Sometime

[J-o-e]

What ya'll think? Postive and Negative feedback welcome

Sometime

I'm not the only one who tried to make a plan in life

Get a good job. Steadily stressing to get a wife

But i'm young and i've got plently of time for that

Not dumb but haters keep thinking that i'm whack

Try to brush them off but most of the time it's hard

Emotions wrote inside a small little birthday card

Sometime i wished that life could be so simple

I can't describe how i feel just with a pencil

Need a mic so I can tell ya'll how i really feel

Shootings guns just to make yourself feel real?

I'm asking you all now how are ya living?

Prision just because we are all used to sinning

If i was america's ten wanted can i be fly?

Is that the real reason why you want me to die?

I geuss i'm the guy destined to be on my own

Living life to edge just because i'm simply alone

I wanted to know where my life was really goin

No mo' slanging drugs, no more never knowin

Look i'm being truthful and sue me if you must

Your best friend that you've grown to trust

Even at the start we still fell abit apart

You was my dawg that's why it's top of the chart

If i could climb the highest moutin. I would

Any fool got beef with you, remember you should

Set the record straight and don't care who lost it

Just remember the late nights completly exhasuted

Somtime we wise that this beef could be stop

We don't care what music that they drop

Appreichate don't learn to hate. Should you

Live the life that's what you had to go through

This verse is to the girl who can make me blush

Nothing but puppy love, a school girl crush

But it seemed at the time that was nonsense

You played defence and I was on the offence

I keep it nice and simple with the tip of my pencil

Whats a worse is that ya scared to wake up with a pimple

When ya left me i thought there was a score to settle

You can't leave the stove on for too long it will blow the kettle

She put the pedal to the metal when she walked out the door

I thought she was true but didn't see that chick anymore

Sometimes i thought that it be cool to land a deal

Feeling the top of the world but did it seem so real?

I can't think what i want to write coz it don't seem tight

waking up in the middle of the night feelin so light

Getting so high but deepdown in side i'm so low

Yeah i can flow but does that really matter now tho?

I'm sick of sayin i hate beef when i just encourage it

Looking back at my homies they didnt like ****

So i figure to myself why think about pullin the trigger

When the death tolls mean **** and they call me a wigger

I wake up at night because that i had a bad dream

I thought the showbizz was great but it just seems

That thinking one thing and meaning the other

So i ask my mother why's beef on the streets? greasy lovers

But there's no point me getting worked up or is there?

I had the second half of the pair but she didn't care

But it seems that people only really understand the facts

So step back and let the DJ choose the ****ing tracks

Somtime we wise that this beef could be stop

We don't care what music that they drop

Appreichate don't learn to hate. Should you

Live the life that's what you had to go through

Let me take a sec to tell you my point of view

Apologies are useless there way overdue

Living life as good as i could on the block

Homies can run up on you with the glock

Or try to sneak up on you with a knife

Threaten to kill you and your wife

But to me doesn't that sound like a threat?

Living the rest of your life working off a debt

I watched life sail right by me and i didnt give a ****

Stuck in rap and drugs i needed to quit

Having trouble with cops in certain divisions

Some mistakes bad but i'm sure i made the right decision

I can't see when i'm driving, it's too mysty

Didn't want none of my fisty, Dudes getting pissy

+Can I Live+ Properly with all of this stress

Tired of kissing ass trying to impress

I do the things that matter to me, **** rap

Had 1 more chance i'll give it all back

As a child i used to wake up and see my momma

Asked why is there so much beef and drama

She said to me death is the pleasure of life

Willing to have anything, that's the sacrifce

If this does get listened to, It be way over budget

Put a Bil behind it so nobody can touch it

So before i complain more and be in neglection

Only thing i've ever been afraid is rejection

Somtime we wise that this beef could be stop

We don't care what music that they drop

Appreichate don't learn to hate. Should you

Live the life that's what you had to go through

:gettinjiggywitit:

[mfuqua23]

I can't describe how i feel just with a pencil - nice expression

It's a decently nice rhyme.

[Snouf]

I can't describe how i feel just with a pencil - nice expression

It's a decently nice rhyme.

Yeah, I like this rhyme too!

What you think about this little change?

Sometime i wished that life could be so simple

I can't describe how i feel without usin' a pencil

Edited October 17, 2005 by Snouf

[J-o-e]

I will deffo take that into consideration, thanks for your views guys!

[PeaceAngel]

I can't describe how i feel just with a pencil

I think you should switch "just with" so it says "I can't describe how i feel with just a pencil." It seems to flow better that way, in my opinion. The lyrics were really good! Great way to describe emotions! :2thumbs:

[Da Brakes]

I can't describe how i feel just with a pencil

I think you should switch "just with" so it says "I can't describe how i feel with just a pencil." It seems to flow better that way, in my opinion. The lyrics were really good! Great way to describe emotions! :2thumbs:

I agree! It sounds better that way!

[J-o-e]

It's been changed thanks for ur views