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Broken Word

so much to say, yet the words won't emerge

I must piece them together,and help them converge

find common ground so I can get back to "self"

for being without words is affecting my health

forget doubting thomas, because now i'm doubting me

trapped within thoughts, can't find my way free

a million questions in my mind...

when did I break the ties that bind?

what if my rhymes weren't as strong?

my verse wasn't quite as long?

it's like an ongoing cycle of before and after

but with every bit of pain, comes some form of love and laughter

i put pen to paper, and let spill my heart

and the final piece of the puzzle is like a brilliant work of art

a materpiece in the mold of DaVinci or Van Gogh

I put out good karma, still I reap what I sow

this is just a phase, and eventually it passes

so I can continue on my quest to captivate the masses

if I were a rapper...yeah well... we've been there before

so I hope and I pray that there's much more in store

-ash

Edited by MissAshley
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for being without words is affecting my health - For you and writers alike. I like that line.

a million questions in my mind...

when did I break the ties that bind?

what if my rhymes weren't as strong?

my verse wasn't quite as long? - One of the things I love is when questions are put in to make the audience think. I tend to do that a lot myself when I write.

if I were a rapper...yeah well... we've been there before

so I hope and I pray that there's much more in store - Really nice ending, but I have a question about it. What exactly did you mean when you said "we've been there before"? How did that situation play out?

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