I Promise- Not done someone wanna hop on

[Fresh-Ta-Def]

if you wanan do the 2nd verse lemme know

Chorus:

i promise you i will not let you go

i promise it will not turn out like befo

i promise ill love you till the day that i die

i promise that when i look up i see yoh face in the sky

Verse 1:

i see yoh face in the sky, i see mine in yoh eyes/

smile so wide, when you tell me your mine/

you so fine, im glad loving you is not a crime/

if so i'd be doing time, insted of wrighting you this rhyme/

you'se a dime, your my reason, my, thoughts, an my inspration/

i do this for you boo, the thought of you do, make me lose my concentration/

the temptation, of me an you on vacation/

beautiful conversations, so long ive been waitin/

other girls hatin, i hate being in that situation/

buh i swear to god if you asked id give you the right explination/

where i went what i did excatly what you want to know/

the love between family can't add up baby i love you mo'/

i love you till death do us part ill stand by your side/

me and you baby yoh Bonnie an Clyde/

the new year i promise two thousand five/

Chorus:

i promise you i will not let you go

i promise it will not turn out like befo

i promise ill love you till the day that i die

i promise that when i look up i see yoh face in the sky

[J-o-e]

I liked that Fresh-Ta-Def, I can write a second verse for that but no audio:(

[Fresh-Ta-Def]

alright Wright away, Well put up the lyrics

[kbfprince]

Nice song.. you seem to be really good with choruses! :wickedwisdom:

[Fresh-Ta-Def]

Well chorus's are an essiential part of the song so I try