your lines longer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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