ash trey Posted April 17, 2006 Report Share Posted April 17, 2006 I know I don't really compare to any/most lyricists here like FuQ, Joe or even Lerkot and Tiffy lol.But here goes nothing....Its called T.R.E.Y Soon as the bass starts kickin', And Trey starts spittin', Ur ears are exposed to my hip-hop mission, Beating suka emcees into submisssion, U can make noise for all da wack rhymers since dey only pumpin' def beats, But when I get on da mic I wanna see da mumbling gets ceased, I wish they could privatise sum of these public emceez, I walk up to ur screaming ass-Say "easy duz it" and leave, Cuz when u spittin', U forgettin' theres supposed to be an art form u reppin', Cuz u dishonuring the real artists and veterans, Believe me its tricky as said by D and the reverend, But my skills stay higher than the rest like Bob Marley, So I just kick back and spit rap classics like La Di Da Di, Suddenly everbody wants to feel hard spit raps and act up, But I don't see skills like it ain't time for a rap-up Chorus x 2 Its da T to the R to the E to the Y, U can try but u can't get by, Lyrical skill dat u cannot deny (Slick Rick Sample)- and when I roc upon da mic I roc da mic right Im a lyrical documentary I give u straight facs and u havt to take it, U exhibit nothing but fakeness u animated, Im a michrophone fiend straight up rap fanatic, And u know its legit since I studied its science and mathematics, Im on advanced calculus u don't understand basic addition, And thats why my lyrical poweress is hard to envision, I'm da perfect design, I equal an MC squared da Einstein of rhyme, U not inclined to find, More skill at a black smiths, Ur a trick and a phony like an actress, U need to rethink ur tactics, Take some time to practice, Cuz da fact is, It takes more than gift wrap and ribbions to outrap this Chorus x 2 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ok I bragged a little too much on the track :lolsign: . Any feedback :stickpoke: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted April 17, 2006 Report Share Posted April 17, 2006 It's a good track for the first time u've ever done one like this, And In my school all I done at lunch was freestyle with some friends, So i'm probably alot more used to taking a beating or giving one, haha but keep it up Trey man....good job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Its JP Posted April 17, 2006 Report Share Posted April 17, 2006 Was this really your first effort at writing? For a beginner that was very good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted April 17, 2006 Report Share Posted April 17, 2006 Great job dude! Keep it up! I agree thats very good for your first time writing. Oh....and you can never brag too much on a track! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luigie Posted April 17, 2006 Report Share Posted April 17, 2006 Dats cool man, i liked the first verse more :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ash trey Posted April 17, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2006 Thanks y'all! @ Brakes and JP- It was my first effort as far as seriously writing something down but I keep thinking up rhymes and ideas for songs all da time! I guess since this was my first real effort I can only get better right? Ok now any negative feedback? Positive feedback is welcome too lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted April 18, 2006 Report Share Posted April 18, 2006 I liked it, I love to brag. Me and Lerkot...lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ash trey Posted April 18, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2006 I liked it, I love to brag. Me and Lerkot...lol :rofl: U know I meant no offence there right? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turntable Posted April 21, 2006 Report Share Posted April 21, 2006 Ofcourse I know. You`r to scared to insult me :lolsign: jk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-o-e Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 I'd Insult u:lolsign: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted April 22, 2006 Report Share Posted April 22, 2006 I like it ash trey! Nice use of vocab and similes. Keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trey Posted April 23, 2006 Report Share Posted April 23, 2006 That's interesting that that's your first effort, nice song man! :1-cool: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loco Posted April 23, 2006 Report Share Posted April 23, 2006 Great job Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ash trey Posted April 30, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2006 Thanks Y'all! Yeah I don't wanna diss Turntable........I ain't scared I just feel sorry for him because everyone takes the piss outta him lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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