Big Willie Posted November 20, 2006 Report Share Posted November 20, 2006 (edited) I havent posted anything in here for a long while, so this is my latest effort. Concept is pretty easy to grab, basically it the fight to stay positive through all the drama and hate in the world that a person can become pressured with. Feedback greatly appreciated. Big Willie - Keep Refusing I’m caught in a deception of where my life is leading Caught in the process of progression, whilst I’m bleeding From the inside, I’m paralyzed with the deep confusion Keep pursuing my dreams, but fate just keeps refusing How can I progress when my shoulders carry lead weight? Problems on my mind prevent me from thinking straight I’m stuck in my existence wondering what’ll happen next Wonder what the future brings, what should I expect? Fulfilled in my destiny, but still I’m searching for more Climbed ladders to find answer but cant get of the floor Becomes a mission just to be living in this world today I feel imprisoned from decisions that I’m yet to make Because every corner that I take just reveals more hate Searching for a clear path, but get the feeling it’s too late Congested with questions of why the worlds depressing Events out of my control got my soul second guessing Why do bombs have to drop? Lives lost through spite It’s the lessons that only we can teach ourselves in life The whole globe involved, I’m feeling like the outsider Left out in the cold and believing the worlds on a timer It’s a different concept for me because I’m a positive guy See the cup as half full and always look on the bright side But sometimes when you’re mind is playing tricks on you It’s hard to compile ya thoughts it’s hard to pull through Racking my brain, wondering how can I cope with it all Keep searching for clues, the light at the end of the tunnel When all the while I feel like somebody flicked the switch And my last chance of success is cursed and bewitched I can’t move forward, when less logic is all that disperses How drug dealers earn more cash than doctors and nurses It’s worthless; keep thinking that something has to give How can a life get taken before it’s had a chance to live? People in an illusion that all things happen for a reason But no theory in the world will ever get me believing That a small child dying will end up good for the globe When murderers and rapists acts just remain unsolved My beliefs dissolve its something my brain cant process With all this going on its no wonder we feel this stress But none the less, it’s important to stay positive in life So forthcoming generations can uphold what’s right Coz even as bad as it may seem this isn’t the conclusion Fate was pulling me back… now it’s me that’s refusing I’m pushing on through; keep my head raised in the sky Keep my sights set to positive as life’s compass guides Me to the fate I’m pursuing the happiness that awaits me I’m certain its coming I just don’t know what the day be Negative people try to drag me down, I’m progressing still Because if I don’t believe in myself then no-one else will You try and slow me down; I’ll walk by and keep grinning When you displaying hate it just confirms that I’m winning Your words seem hard, but your defence is set up wrong Hating on me and trying to remove me from where I belong But what you don’t realise is that when you start dissing You’re just adding fuel to the fire, injecting ammunition For me to then purposely demolish your self integrity And it leaves your words to burn in hell corrosively You’ll learn from this mistake, live by your own fate You showed me I’ve made it, by expressing your hate Life will throws things at you, people will try and deceive What they say means nothing, it’s powered by jealousy My boundaries can’t be broken, my morals are infinite My desire of progression becomes sparked by your fight I know it’s hard to continue when tears fall like our future And with the hate we bring, even winners turn to losers Don’t confuse the issue or satisfy the ones that diss you Dust off ya should free of all that you’ve been through Put one foot at a time and march you’re way to success Keep reaching for your dream, nothing more, nothing less People will say it can’t be done, say that nobody can do it Then turn around and interrupt the person that’s doing it They’re just ignorant with egos, too eager to dismiss They think if they aint skilled enough then no-one else is Pile on the negative feedback, coz I’m not going away Find yourself another victim coz this one’s here to stay Copyright 2006 © Edited February 17, 2007 by Big Willie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted November 20, 2006 Report Share Posted November 20, 2006 This is very good. The last few weeks I felt a lil like that. I definitly feel it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted November 20, 2006 Report Share Posted November 20, 2006 Very very good! i like the rhyme scheme! Great job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Willie Posted November 20, 2006 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2006 Cheers guys, it means a lot that you like it :thumbsup: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted November 21, 2006 Report Share Posted November 21, 2006 "It’s a different concept for me because I’m a positive guy See the cup as half full and always look on the bright side" - I thought these lines were particularly cool. "Fate was pulling me back… now it’s me that’s refusing" - That was a really dope ending. It's a great verse overall. A good length and honest subject matter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted November 21, 2006 Report Share Posted November 21, 2006 you did a very good job as usual BW :thumbsup: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Willie Posted February 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2007 (edited) Whats good y'all, just letting ya know I've added another verse. This verse is basically the flip around of how to defend yourself when people hate on you and when you feel like a victim. Let me know what ya think. Thanks for the comments so far. :thumbsup: Edited February 17, 2007 by Big Willie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace Of Spades Posted March 30, 2007 Report Share Posted March 30, 2007 (edited) hey man, its better late than never for my reply. But you killin it willie, i feel da song. you mad me stop back while i was reading on this line "It’s worthless; keep thinking that something has to give How can a life get taken before it’s had a chance to live?" You killed it. Keep on doin man, an ill see u at the top Edited March 30, 2007 by Ace Of Spades Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cookies Posted March 30, 2007 Report Share Posted March 30, 2007 HEy stank. I really enjoyed reading this very uplifting piece. and this has been my motto for quite some tyme... tho its as real as can be.. Negative people try to drag me down, I’m progressing still Because if I don’t believe in myself then no-one else will Keep writing, and expressing yourself... because you do that very well... xoxo, cookie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted March 30, 2007 Report Share Posted March 30, 2007 Pile on the negative feedback, coz I’m not going away Find yourself another victim coz this one’s here to stay Hell yeah. Keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Hero1 Posted May 1, 2007 Admin Report Share Posted May 1, 2007 that was great man! that reminds me of something i'd write we must have similar thoughts :3-laugh3: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Willie Posted May 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2007 Cheers guys, I appreciate it :thumbsup: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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