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Now let me take a second because it ain’t easy

Don’t think I only went out with you to please me

Girl I’m not that sleazy you were more to me than that

I don’t know what happened I geuss I just snapped

Even before I rapped I knew that you had a lot of care

When we both had nothing you always had something to share

Feel like this ain’t fair I know because you didn’t care bout clothes

I geuss that **** happens wasn’t that the way it goes

Believe me I ain’t no average joe, and I done shown you

You was my queen and on that note I done throned you

Talking on the phone you was the best thing that happened

That was back then before we both started snappin’

Rapping at each others throat because we didn’t think

I still remember the first day we met with your blink

I had to have a drink. Maybe it’s the time for the tissues

I am sorry if your piroities and mine was misued

Lets just say I had issues, With that note this is a letter

Just to say that nobody ever loved me better

A real drama setter, taught me everything that I knew

She made me happy every time that I felt blue….

Baby girl this is a love letter

Just to say no one done me better

You was my girl my best friend

I would of done all that again…

At times I still think about you while looking into night

Look ahead because I know that your future is bright

Let you into an insight, had me wrapped around a finger

Had a beautiful voice still don’t know why she was a singer

Geuss she was a stinger, but please just listen to me

I’m telling you this wasn’t the man I planned to be

I wish you could see, made me go all crazy

You were more to me than just my pretty baby

A lady, that’s why I really do hate to leave ya

But at the end of the long road I believe ya

When I call pick up the receiver. I wasn’t pretending

I wasn’t breaking the rules I geuss I was bending

Your love I wasn’t lending even if you think that I steal

Take a second to look in my eyes and think isit real?

Remember time will heal, first time I saw you was so hot

I remember that I didn’t feel like I even had a shot

I geuss it was a not, but then you proved me so wrong

I know this is a road of life but realistically its not that long

Just remember that when you happy and give us a smile

We know that everythings ok and its going to be all worthwile…

Baby girl this is a love letter

Just to say no one done me better

You was my girl my best friend

I would of done all that again…

Now let me take everyone back into time

A day in the past that you was actually mine

No time to rhyme I had to think back and it shocked me

Your love didn’t do anything but it rocked me

Like you socked me, hit me in the face

I geuss it’s true Im nothing but a pure disgrace

Tied the shoes to my lace. You was the phone who was down

Who never backed down and still acted like a clown

Put away that frown. If I hurt you I apologyse

But if I was still with you I would be living a lie

Deep inside I cry but deep down my names on the pavement

To women anywhere this is a true and deep statement

Its my creatment so please baby girl keep ya head up

Even if your worried bout all of them cops whos currupt

So wasup? If I rang you in a few years would you still talk

Baby I can pick you up and then we can go for a walk

If im not laying in chalk you know the gangster risks

But always had my back and never meant to disturb ****

That’s why I quit. I didn’t want you to be in the life I lead

Full of greed but I loved you more than my unborn seed….

Baby girl this is a love letter

Just to say no one done me better

You was my girl my best friend

I would of done all that again…

What Ya'll Think?

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"I don’t know what happened I geuss I just snapped"

"That was back then before we both started snappin’" - It's nothing seriously wrong with this, but it probably helps if U use the same word to end a line, they shouldn't be so far apart. If possible, try to find another fitting word to describe what you both did. Same idea with the "rapping/rapped"

"I still remember the first day we met with your blink"- what is blink? I'm not too familar if that's a slang term.

"Had a beautiful voice still don’t know why she was a singer" - this is an example of what I'm about to get at. Most of this song is str8 to the girl. You should make it that entirely. Sometimes, you do what to speak out to your audience about the situation, but in a song like this, I really think it'd be best if you didn't do that. It just pulls the song together better.

Other than the points I made, it was fine.

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"I still remember the first day we met with your blink" - same thing as FuQ

I agree with making the song directly towards the girl, otherwise it's heartfelt and very nice. :yeah:

^^ I agree with what they said, but other than that, those were really good lyrics!

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