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"Secret Love"
Chorus
It's a crazy thing
Like daisy's bloomin in spring
It can pop up at anytime, anywhere
You'll never be prepared
But don't be scared
Everyone's got one to speak of
Everyone's got one secret love
Verse 1
The smell of her hair, the sparkle in her smile
Makes me thing chasin her just may be worth while
When I look in her eyes and I see me
It makes me feel like I'm part of her, and she's part of me
Like we were meant for each other and together forever we'll be
I'll make sure of it, Nothin ever comes between us
It all happened so fast you probaly couldn't of seen us
Not even if you tried, if you opened your eyes
It's somethin you can't deny
You've seen people cry
Because of somethin crazy no one can describe
When you get a feelin, your head just hits the ceilin
You might get wounds that need sealin and healin
But if you're lucky, you'll find someone who can fix your scars
Someone who can be your sun, moon, and the stars
Someone who's always next to you standin, a companion
Filled with love, always carin and understandin
Everybody has someone already in mind
Whether you're a girl or a guy, someone's always catchin your eye
You can try and lie, or cover it up
But deep down inside, everyone's got a secret love
Chorus
Verse 2
There ain't no definition, there ain't no description
It's called love, and I think I need a prescription
Cuz deep down everyone's lookin for one thing
Whether it be years of love, of just one fling
Everyone prays everyday for someone to share their life with
I'm writin the truth, I don't write myths
No matter who it is, whoever it be
They're lookin for love on some personal degree
Everyone wants that one special person in their life
Whether it just be girlfriend or a wife
There's nobody out there that can make it by theirself
Everyone out there needs help from someone else
Don't be afraid to admit it, I get it, I've been through it myself
I wouldn't trade the feelin for any amount of wealth
Bein in love is a great thing, almost like magic
The only thing is, it can end up tragic
I make it sound great, but with every love theres hate
Hidin in the shadows, it'll make you feel bad, Yo
But you gotta fight it, you gotta live through
So you can get that secret love to come true
Chorus
Verse 3
Love's an amazing thing, nothin to mess with
With every relief it brings stress with
There was always someone who'd say
"Love is a strong word" I'd be like, yeah ok
Till I found out on my own
Loves somethin to be left alone
That is, until you know what it is
Till you have a full understandin
It can be demandin
Could be a match made in heaven
Or could be a crash landin
Loves more than a word, be careful how you use it
Its somethin special, be careful not to abuse it
Love can make you laugh, love can make you cry
Love can make you dance, love can make you wanna die
Love can be your best friend, or your worst enemy
Trust me, love hasn't always been a friend of me
It's put me through hell, made me go insane
Took the screws from my brain, it's hard to explain
It's like once you been in love, you'll never be the same
So just let life go at its own pace, don't push and shove
Someday everyone'll find their secret love
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Im in all the way
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@ Turntable
Talkin about stolen rhymes, but oh their mine
Got more skill than you and joe combined
Your raps are the worst without a doubt
You're so bad, no one knew who you were talkin about
Makin gay jokes? You'll stay broke
You ain't good, you just say so
Ya wanna be LL, whats with the sig of kenan and kel
Man get with the times, get some new rhymes
You aint sayin SH!T, like you was a mime
@ Pakalicious
Well, first of man, you didn't diss me
If you tried, I guess you missed me
You say I need some trainin
Well you need to do some explain
You're jus sittin there bitchin and complainin
Yeah I'm a con, bendin over your mom
And fu<kin the bitch without a condom on
Yeah wheres this pimp Renegay
But yeah, all for fun........unless its renegay
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I'll be there in a jiffy, to **** up tiffy
Pop you 9 times, with 9 rhymes, like ur names fifty
I'll take you down, faster than anyone around
Drag you all over the town with your face in the ground
Yeah what now?
And look its ash trey, whatd that ass say?
I'm sensin some tension, this bitch thinks hes bein mentioned
I'll rip you apart man, face the drama
Your names on my lips? Well my lips on ya moma
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This ain't Wild N Out, there aint no Nick Cannon
What we got here is a bunch of wanna be MCs, ravin and rantin
2 lines is all I need to say, To take both Treys away
Leavein ash trey in ashes
Hi-jackin his rhymes like planes and leadin them to crashes
Somethin seems suspicious about Lerkot and Pakalicious
These two dudes are in disguiuse, in real life theyre wack ass bitches
Who else we got rappin; Look its Turntable
Two words to describe his rap "weren't able"
Then we got J-O-E, wonder what he'll say to me
Joe with a real rhyme, thats somethin I'd pay to see
To finish it off, we got VA's Renegay, The so called finest
If you're that good, why are you always behind us
Lookin at our asses, it ain't a phase, it aint passin
This dudes a homosexual, redneck, rappin faggot
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Yeah, I wrote this last night, and some of it doesn't rhyme, doesn't flow, whatver, i dont care, i dont really carewhat you think about it, i know it swears, well i write with swears, so look past it.
