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Loco

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Its just one verse that i wrote, after i read a post of one of y'All!

Back in da days, hip hop was a thing of love and ****,
Only hip-hoppers were lovin it,
but that fact changed, it’s not like this no more,
today you hearing hip hop in every disco yo,
it goes commercial, and dat fact destroys the game,
you here ‘em rap on the radio cos’ they love fame,
themselves and the money they make,
but they don’t care about hip hop just ‘bout how many honeys the take.
Back in da days It was about who can rock a party right,
About the beats and who’s the best on the mic,
Now days it’s like my chain’s 2 million dollars worth,
And about that fact who got the biggest house on earth,
I don’t know if everything’s still so aight,
I suppose it ain’t, so maybe I am aight,
I ain’t understand that but maybe i am wrong,
Maybe it’s aight and I get dissed for that song.





(it's lyricly not on top but i felt like "write it down and show 'em")


One Luv Fo' HipHop

peace Loco
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Hey you made some good points in that verse, it could have been lyrically better but it was still a solid verse! :thumb:
P.S.-Check out the verse that I posted a lil' while ago here on the board about the state of hip-hop, I'm gonna bring it back to the top so y'all newer members could read it.
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Yeah, reading it through one more time could have smoothed it out a bit (for instance don't use swear words to rhyme with), but you've got some good arguments in there.

I think you would get more replies if you let other people know how their verses are too. Remember that not everyone will be massively persuaded to rate your lyrics if you don't rate theirs.

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