mfuqua23 Posted July 20, 2004 Report Share Posted July 20, 2004 Yo y'all. II got a new song 4 y'all. It'z called "Str8 Fire". It'z 4 this soundtrack called Dog Soldiers. Hope y'all enjoy it. Cuz I worked hard on it 2 make sure it was right. [url="http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/fuqmusic.htm"]http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/fuqmusic.htm[/url] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigted Posted July 20, 2004 Report Share Posted July 20, 2004 I enjoy it! Your lyrics sound clearer than any other song you do so far! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted July 20, 2004 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2004 Yeah. This one, I did wit my head phones and I had 2 sit 4 like half of da day to mix it down right. My audio mixer is gay. Appreciate ya feedback man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted July 26, 2004 Report Share Posted July 26, 2004 Sorry i didn't reply to this sooner man!! I completely missed it!! I like it but here are a few pointers: 1. I think your flow needs a bit of work. You got the lyrics, you got your own style but the way you deliver them could be a bit better. But the more you rap, the more this will get better. Its not even something you consciously think about. It just happens!! 2. Use original instrumentals. I know its easy and less hassle to use other peoples music, but it adds that touch of originality if you use your own. I know this is the way a lot of rappers start out but it's not something you should get into the habit of doing 3. Clarity. Some parts i didn't quite get. If your gonna record a song, make it the best song you've ever done. You don't to keep re-recording songs because some people didn't get it or understand it! Believe me i've been there and its [b]VERY[/b] tedious!! Other than that it was real good! Keep doing your thing man!! :music: :thumb: :music: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted July 26, 2004 Report Share Posted July 26, 2004 Wise words fom Brakes. But yeah, its kinda catchy so it's cool. :dancingcool: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted July 26, 2004 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2004 Brakes - ok, yeah i can do those things. i know how it works. thanks. Prince - how was it catchy? glad u thought t was cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Prince Posted August 4, 2004 Report Share Posted August 4, 2004 I just think that the simplistic way you did it, and your flow sounded natural... Not complicated, just straight, and I like that... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfuqua23 Posted August 4, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2004 Thanks. If U read the description of da song, U'd really catch on 2 what it'z about. Yes, flow seems 2 be one of my strong points. Many people have told me that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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