I'm sick and tired of missin on out the **** that I desire
No matter what I do, somebodys always higher
Always gettin out-shined, always gettin out-rhymed
I'll never be the best no matter how hard I try
Sometime I just feel like quittin, **** spittin
Throw in the towel, I'm sick of the **** that I'm gettin
But if I was to ever qive up, I wouldn't live up
To what I promised I'd accomplish
Said I'd never fall behind, Always be on top of this
You bitches ain't stoppin this
The more you criticize, the more of you bitches die
And eat your own words, I'll defeat you posers
You mother****ers who think that you better than me
Why? Cuz you mother****ers said **** to me
No matter what you say, I'm waitin for the day
When we meet face to face, It'll be a different case
I'll show you ****in jackasses, who has the laughs and
Giggles, you so called criminals, you bitches
Watch as I spit this, its a lyrical miracle
You bitches don't fear me though
When I should be what you're most afraid of
Cuz I'm roastin haters, boastin skills
the most debated, force the chills
I'll give you useless chumps the goosebumps
I say one line and draws drop
Grab my balls and ya'll stop
You wanna call me a wigger, tryin to judge me
When you know nothin about me, tryin to shove me
Try and start some ****, see what happens
Yeah I'm white bitch, you see me rappen
And you just can't stand it, sayin its my fault I rap
Like I just planned it
Like I really want to get judged, and called a wigger
Say it again man, I'll become a grave digger
Throw you right in, bury you alive
Get ready man, cuz I have arrived
The new rookie, and lookie, he's white
Not only he's white, but he's livin a good life
Not from the hood, this **** ain't right
But this kid's tight
I'm the ****, admit it, you ain't gotta hide it
You loved it when you first heard it
It was absurd, you were let speechless
Tryin to reach this, left you whiter than bleach bitch
I'm not a preacher or a teacher
I'm not a thug or gangster
I'm not a wigger or a prankster
I'm me, and thats all I'll ever be
Not pretendin to be ****, I'm endin this G ****
I'm spendin my weekends, in my room puttin together these raps
But for what? where am I goin with that
Sometimes the only way I say what I want, is with a pen
But then it happens again, I freeze up, I can't think
I blink, the words disappear from my mind
Like this rhyme just went away in front of my own eyes
But wheres it gonna get me, where will I end up
So what if I can rap, the **** is pointless
Sorry for the disappointment
But I don't give a **** how you feel
I don't give a ****, im ideal
I'm what you wanna be, and I know it
The look in your eyes shows it
I can see it all, right on the ball
But I will stand tall, I will not fall
I'll live though it all
And when the worst comes to worst
I'll pick up a pen and as this **** just gets worse
I'll holler and curse in a verse
But what does it do for me,
Rap doesnt want nothin to do with me
Cuz I'm the wrong color, wrong age
Come from the wrong place, with the wrong name
But I got the skills, I got the song for the game
I can spill my heart out on a track
Doesn't that mean ****?
I spit rhymes so fast its like my mouth is an uzi
Then I look around at you tryin to abuse me
That ****s confusing
You used to be with me, now you against me
**** you dawg, I don't need friends
**** Friendship, I've been in ****
My friends never came to help me out
Friends are bull****, just somethin to talk about
Cuz nobody really gives a **** about anyone
Including me and you, You don't give a **** about me
And I don't give a **** if you do.
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The bears got compltly screwed: two words "Godamnit Angelo"
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Was this really your first effort at writing? For a beginner that was very good.
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R.I.P. PROOF, he was a great rapper
But im confused, was it just Proof that was shot, or were other people from D12 really shot too? Somebody wanna clear this up?
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Alright, I'm gonna go against Ted, hopefully it works out, I don't see how you could say Eminem is one of the most overated rappers of all time. Is it just cuz he raps in a different style than you like Ted? Because Eminem is a genious at lyricism and has some of the best wordplay I've ever seen.
