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  3. Just One Verse

    in Caught in the Middle

    Posted · Edited by Its JP

    I dont know, this verse just kind of flowed out of me and i wrote it down, just wrote it a couple minutes ago, let me know what you all think, sorry about the swearing

    "Just One Verse"

    I'm tired of all these girls bitchin and naggin

    About seein my boxers cuz my pants is saggin

    All of these ****in hoes thinkin im a wigger

    Well bitch guess what, youre a gold digger

    You can't stop it cuz my rhymes are so vigorus

    Everybody says I need to get rigorous

    Well I'm havin trouble tryin to figure this

    Out, What is my life all about

    But I can't really get an answer that looks clear

    Can't figure out why I was put here

    When I rap I see the looks of fear

    Because I'm rappin things a 14 year old shouldnt even hear

    Like rapin sluts, takin drugs, wakin up

    With a hangover thats so severe

    And no I'm not liein im bein sincere

    I wish that I could just disappear

    And escape the conflict, It's all nonsense

    Gettin yelled at because of my lyrics contents

    Its not just rap its my life I'm writin

    Sittin in my basement hearin my parents fightin

    So now I'm hidin like Bin Ladden

    Cuz I'm wanted

    By my dad, cuz his day was bad

    So now he has to make sure I feel sad

    So he calls me upstairs

    And my mother doesnt even care

    Yells at me for everything that ive done

    The verse isnt over its just begun

    Because now I see him takin off his belt

    I can't even describe the pain I've felt

    As he pulls back his arm, and I shield my face

    I see his veins pop out, face filled with rage

    And then his arm flies forward

    I'm struck with horror

    Belt slappin against my knuckle

    And my dad just wants to chuckle

    So he hits me in the head with the ****in buckle

    I swear to god someday I'll succeed I said

    I'll get repayment for all the blood that I've ever bled

    Keep on fightin until I'm dead

    I can say the words again and again

    And I can express myself with a pen

    As the ink hits the paper

    I start to feel safer

    Cuz my rhymes are like a barrier

    They make things seem much less scarier

    Now everything seems ****ed up

    My ****in lucks up

    Thoughts swirlin through my head about slittin my throat

    But then I realize, what will happen with the rhymes I wrote

    I just wish that I could ****in leave

    What goes through my heads you wouldnt beleive

    But I'm startin a new world up, like Adam and Eve

    A world of people who think like me

    Who dont give a **** and they just smoke weed

    But I know none of that is ever gonna happen

    Whatever, **** it, I'm done rappin

  12. ReneGay Tim

    in Caught in the Middle

    Posted

    Well Renegay Tim has been sturrin up a bunch of trouble lately and no one really has officaly came out and dissed him yet in a song, so i was bored, figured id do it to waste some time

    "ReneGay Tim"

    Verse 1

    I've been quiet about it all along

    Everytime this little punk posts a new song

    I sit there and read, on my hair i pull

    because his raps are so unbearable

    Some beginner claimin to be an MC

    Thinks rap is his expertise

    But really he's just some disease

    And everyone on this damn forum agrees

    That he needs to be takin out of the picture

    Hey Lerkot, I think Tim wants to get with ya

    Cuz Renegade is Renegay

    No one cares what this faggot has to say

    I cant wait to see his 400 Bar rap essay

    400 Bars Tim? What is somethin wrong?

    Just because Lerkot made fun of your song?

    Come on Renegay why you need to act so ghetto?

    You could get more fans by singin falsetto

    The more **** you talk, the harder you fall

    No use written a diss, you can't rap at all

    Come on Renegay don't even act tough

    You say youre a better rapper, well I'm callin your bluff

    Chorus

    Come on Renegay just knock the crap off

    Stop startin fights and just back off

    Just so you know don't waste your time

    Cuz we could all bring you down with just one rhyme

    Verse 2

    Hes 14 and from virginia, hes been quoted

    If theres no rhymescheme or flow, you know Renegay wrote it

    So now here I am writin a story

    About this punk little kid whos startin to bore me

    He keeps talkin crap and writin these raps

    But can't get it through his head no one likes that

    He needs to stop runnin his mouth

    About the hoods of the south

    Because it makes me wanna shout

    JUST CUT THIS CRAP OUT

    Nobody's buyin your poser act

    And your rhymes abstract

    You go up on stage thinkin ur rappin

    But you're just talkin and nobodys clappin

    And you're gums youre just flappin

    But someday your mouths gonna get you killed

    I'm not makin a threat, I'm just tellin the truth

    So you can stutter a diss, no one cares dude

    Chorus

  13. Welcome to Virginia - the music video!

    in Caught in the Middle

    Posted

    Alright, settle down Tim, just so you know you have no flow, you don't have skill, and its not our fault if u run for four hours and then record, heres an idea, WAIT TILL LATER, and a crappy mic is so excuse if u stutter and cant flow, You are the poser, talking about southern hoods and crap, JUST SHUT UP, youre not gonna kill anyone, every rapper on this forum could dismantle you without breaking a sweat, and as for maddblock, youre the maddblock of the forum now Tim, and as for your 10 gigs, your relatives birthday parties dont count.

  21. DaAce-Pet_vs_Owner(Bow_Wow_Diss)

    in Caught in the Middle

    Posted

    he insults me all the time

    Hmmmmmm I wonder why :nhawong:

    I'm with Lerkot on this one, it was just plain ignorant and stupid

    and Renegade i know its not the time to say this, and its not polite, but hey, i think you deserve to be insulted, to me u sound like some little kid whos just says ignorant crap and writes these raps that are uhm................. :interesting: i'd have to say when you're rapping about the hood and i believe ur 14? I don't think you should be sayin stuff about Lerkot, he would beat u in a battle ANY DAY

    but..... :topic:

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