I'll Be There For You

[J-o-e]

Hey guys, haven't dropped anything in a while, been a bit busy, so here's a song that i wrote jus an hour ago, i hope ya'll like it, cause every word is the truth about this girl i like....

I'll Be There For U

I’ll Be There 4 U, These 5 Words I’ll swear 2 U

When U Breathe, I’ll Be the Air 4 U

I’ll Be There 4 U, I’d Even Die 4 U

Still the Sun from the Sky 4 U

Words Can’t Say What Love Can Do

I’ll Be There 4 U….

Never knew that loving u would be a curse

Every time I talk to you, you know it hurts

I try and act fake, it doesn’t matter anymore

Start to think about why I do this 2 myself for

Never knew that love would hit this bad

I try and cheer myself up, but I’m still sad

Blind love is true love, that’s what I say

So when we’re old and grey, love u anyway

That’s only if u still want to be best friends

And I promise, no more dumb **** like this again

Unless u feel the same way, only in time

Maybe…Someday baby u can be all mine

My hearts confused, and so is my brain

Without accepted my love would drive me insane

I try and believe it would be, it could be

God damn girl, honestly it jus should be

U keep saying we’ve been thru this before

When friendship isn’t what I want, I want more..

I’ll Be There 4 U, These 5 Words I’ll swear 2 U

When U Breathe, I’ll Be the Air 4 U

I’ll Be There 4 U, I’d Even Die 4 U

Still the Sun from the Sky 4 U

Words Can’t Say What Love Can Do

I’ll Be There 4 U….

Need to understand, why I’m not Ur man

But loving you is all that I only really can

I don’t have a lot of money, but I’m funny

So many shots in the heart can only numb me

Please believe, that I would never forget u

And If I ever do, I never want to upset u

How can I explain my actions and what I did?

At school I thought u would have my kid

But that dreams gone, so that’s why I write this song

I know what I did was whack, I’m in the wrong

I jus hope in time, u can forgive me so easily

I’m not like Ur ex jus wanting u 2 please me

Not the type of guy that would make u cry

Love hurts but baby nobody knows why

Asked u at the wrong time once, I did it again

So many things to say from the tip of my pen

I don’t mind if u let me down gently

But I can’t deny that girl u jus hurt me…

I’ll Be There 4 U, These 5 Words I’ll swear 2 U

When U Breathe, I’ll Be the Air 4 U

I’ll Be There 4 U, I’d Even Die 4 U

Still the Sun from the Sky 4 U

Words Can’t Say What Love Can Do

I’ll Be There 4 U….

I’ll be there for u, from sun up to sun down

Ur my princess and queen but without a crown

U deserve diamonds, pearls and a necklace

But I know u don’t like me being so recklace

I’ll cry u a river, and then build u the Tag Mohall

You’ve got my number; it’s only a phone call

I’ll give u anything in this world that u need

I’ll do u right so don’t worry about my greed

I have things on my mind that I need get straight

And the fact is that is that we don’t even date

I didn’t understand why u couldn’t b my man

I’ll be there 4 u, at this moment it’s all that I can

I’d die 4 u, I would cry 4 u, never lie 2 u

And when u can’t do something, I’d try 4 u

I’d love to treat u like a real man, but it’s hard

So many mistakes, now that we’re both scarred

But at the end of time, could u ever be mine?

Been lonely a long time, never see something so fine…

[Turntable]

I like it. Its deep.

I try and believe it would be, it could be

God damn girl, honestly it jus should be

U keep saying we’ve been thru this before

When friendship isn’t what I want, I want more..

I like this.

[J-o-e]

Thanks man!!

[mfuqua23]

Even tho it's a personal and realistic song, I think some parts of the verses are off. Like, the lines aren't strong enough or the ideas may not be clear.

"And I promise, no more dumb **** like this again" - There's no way that this could reference to what was said in earlier lines. Like you're promising her something that really is only affecting you.

"So many things to say from the tip of my pen" - This was a cool line

"Ur my princess and queen but without a crown" - It's aight, but technically, a queen holds higher reign than a princess, so she can't be both. The line would be fine without the "princess".

"I’ll cry u a river, and then build u the Tag Mohall" - Another one liner I thought was cool. Although, I never heard of the Tag Mohall, I get an idea from this song.

"I didn’t understand why u couldn’t b my man" - How did you miss this Joe? Unless of course you change your prefence while writing the song.

I think these lyrics a bit below average, especially when compared to your 'usual'.

[Luigie]

it was good, but aint your usual quality

[Pakalicous]

I didn’t understand why u couldn’t b my man

I’ll be there 4 u, at this moment it’s all that I can

I really hope you meant "I did'nt understand why I could'nt be your man".

Rest of the song is tight..

peace

Edited August 8, 2006 by Pakalicous

[J-o-e]

thanks ya'll, i'm sorry if my lyrics aint better than the rest of them, its jus im in a state of mind at the moment, like a girl i like found out i liked her which i didnt wana happen, so i jus wrote what i feel wit this one...

Pakalicous: yes i did mean that...I will correct it lol