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Well FuQ, that every guy and every bitch thing was that her and all her friends told me I was just like every other guy in the world, and when i tried to tell my friends that she was different they said she was just like every other girl and she just wanted me to buy her stuff and all that. So I hope that clears it up
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thanks for the feedback
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Well, I broke up with my girlfriend, and she was crying and I felt really bad lately. Plus, now I've been regretting breaking up with her. So I wrote this song about 10 minutes ago, hope you like it, sorry if you get upset about the swears in it but I wrote it like that so I'm keepin it like that, sorry if it offends you.
" I'm Sorry"
Verse 1
Yeah I fu[ked up I dont know what else there is to say
You were always there for me and I just pushed you away
I said I love you and youd always say I love you too
But how much I loved you I never even knew
From the second I said those words, I knew I ****ed up bad
I just lost the only girl who ment **** to me, the only one i ever had
I know I made you sad, and I know I made you cry
And for that I just feel like I should go and die
I'm an asshole, I can see that now
When I look back on you all I can say is wow
I sure did love you more than anyone I knew
So why did I have to be so fu[kin stupid
How the fu[k could I lose you?
How the fu[k could I allow myself to be so fu[kin dumb
Now I just take a look back on what we have become
Chorus
I never knew how I much I loved you until the day you were gone
We used to stay up on the phone from sunset to dawn
But now we're seperated, broken apart
What I did just wasn't too smart
I lost the only thing that ever ment anything to me
So all I can say is sorry, and I still love you baby
Verse 2
Theres nothin I can do or say to make everything all better
And theres nothing thats ever gonna make us forget it
I could write you a love letter, but you'd probaly just throw it away
You've got every right to hate me and feel betrayed
How the hell could I be so sense-less
Now this is some intense sh!t
I'm puttin down my defenses
I deserve to hear all the **** you have to say
Now I've got your friends yellin at me all day
Like I already didn't know that I made a mistake
I remember when we used to stay awake
On the phone, up all night, so late
How could I take your heart and let it break
I need to learn to be a man, so all this **** im gonna take
I agree with everything you say, I'm a fu[kin d!ck
Just like every other guy, and you're just like every other bitch
But what makes me and you so different
Is that we're in love, and nothin can change it
Chorus
Verse 3
I'm expressin every feelin I have, in this little rap
And you were right, I do deserve to get slapped
Right across the face, I'm a ****in disgrace
But theres a space in my heart that no one can replace
And that place is ment for you, but now its empty space
Hopefully you'll fill it again some day, and everything will be ok
All I ask for is for you to let me pay my amends
But you won't, so I'm expressin myself with a pen
This is at its end, it's had its twists and bends
And somethin tells me we won't even be friends
I asked if we could still be friends you said it depends
And 10 times out 10, it tends to never be ok again
It's all my fu[kin fault, I'm takin all the blame
Now I'm sittin here cryin, my head held down in shame
Sh!t won't ever be the same, I put out the flame
Now you won't even say my name
And I heard you're already gettin other men
If someone else had you I dont know what I'd do then
It's likely I'd go insane, sniff up some cocaine
Chug down some champagne
Then get a gun, and splatter that fu[ker's brains
But the fact remains, I put you through pain
I'm so fu[kin sorry I can feel it in my veins
So now theres only one thing I ask
Is that someday you will take me back
I know it could never be like it was before
Trust me, I swore, I wouldn't hurt you anymore
So with 4 more lines, I'll sum up this whole sh!t
I'll admit, just cuz we didn't fit
I shouldn't of given up and just split
I should of tryed my hardest to make us last
Baby I still do love you, and I hope you love my ass
Chorus
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Good Joe, real nice flow
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Man I cant even post somewhat controversial song here, i thought this was the forum for rappers, to post their songs that express themselves. thats all i was trying to do Hero, i guess if you think its inappropaite though....ur the admin :blabla:
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Well, heres a song I did with my friend jimmy (J-I-M) called Dirty Mindz, i guess you can figure out what its about and uh yeah, its messed up
BE GLAD U DIDNT READ THIS
Did we go to far?
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Come on, in the chatroom, now
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Yo if thats it Damien, Ill battle you
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wow that was a great song guys
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Damn joe is that the best you can do?
