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Posts posted by Don Jiggy
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i probably get struck by lightning from tha stuff that i say
im like jay-z what more can i say
i just want respect and some tips to get better
but yall find ways to put me under the weather
i battle for fun it can get offensive at times
but what else can i say when you dissin my rhymes
yeah im an amatuer writer but at times i get tighter
at least i have courage to say it like a suicide fighter
i give props to everybody in this message board
do i not respond when you post somethin on the board
:blabla: thats what my rhymes sound like to me
im not on the level to think about it positively
i dont even wanna be a rapper its just fun
i like the idea of rhymes swirlin in yo head like a cinnimon bun
i figured i'd kick a freestyle to show you i can
and then think for a minute, yeah don jiggy tha man
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willisill yo rhymes are cool, i aint gon front wit cha/
but it's only my duty to get on point wit cha/
in case you havent fully read and understood my last post/
you know tha one when i roasted bagotrasho into toast/
i said say what you got to say in a short verse/
i see you got board and had nothin to do but count tha lines in my verse/
and thats tha worst/
you say i dont play defense, why should i/
i play offense so well it doesnt matter if you got the ball i/
rhyme so dangerous you might need to wear a vest/
cuz i shoot off rhymes that can penetrate yo chest/
and that goes out anyone else that wanna test/
In case you havent noticed this rap page has been put to rest/
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the freestyle was booty i know but i was feelin the hype :ali:
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i like it :blabla: .............IT WAS FYE!!!! i wanna hear it
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hell yeah boy!! thats what im talkin about, spoken like a real mc, it makes me wanna get on the subject if its alright wit you im about to freestyle on it
should i wear g-units because 50 got hit 9 times
well i sure wouldnt because of his rhymes
i aint gone lie, i want sidekick cause snoop had one
other than that nobody in the world would have one
i guess 50 cant make a whole dollar
cause he need the whole g-unit to make a girl holla
now lets talk about the boost phone
they got luda,kanye, and game freestylin on cell phone
if that aint exploitation i dont know what it is
lame companies usin rappers to boost up they biz
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you know what was missin....me on tha track lol :hilarious:
it was good tho other than that
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i must say this, the ppl on this forum are not rappers..... you're artist, you guys actually talk about something. everytime i read one of you guys raps i smile from enjoyment. we need more ppl in the game with a message like you guys, me, i havent reached my peak yet, but one day im a join yall
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good message, thumbs :thumb:
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i likes, good side-bad side :werd:
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woooo! :bounce: i liked it alot
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yeah i do force it sometimes, but most times it come natural
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i give it a 1/10, i hate the song i made, for some reason i never like what i do
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i decided to just write the song instead of a verse, so yall can tell me whats wrong with it
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verse: guns and ammunition/
get ready for competition/
Hemi spit hotter rocks the heavyhitters stay missin/
the mic glissens cuz its my weopon of choice/
the ammunition is the wisdom in mind using my voice/
how many people you gon kill in yo verse/
i can do this rhyme without a curse/
or stickin anyone in a hearse/
my rhymes worsem they wont leave me alone/
so i see it as a destiny to get on the microphone/
and express what im feelin at that time in a rhyme/
like Bonnie and Clyde, natural born killers when we ride/
me and my mic 2005/
chorus: i cant see nobody/
but you and me/
on stage tag-teamin/
the crowd still screamin/
so lets go wit tha flow/
i gotta a whole lot mo/
lets flow til they scream for an encore/
me and my mic/
verse2: you gonna feel my reign/
I bring the pain/
I start a whole new era in this hip hop game/
I got tha courage of a suicide bomber/
and make my enemies hide in caves for years like Osama/
I been spitten for years im gettin harder/
i found joy now i shed no more tears like 2paca/
i keep the party jumpin from the front to tha rear/
rockin military gear i shake yo mind wit fear/
aint no better tag-team Kobe and Shaq, Jordan and Pippen/
me and my mic stay rippin/
im a keep dippin in my lac/
leaned over like my hat/
millionare like Bruce Wayne but i dont mess wit bats/
you got a question homie check tha stats/
my pockets stay plump like Monique and theyll never go flat/
(Chorus)
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yeah, i did quit once, and came back to my pad and pen with a whole new style. But i just dont know, i love to write, i have a passion for it, i just think i dont have the right potential or somethin
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look, i write alot of stuff, i been doin it for like 2 years. nothing i write is just to my approval, but my friends say its straight. i mostly just write verses not songs, and i cant help thinkin i should just quit. i need guidence
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i dig it, but stop bitin my rhymes.lol
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yeah fye mean hot, sizzlin, you raw
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get what im sayin, i hate to see a creative person get bit and a sucker is on tv wit yo stuff
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damn you, you bit my song!!!!
lol just kidding it was fye
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posting your songs like that, someone could bite your creative style
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"wade in the water"
he performed "boom shake the room" on a special episode
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how much homie, im interested
i need advice from rap writers
in Caught in the Middle
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aight
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