[A little hip hop/rap advice.]

Hi,

Well I'm a huge fan of Will and JJ. Especially Big Willie Style and all the albums post that. But my question is knowing that information, what other artists are out there of a similar style?

[Some stuff I wrote]

Hi everyone,

Well I've written quite a lot of stuff (lyrics) over the past 2 years and I want to share 2 here.

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The first is my only rap style thing I've written. It's not that good and a little too similar to a Will song. But anyways here it is.

It's called "DJ Master"

Woah!

I'm The DJ master

Play it high, keep it up, loud and faster

Ever single creed, race and age

Can find what they want in my cage

Inside is music from around the world

My lone passion to be unfurled

Cause my love for music keeps me alive

So others can see my spirit thrive

I'm Invisible

Finding me after the party, now that's a fable

Always out for that hot new tune

Searching every store under the moon

I never get the time to sit down and relax

Cause I'm living my obsession to the max

I always dis shows like MTV and rage

There's better stuff floating round my cage

Hot new tracks that's my name

DJing parties that's my game

The best music with all the fame

So now ya'll feel ever the same

Woah!

I'm The DJ master

Play it high, keep it up, loud and faster

Ever single creed, race and age

Can find what they want in my cage

Inside is music from around the world

My lone passion to be unfurled

Cause my love for music keeps me alive

So others can see my spirit thrive

Every day they tell me, I'm fulfilling my calling

Sharing my dream with nothing appalling

Then I look back to the good old days

Where I longed to hear that magical phrase

Of a new DJ blazing his beat

An amazing sound, to the ears a treat

But sadly the bands went live

And lost all their ego and their vibe

But this life all about partying

And dancing against the world we're defying

Woah!

I'm The DJ master

Play it high, keep it up, loud and faster

Ever single creed, race and age

Can find what they want in my cage

Inside is music from around the world

My lone passion to be unfurled

Cause my love for music keeps me alive

So others can see my spirit thrive

So now the big question

Should I open up and share my profession

Cause competition is fierce to host each rave

But if you only grooved to one DJ before the grave

You'd better come down to my stage

That underground joint ya'll know as The Cage

Everybody's there, all ages and races

Hanging around to see the famous faces

And one day they'll be happy with me

So I can make that world famous cd

Hot new tracks that's my name

DJing parties that's my game

The best music with all the fame

So now ya'll feel ever the same

Woah!

I'm The DJ master

Play it high, keep it up, loud and faster

Ever single creed, race and age

Can find what they want in my cage

Inside is music from around the world

My lone passion to be unfurled

Cause my love for music keeps me alive

So others can see my spirit thrive

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The 2nd is a little poem I wrote recently. It's called "Enigma".

There is a rose

The sanctuary of the world

A gift for lovers deep

To signify the soul at peace

And when it's time for honesty

Lust like beauty is just skin deep

And so will this enigma flow

Into the heart and make it strong

Will this rose receive neglect

When circumstances take effect

And protect the heart with self defence

From a love so strong it hurts the mind

And everytime the feelings grow

There is a sense of things to come

And so will this enigma flow

An answer for the broken heart

And as this rose is thrown away

The only memory is of thorns

A love erased by tiny things

And feelings so bittersweet

But does this silence change the past

Cause love and war is all that's seen

And so will this enigma flow

To recognise true love's embrace

[Will's State in Rap]

I think Will needs to focus music just much as his lyrics. Cause all of his more successful ones have great music in my opinion. I think 12 or so songs people can really dance to would rock. And yeah I'm not a fan of his duets either. But doing one or two with some big names might give him a little well needed exposure as an artist.

And I think a slick music video alone can't sell a track. Party Starter is one on my favourite Will videos. But the single did not so well here in Aus. Sure there are many other factors involved I know, but I just think Will is at a state musically where he needs his next album to be a great one. And I really hope he can deliver.

[Lost and found]

Actually I agree with all of the above comments. But I think 2 months between singles is enough. Any more and people tend to forget about the album. And stop buying it. And about the singles. Switch was No.1 here in Australia. And I love it. It has a great beat to dance to in a club or something. A great first choice. And Party Starter was the ideal follow up single. Love the video from it. Should have been released a little earlier but anyways, better late than never. And for the third single I always wanted Here He Comes for it. In my opinion much better than Tell Me Why.