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POWER OF A SMILE


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THE POWER OF A SMILE

A long time I thought that sky is the limit

But now I know it better, love is the limit

'Cause if you are loved by the person you love to death

You don't even know limits, you don't want to rest

You feel untouchable just the way she smiles

The way she smiles at you when you kiss her

It's pure magic when your lips hit her's

And you are happy just because she's with you

Nothing else matters, just that she's with you

The world is perfect with her head on your shoulder

Something to die for, so you became a soldier

A soldier with heart, a soldier who cries

A soldier with that much passion, that love never dies

At that moment you know the power of a smile

And you miss it if you don't see it for a while...

Hope you like it! I know some lines are not that good but I wanted to say these things in that moment so I don't think about a better solution. Let me know what you think.

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"Something to die for, so you became a soldier" - I instantly thought of 2pac when I saw that line. That poem is great. That's the cool things about poems; they can take on any rhythm you give them.

Yes, Tupac is a big inspiration for me, I really like those lines:

The world is perfect with her head on your shoulder

Something to die for, so you became a soldier

A soldier with heart, a soldier who cries

A soldier with that much passion, that love never dies

Some true stuff and it sounds great I think

:1-say-yes:

Anyway, thanks for the feedback Joe and mfuqua!

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