my updated Will song

[Viktor]

It was so fun wrighting that rhyme I posted in the JJFP anthem post I just had to do a little more... comments and pointers are welcome... this is the 2nd rhyme i ever wright.. so be gentle..

It's time for Big Will to live up to his reputation

as the old school hip-hop sensation

I've heard the buzz about the cuzz in the Nice Guy lyric

but you haven't heard it, go out and buy it

Dj Jazzy Jeff & the Fresh Prince back up in ya face

featuring the best song since nr.2 on Homebase

you see all your friends Gettin' Jiggy Wit this season

now you know Lost & Found is the reason

Chorus:

Don't settle with less

Here comes the ess

for the big test

of his quest

to put the rest to rest

Big will is back!

for the final attack!

Don't settle with less

Here comes the ess

for the big test

of his quest

to put the rest to rest

He's raising from the ashes

taking a break from where the cash is

stepping up to the mic

and just like u never forget how to ride a bike

he will show

that he still know

how he used to do

when he was rapping

before he started acting

and when he sing

u really feel the swing

that he bring

the swing

that will ring

in your ears

for years

wondering if it made his mother proud? no need to bother

when refrigerator installation was the job of his father

he could have become a MIT engineer

but he didn't fear

to rear

he gave celebrity a chance

and started to glance

while entertaining the fans

to all of you who's sick of people always going on

about so called real gangstas from Compton

I'm proud to be a fan

of a family man!

Chorus:

Don't settle with less

Here comes the ess

for the big test

of his quest

to put the rest to rest

Big will is back!

for the final attack!

Don't settle with less

Here comes the ess

for the big test

of his quest

to put the rest to rest

(sorry for spelling misstakes)

I'm unsure about some words here.. fist I don't if the english word "ess" is the same as in swedish, it means the A in a card deck ( the best card there is)

2nd: the word rear, as standing up. don't know if this is commonly used but i found it in a dictionary. I'm not talking about anybodys ass here.

[mfuqua23]

That's not half bad. Lines a lil too short tho.

[Mike]

pretty good for a 2nd rap, some lines didnt really rhyme tho