Mike Posted November 24, 2005 Report Share Posted November 24, 2005 i forgot to post this one....whoops. i think its a nice ending track. not the best lyrically but maybe you guys think differnt. its only like a verse, so its supposed to be rapped slow. originally it was only a skit, just the ending part in parenthesis, but then i decided i didnt want the last track to be a skit when i could write on the topic. Writers Block Written by Concept My pencil broken many times with frustration Too much energy, my brains retaliation I can’t think, I have nothing more to say I push myself and get nothing all day I want to, I have to, and I have to prove my skill I’ll break my hand writing, to get my dream fulfilled People say I have a gift, future album on the shelf Im finding it hard to compete with myself People tell me to freestyle and I never do Why should I waste my energy on a stranger like you? Energy I need, wasted time and emotion If I didn’t waste that practice I could flow like the ocean What do I lose when I rhyme for a stranger? Spitting a wack freestyle put my rep in danger Tryin to get better, learn from my mistakes Re write my sh!t, never take breaks (Pencil writing noises, scribble it out then crumble the paper) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted November 24, 2005 Report Share Posted November 24, 2005 Clever lines.. 'Why should I waste my energy on a stranger like you?' true, true.. Good write once again, looking forward 2 the album. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Da Brakes Posted November 24, 2005 Report Share Posted November 24, 2005 Thats real nice! Now get recording!!!! :lolsign: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members trixX Posted November 25, 2005 Members Report Share Posted November 25, 2005 thats dope.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Posted December 3, 2005 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2005 (edited) I ADDED ANOTHER VERSE WHICH I THINK FITS SO WELL. INSPIRATION IS THE VERSES'S TITLE.....I DONT WANNA MAKE IT A SEPERATE TRACK AND I WANTED TO SAY THAT STUFF. SO IM MAKING IT A HIDDEN TRACK AND IT FITS PERFECT....WRITERS BLOCK/INSPIRATION..GET IT? Writers Block Written by Concept My pencil broken many times with frustration Too much energy, my brains retaliation I cant think, I have nothing more to say I push myself and get nothing all day I want to, I have to, and I have to prove my skill Ill break my hand writing, to get my dream fulfilled People say I have a gift, future album on the shelf Im finding it hard to compete with myself People tell me to freestyle and I never do Why should I waste my energy on a stranger like you? Energy I need, wasted time and emotion If I didnt waste that practice I could flow like the ocean What do I lose when I rhyme for a stranger? Spitting a wack freestyle put my rep in danger Tryin to get better, learn from my mistakes Re write my sh*t, never take breaks (Pencil writing noises, scribble it out then crumble the paper) .................(Hidden track) My inspiration While Im sittin so patiently Hearin mcs that I could never be Heres some sh!t about the best three The first ones a given 2pac rhymes with the best precision The lyrical master, poet, the best decision Never go wrong in my prayers im wishin He will rest in peace And Ill be on his next album release Rapper number two, you coulda knew Thats right eminem The other white rapper that gets down with them Rapper that makes rambo seem feminine The lyrics that could possibly be a sin Controversial state of mind Hopin I can have the same success with mine The final rapper you would never guess In my mind the best of the rest Old school rapper and still rappin since Rapper number three is the fresh prince Believe me, yes I like Will smith And jazzy the man who he rocks with The man I have endless respect for The man who in fact opened the door Won first rap Grammy and still got sh!t Rarely curse ever and still makes a hit A rapper and actor, my two dreams Other rappers are my inspiration it seems Edited December 5, 2005 by WILL IS ILL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bart5 Posted December 4, 2005 Report Share Posted December 4, 2005 Awesome Writers block song. That is tight. Also the hidden track is GREAT. I like the ryhmes you wrote bout JJFP. :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Posted December 4, 2005 Report Share Posted December 4, 2005 nice..very nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PeaceAngel Posted December 4, 2005 Report Share Posted December 4, 2005 That's really good, I like that! Nice job man! :2thumbs: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbfprince Posted December 5, 2005 Report Share Posted December 5, 2005 Tight hidden track! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Members maddblock Posted December 14, 2005 Members Report Share Posted December 14, 2005 you a g Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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