Just give rappin up, you must be through
Why do you call yourself J-O-E, Just say it Joe, it ain't a spellin bee
But if thats what you wanna make it, Then thats what it's gonna be
Guess what joe, Your W-A-S-H-E-D U-P
That spells washed up just incase you can't read
Obviously you can't read cuz I said RAP battle dumbass
What you spit was sh!t, go back to rhyme class
I will describe you as a ghost joe cuz you don't exist
Now I must insist this, get some assistance
Cuz you tried to spit a diss but you missed bitch
How about you go and hire yourself a rap tutor
Then mabye you can get off your damn computer
Posted your wack rhymes on this forum
You USED to have fans, but now you've just bored um
Joe ya must think that your a veteran
Well I'm a rookie, and I'm already a better man
I can rip it anyway you wanna me to rip
I can spit the rhyme anyway you want me to spit it
But you're just one dimensional
How people like you is uncomprehendable
Now I've got you hoppin around like a kangaroo
I'm washin you out like a rub-on tatoo
You're rhymes so easy to see through
So heres my advice to you
How about you go and join the Renegade crew
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Alright, heres how real rappers battle, Joe you can spit first if ur ready
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what a great game! Will Vs. The KKK, they should turn it into a movie :2thumbs:
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that was a rematch :lolsign:
Hmmmm well lets get a re-rematch :bat:
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I think I'd like a rematch :tantrum:
Through God's Eyes
in Caught in the Middle
Posted
"Through God's Eyes"
Chorus
Whats it gotta be like to watch us?
Whats it gotta be like not bein able to stop us?
Whats it gotta be like to watch the world goin to hell?
Whats it gotta be like watchin every man as they fell?
Whats it gotta be like bein there as soon as we cry?
Whats it gotta be like through god's eyes?
Verse 1
I'm not sayin theres a god, but what if there is?
What do you think he'd say about the way the world is?
Would he be mad? Would he be sad?
If he made the world, would he regret that he had?
People diein everyday, every which way
Half the time without a reason
Bein the maker of that can't be too pleasin
Half the worlds evil, other halfs just pretendin
Whats it gonna be like when the worlds at its endin
When we're all judged on how we've been livin?
Will you be ready or will you be hidden?
Tryin to hide from god's eyes
As he picks through the lies
That we've all told, it gets old
Bein stabbed in the back by your 'so called' friends
I can't help but wait for this world to 'so called' end
I wanna see what happens with this rappin
Will I ever take off and launch
Or will I be stuck on ground
Lookin around, where's the world at now?
Sometimes its like its over, I'm ready to die
But then I think, what's this like through god's eyes?
Chorus
Verse 2
All my life I've been told that Gods always here
Does that mean he's seen me cry ever tear?
When I wanna die every year?
Has he really been with me this whole time?
Is he sitting next to me while I write this whole rhyme?
But then how you explain all the tragedies and terror
Why wasn't god there?
Why didn't he stop it? Why didn't he care?
Everytime a kid disappears, where did he go?
Or when I was bein pressured into beer, there, did he show?
If there really's a god, then does he really have an explanation?
Did he expect more? Or did we live up to the expectations?
Sometimes I just wonder if theres a purpose
Is goin through hell really worth this?
Bein betrayed every day, they say what they say
Rumor's get spread, lies get scattered
Lives get shattered, as if any of it mattered
Blood's bein splattered
Like paint on a canvas, we can't have this
Is the world just some picture? Is that all we are?
When youre girls there with ya, in the back of your car
Just before you go and mess up your lives
Just think: Hows this look in god's eyes?
Chorus
Verse 3
I ain't even religious, but somehow it happened
A song about god, I find myself rappin
But what would it be like to be the heavleny father?
Everyone on the Earth's ****in up, why even bother?
In the ghetto its just puttin bodies in bags
The kids and momma's in rags
Runnin the street in barefeet
Sweatin in the heat, no money to eat
Do they still have faith in god? I wonder
Or what about a pregnant teenage mother?
Her havin this baby, its ruinin he family's lives
7 months pregnant, and can't even drive
Does that family still pray everyday?
I doubt it, Not sayin to have faith, but look what you are without it
No hopes, no dreams, just the broken seams
Of what you used to call your life, cuz you gave up
Stopped tryin to move ahead and save up
Every paycheck, you blow it, you know it
You're scared there's really a god, come on show it
Now just cuz I don't believe, doesn't mean to follow me
You should always have a dream
Stick with your beliefs, never let anyone take um
Cuz they took um from me, Id watch as theyd break um
It's like I saw my life shatter right in front of me
I was a lonely soul, lost, like God was shunnin me
Don't end up like me, that wouldn't be wise
What would god think, if he was seein it through his eyes?
Chorus