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FreshPrinceFan

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  1. I call this one I wish...

    I Wish

    by: FreshPrinceFan

    (Spoken)

    This is a true story, about a girl who never will get the chances we will, I dedicate this to her...

    Step through the doorway, walk down the aisle

    Got words to say, hoped they'd make you smile

    Wasn't prepared for what I would see

    You in a coffin, layin' peacefully

    Watched as they loaded you into a hurse

    Listened to the preacher, as he spoke the verse

    Followed the car, down the windey road

    The snow, like your body, was oh so cold

    As I stand here now looking over your grave

    I wish somehow, your soul i could save

    Wanna talk to you, see you, be with you, one more time

    But since i can't, I wrote this rhyme

    To express my feelings, say how i feel

    Wish that that night, i controlled the steering wheel

    Maybe if i did, could've missed that deer

    Maybe, just maybe, you'd still be here

    Hope tonight, by God you stand

    Then i'll see you again in the Holy Land

    (Chorus)

    I wish this feeling, would go away

    I wish you still stood here today

    I wish that you could truly see

    What your presence did for me

    I wish you could come back someday

    I wish you never would've gone away

    Nobody knows, but some may relate

    The actions I show, are caused by hate

    Those first nights, I was an absolute wreck

    God held tight, kept my emotions in check

    It's by his Grace, i'm still alive

    From that day, I promised to strive

    To spread his word, help those in pain

    Those whose feelings, are the same

    As mine were, however, i still miss you badly

    Look at your picture and i cry sadly, get mad b

    Why'd this have to happen to me

    I still wish, your beautiful face i could see

    Those of you, who have felt similar pain

    Please do not try to do the same

    As I did, you'll fall, you'll crumble

    You'll have to crawl cause you done stumbled

    Come humble, to the Lord Jesus' feet

    Stay awhile, sit down, c'mon, take seat

    Listen the first time, don't make me repeat

    Though I will if i need to, just to see who

    Will get saved, the way's been paved

    By me twice now, I told you how to get there

    You can't ask how

    I done told you, so i'm done now

    I'ma let the chorus hold it down, now

    (Repeat chorus 2x)

    I wish this feeling, would go away

    I wish you still stood here today

    I wish that you could truly see

    What your presence did for me

    I wish you could come back someday

    I wish you never would've gone away

  2. Hey brakes just wanna say i'm a big fan of yours. Check out my profile and leave me a comment. I wanna be in the music industry as well i'd liked to rap but i could do other things as well.I've written a few rhymes and posted them on willsmith.com. I was wondering if you would check them out and tell me what you think about them and how far you think i could get with rappin'. I would appreciate it man, my name on that site is freshprincefan17 and i would appreciate it if would give some feedback on my rhymes and how far i can get in the industry thanks man. Peace!

    p.s. i love your beatbox rhyme it's awesome

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