Mike Posted September 10, 2008 Report Share Posted September 10, 2008 http://www.zshare.net/audio/185514639178e90d/ so mr souldier beat himself sent me this beat and i just recently finished recording it. and by recently i mean like 10 minuttes ago. (note to souldier beats- im at college and needeed to recieve my mic setup from home, thats why i took a while....that and procrastination) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted September 11, 2008 Report Share Posted September 11, 2008 :speaker1: :speaker1: that was dope man...thanks for takin your time to do this..Mr. iPod Shuffle meet mr. Mike Petrow!! :speaker1: :speaker1: feedback aprecciated guys :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members theinvisibleman Posted September 15, 2008 Members Report Share Posted September 15, 2008 I liked this, the beat was simple and the lyrics had a good spotlight. One thing I would say to work on is keeping your voice at the same volume/intensity throughout the song, there were a few parts where your voice kind of jumped up or got quiet for the occasional word or two. This might be from getting out of breath or moving the mic while recording, and could be fixed by doing verses in chunks or adjusting the volume after you record it and turning it up or down during the parts that need it. Still this was pretty fresh, I liked the ongoing spiderman references and you had some good punchlines and rhyme schemes. peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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